Another Bullsh!t teen poem. (865 hits)
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Submitted by Bobbie <blue_cookies.at.hotmail.com> (View user info) at 2003-09-19 17:09:26 EDT
This soft white cream I love to gulp.
I'll slurp down everylast drop.
I love it warm and I love it cold,
But it's horrid when it's crusty and old.
This wonderful treat quenches my thirst.
I'm always in line to get it first.
It feels so smooth against my lips.
It spurts out from an amazing tip.
I can't think of anything more grand.
It's by far the best taste in all the land.
Ex-lovers and men alike have given this wonderful gift to me.
I've swallowed so much, it's all I can see.
I love it when it goes down as smooth as silk.
What the hell are you thinking? This is an Ode to Milk!
I worte this. I hope it makes you smile!
~Poop
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Submitted by Persecuted (user info) at 2003-11-30 15:50:56 EST (#)
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I worte this
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Well good for you.
Submitted by Murphy1844 (user info) at 2003-09-19 17:45:40 EDT (#)
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death.
Submitted by FullOfShit (user info) at 2003-09-19 17:43:03 EDT (#)
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I bet you love A nice load on the chin huh?
Submitted by poop_monkey (user info) at 2003-09-19 17:31:16 EDT (#)
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Unfortunatelty, I did read your poem and to be blunt, Poe is my home boy. We go and sip on 40's together. :-D Annabelle Lee is my ho.
I live in Oklahomo. Go me.
Do you like cheese?
Submitted by Nosferatu (user info) at 2003-09-19 17:30:35 EDT (#)
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i AM the bullshit teen http://www.ubersite.com/cgi-bin/message_get.cgi?message=1063760134931620669
Submitted by The.Masked.Assailant (user info) at 2003-09-19 17:18:26 EDT (#)
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did you read my poem?
http://www.ubersite.com/cgi-bin/message_get.cgi?message=1063936370529914294
Submitted by The.Masked.Assailant (user info) at 2003-09-19 17:16:16 EDT (#)
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do you live in chicago by any chance?
Submitted by The.Masked.Assailant (user info) at 2003-09-19 17:15:30 EDT (#)
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rock on!
Submitted by The.Masked.Assailant (user info) at 2003-09-19 17:15:19 EDT (#)
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Submitted by The.Masked.Assailant (user info) at 2003-09-19 17:15:09 EDT (#)
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that is better than the even my poetry! fuck yeah!