Your Mother Broke Our Hearts Son (22236 hits)
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Submitted by insanethemind (View user info) at 2003-09-25 14:42:37 EDT
A bill in, 25c back. Ding, time to sit. The windows are open and there is no a/c. He makes his way to the back and plops down. Looking around, he sees a few people riding, but notices no familiar faces. Maybe they are there, but he is concentrating, anticipating, longing for the moment when his task is complete.
A bill in, 25c back. Ding, time for another to sit.
How long has it been since he has come here? Five, seven years? It seems more like days ago, hours even.
The new passenger makes his way back and takes his place across from him. Wild haired and even wilder-eyed, the man is staring at, yet overlooking a reflection of himself. The stench of booze and apathy go well with his appearance. If there were flies aboard they would be buzzing all around this man. With a "humph" of disgust he turns away.
A bill in, 25c back. Ding, time for another to sit.
This time a woman boards. Close beside her is a small boy, no more than six years old. Blond and blue- eyed, the both of them and "where is the father," he thinks to himself. They take a seat near the front, away from the two individuals in back. Mother could smell them even before she took a breath. "Mustn't be bothered with men like these," she tells herself.
Passing the next stop, the driver signals a left turn. Heading now away from the country and towards the center of a town, the scenery changes. Trees disappear and are replaced by commercial buildings. Hills and valleys become automobiles and bicycles. The mechanical noise of the conveyance is now accompanied by horns honking and occasional sirens; yet his thoughts cannot be drowned out.
"Yes, still a shit hole."
A bill in, 25c back. Ding, time to sit.
The man stepping aboard only serves to enhance this place's already cathartic aura. He smells of shit, as does everything and everyone. Portly, balding on top, he makes up for the lack of hair with his nice mustache. Nice mustache, complete with food, snot and grime. Nice mustache, if you like filth. The man does not. Turning back to the window, he loses himself in thought.
===
"Boy, come here." " I have something for you."
"Ok, father."
The boy sees his father as a demigod: revered, loved, feared, and respected, all at once.
Handing the boy a package, father looks on in delightful anticipation. Delightful anticipation of his reaction. Delightful anticipation of the abject horror to come.
"Well, open it boy," says father.
"Ok, father."
Ripping away the tape that fastens the top of the box, thoughts run through his head. "What is it, hopefully a new baseball glove," his mind murmurs.
Removing the lid, pulling away some tissue, he is disappointed.
"What is it father?"
"Your mother broke our hearts son, so I had to take her's away."
===
Slowing and finally stopping, the bus rouses the man from his reverie. Looking up, he realizes that here he is, his destination. Remembering what is to happen, he puts his hand to his side and fingering the hunting knife, feels courage flow through his veins.
"I'm ready," he mumbles to himself.
Stepping up into the aisle, he starts to exit behind the blonde mother and her blonde boy. Halfway off, he is held up when she must stop. The boy was sleeping. Now he is crying.
"Oh shoosh, you little brat," he says silently, and makes his way past them.
"Pardon me," he says, this time aloud as he passes.
Off the bus he goes, looks around and, getting his bearings makes his way along the thoroughfare. Turning left down a side street, he sees where he wants to go, the red sign distinguishing itself just as a lone skyscraper would do. Coming closer, he makes out the words : "Hope Hospice Center," he reads.
His pulse quickens. His mouth goes dry with the realization that the time is nigh.
Walking up to the entrance, he takes one last look at the sky and enters through the double doors.
===
"Yes, but what-- what is it father?" he asks.
"Son I told you, it's your mother's heart," he remembers his father saying.
He does not understand. He does not comprehend the words, only hears them.
===
Now he understands and has for awhile. Now he sees what he must do. Nothing will stop him.
Past the double doors and approaching the front desk, he puts on a false smile. A false smile that masks inner consternation as there is an armed guard behind the desk.
"Good day, sir," he says to the man.
"Good day to you." "I'm here to see my father, room thirty-six."
After showing his identification he makes his way to the elevators. Passing so many framed prints: Monet, Van Gogh, Dali (Dali in Hospice?) and photographs. He stops, here are the lifts. Deciding against them, he begins to climb the stairs. One, two, three, four, five... he counts, all the way up to twenty, where he arrives at his destination, the second floor. He steps out of the stairwell and, turning to his right, spots the room at the end of the hall. He walks to it.
===
"Father, how do you have mother's heart?" "Doesn't she need it to live?"
"Yes son, she *needed* it to live, but has no use for it now," says his father, rather smugly.
Confused, the boy says " Well, where is she?" "When's she coming back?"
"Mother isn't coming back. She broke our hearts son and I had to take her's away."
===
Arriving in front of room thirty-six, he pauses and puts his ear to the door. No sound emanates from within, so he puts his hand on the knob. Cold. Turning it he is careful to make no sound. He pushes the door open and stepping inside, glances to his left. Someone is sleeping in the bed, quietly, peacefully. He walks to the bedside.
To his left is an end table. Cards, flowers and a glass of water decorate it. To the right and past the bed is a window. Looking out, yet seeing nothing, he decides that now is the time.
"Wake up," he whispers.
No response.
"Wake up," he says again, this time a little louder.
No response.
A third time, "WAKE UP," this time emphatically.
The old man rouses, confused. Opening his eyes, he looks around. He sees nothing, as he is blind and has been for awhile. He brings his hands up to try to feel for his visitor. Finally they come to rest on the man. He moves them up to his face. A look of recognition replaces confusion. He knows this face.
"Wh-- what, what do you want?" he asks.
The man, saying nothing, takes the knife from his waist. Running the blade along the old man's arm he speaks.
"I think you know," he says.
"Know what?" asks the bedridden man.
"Why I am here."
"No, I am asking why."
Silence fills the room. Fifteen seconds or so go by before the man holding the knife responds. When he does, his voice sounds different, younger.
"You broke my heart, father." "Now I have to take your's."
User Reviews
Submitted by Insanethemind (user info) at 2005-09-23 19:35:11 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
this post was quite a disappointment, insanethefuckingmind!
Submitted by mjt7420 (user info) at 2004-07-28 14:32:27 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
This actually didn't make me smile,but it was good. Simple, dark, cynical... lovely.
Submitted by sublime (user info) at 2004-07-23 15:56:36 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
plus two for the hardest working man on ubersite
Submitted by Insanethemind (user info) at 2004-07-23 15:52:01 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by shandythedog (user info) at 2004-01-27 08:48:00 (#)
Ranking: 2
the only thing, after one reading, that i would think of changing would be to modify the ending with some kind of silly humour along the lines of this line:
Yes son, she *needed* it to live, but has no use for it now," says his father, rather smugly.
which made me laugh out loud.
Submitted by Insanethemind (user info) at 2004-01-27 14:02:22 (#)
Ranking: 0
interesting idea shandy. That's pretty much what I meant. I chose the subtler route.
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Shandy, I've just now realized what you mrant, a mere 6 months later. I thought that YOU had written the line you quoted above and not I. How silly of me!
Yes I agree, upon re reading this yet again, I discovered that the ending would be much better if ended in a more comical manner, even in the same vein as that one line.
Great idea.
Submitted by Ed_0150 (user info) at 2004-07-21 00:41:46 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Insanethemind (user info) at 2004-05-06 14:26:41 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Thanks W! (That's your code name now.) How is your life?
I've got a talented tongue too, btw.
Submitted by PeopleAreStrange (user info) at 2004-05-02 21:24:12 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I'm so glad you got onto BAW Michael, I only just found out. I really liked this story when I read it...you're a very talented guy.
Submitted by Insanethemind (user info) at 2004-04-28 02:01:29 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
please reference another copy of it then, idiot
Submitted by Malachewaii (user info) at 2004-04-27 15:03:37 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
This story is so old.. don't tell me you're pawning it off as your own.
Submitted by Insanethemind (user info) at 2004-04-24 15:46:46 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
i'm touched by your kindhearted criticism, neoncoathanger. now go fuck yourself
'insanethemind' is a song lyric, and trust me i am not an angst ridden teen.
your review is so chock full of internet popularized catchphrases anyway.
sheep
Submitted by neoncoathanger <megangiles.at.olp.net> at 2004-04-19 19:22:10 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Okay, I must say I agree with c-rock on this one. Insane, reading your story is like being trapped in a seventh-grade poetry club. You're trying so hard to be dark and disturbing that you wind up sounding like a twelve year old drama queen. Hell, even the name you chose for yourself reeks of pre-teen female. Can the shock factor, quit trying to depress everybody and passing it off as talent, and write something with a little more motivation. Think it out a little more, will you? Trying to cram eight thousand plot twists into so short a story is moronic. Plot twists don't make a good story, psychology makes a good story. If you must write shit, do your best not to subject the rest of us to it, okay? Quit feeling sorry for yourself and wallowing in your dark pit of eternal despair or whatever and join the rest of us.
Submitted by Random Joe at 2004-04-02 21:08:41 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
time 4 buttsex
Submitted by c-rock <snakecharmer85.at.hotmail.com> at 2004-03-15 00:16:11 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Bullshit
Submitted by The Egg at 2004-03-11 17:14:52 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
That was amazing. Looking at all the other reviews, only a smart person would understand. Shit knows how smart you were to write it.
Submitted by shandythedog (user info) at 2004-03-09 09:32:16 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by Insanethemind (user info) at 2004-03-08 22:43:39 (#)
Ranking: 0
still, it never says that anywhere, hot-shot.
It could have been her addicting prescription pills in the box, it could have been her favorite dildo in the box even, both things that she loved (read: her heart) and that he could have taken away.
very well put, insane.
Submitted by c-rock <snakecharmer85.at.hotmail.com> at 2004-03-09 09:16:25 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
So then the son really has no motive to kill his father. If his father didn't kill his mother what the fuck did you write the story for? Ah you suck! You should never ever write again!!! what have you done? . . .
Submitted by Insanethemind (user info) at 2004-03-08 22:43:39 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
still, it never says that anywhere, hot-shot.
It could have been her addicting prescription pills in the box, it could have been her favorite dildo in the box even, both things that she loved (read: her heart) and that he could have taken away.
Submitted by c-rock <snakecharmer85.at.hotmail.com> at 2004-03-08 00:32:47 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
His father tears out the mother's heart right? Isn't that grounds for brutality? Just speaking my mind hotshot.
Submitted by esso_merda (user info) at 2004-03-05 22:22:52 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
yummy
Submitted by Insanethemind (user info) at 2004-03-05 21:51:13 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Not too much shandy my man, will drop you an email straightaway
Submitted by shandythedog (user info) at 2004-03-05 17:47:31 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
ignore this twit insane
what's happening man?
what's new?
not seen you much on uber of late.
Submitted by Insanethemind (user info) at 2004-03-04 12:02:47 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
where in this story does it say that the "father brutally murdered his mom" c-rock? Have you heard of this little word "figurative?"
Man, I'm done talking with you. I get it, the story sucks ok, fine, its a piece of shit.
Why are you continually insulting me, or this little shit story?
Find something more productive to do.
Submitted by C-Rock (user info) at 2004-03-04 01:35:34 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Yeah but that ending didn't even make it worth the reading. Next time instead of spending 15 minutes why not try an hour or so, maybe you'd make something that's so-so, instead of shit no! Doo doo dah, man I'm tired. And why didn't the cops get his dad after brutally murdering his mom? Did no one notice? What the fuck?! If no one gave a shit she must not have been all that spectacular that her son waits until he's an adult to go and murder his eldery, ill father. Is this guy a pussy or what? Who is he really? And yeah I created the account to reply to your story, because it's the most heniously putrid "story" that I've ever read. Dick and Jane had more literary style. Well keep up the good work, if you could call it that.
Submitted by Insanethemind (user info) at 2004-03-03 04:49:35 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
none of you are going to "hurt my feelings" and c-rock, dont worry I didnt get upset in the least by you calling this post "a steaming pile of shit." I merely found it quite humorous that you created an uber account merely to bash it. I find that more shitty than my post, to be frank. But shitty in a humorous way.
And PLEASE people stop with the predictable ending thing. I fucking get it now! It's predictable... ok! It's also a short story that I wrote in 15 minutes- how much development are you looking for, how many twists can you expect?
The whole "point" of this story was his reflection on childhood (especially his father's sickness to the point of muredering his mother) and how he handled it (revenge) and also, his attitude: feeling like everything was shit around him, etc. NOT the ending. That was something i had to throw together to make it even worth reading.
Submitted by MrCoffee (user info) at 2004-03-02 21:14:31 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
good, though a predictable ending
Submitted by blayke at 2004-03-02 14:04:46 EST (#)
Ranking: -1
def. missing the gore factor here. What about the police. I am expected to believe the kid waited till the dad was in the fuckin hospital like 20 years later or some shit. Its not funny, scary, or even really interesting but eh... it is something better than 40 monkeys. 'I feel like rating your story a -2, but boy I dont wanna hurt your feelings. Boy I say boy alot'
Submitted by c-rock <snakecharmer85.at.hotmail.com> at 2004-03-02 12:19:25 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Hey uh sorry that you have such a problem with me thinking your story was a steaming pile of rat shit, but in my opinion it was so, yeah, don't get so wound up about it. Take it easy, relax, maybe take a nice hot bath and read a book, and make it a good book, maybe something to inspire you to not write such shit. But as to your question "Who are you really?" well since you want to know. . .I'm a magical satyr named Farnsworth Pennywhistle, and I came from the land of Narnia to roust up all the lazy whites and teach them how to cook ribs properly. There, you got the truth out of me! Satisfied? You should be!
Blood Hound Gang-Lift your head up high and blow your brains out.
Submitted by Anansie (user info) at 2004-03-01 01:19:10 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Holy crap! Why didn't I read this before?
Submitted by Insanethemind (user info) at 2004-02-29 07:43:22 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
C-rock,
You saw it coming a mile away, eh? How intuitive of you!
I see you registered that uber name simply to blast my little story... how sad!
Only one review to your name, and it was only on this post.
Who are you really?
Submitted by Tasial (user info) at 2004-02-22 22:16:11 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
FUCKING AWSOME! esp. when your stoned. ;)
Submitted by pinksgood (user info) at 2004-02-18 17:25:13 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
stupid dipshit!
Submitted by fingerbang (user info) at 2004-02-13 21:50:28 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
you stole my virginity now i will steal yours. wait!
Submitted by someone (user info) at 2004-02-11 23:01:06 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
nice
Submitted by Random Joe at 2004-02-11 22:57:01 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Wow. Kind of predictable, but still awesome.
Submitted by skillet <junkmail.at.travellitheband.com> at 2004-02-11 22:45:04 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
good. very good. get it published or something.
Submitted by tneezle (user info) at 2004-02-11 02:27:40 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
boooooooooooo
Submitted by iddqd (user info) at 2004-02-10 21:29:43 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
welcome to the team.
Submitted by quack (user info) at 2004-02-10 14:55:44 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
well... that freaked me out well enough, i guess.
Submitted by Random Joe at 2004-02-09 21:16:04 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Good, liked the flashbacks. Kinda predictable ending though
Submitted by dakingisdead (user info) at 2004-02-09 18:30:52 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
Not a bad peice but it is not that original either.
I liked 'time to sit'.
Submitted by C-Rock (user info) at 2004-02-09 18:07:16 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
That was a steaming pile of shit. No offense but I saw that one coming a mile away. Read like some Natural Born Killers meets Misery meets Pyscho piece of rehash shit. It would make a really good tv movie though. You should try to sell that.
Submitted by Wonket (user info) at 2004-02-09 17:38:55 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Effective and well written. I'm impressed
Submitted by Jeriko <Jeriko2k3.at.hotmail.com> at 2004-02-09 17:34:50 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
sick, twisted, demented all and all good writing.
Submitted by Fabish (user info) at 2004-02-09 16:32:07 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Congrats, you're on Boredatwork.
Submitted by Tom <elementabyss.at.aol.com> at 2004-02-09 14:18:44 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Very nicely written.
Submitted by Falconer (user info) at 2004-02-09 14:10:58 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by hendrixjrr (user info) at 2004-02-09 13:36:58 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
And the moment you've all been waiting for:
Hendrixjrr gives this his seal of approval.
Submitted by Bob Dole <meh> at 2004-02-09 10:08:03 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
mental angush at it's best. good show.
Submitted by Razor (user info) at 2004-02-09 09:55:55 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
This was pretty damn good, I wonder why it just now made it onto boredatwork all kinds of late...
Submitted by Loper (user info) at 2004-02-09 07:39:41 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Great short.
I've seen 2-hour movies that couldn't get similar points across as well and a lot of authors that also fell short after 700+ pages.
King, eat your hear out (no pun intended).
Submitted by PWNstar (user info) at 2004-01-28 18:59:24 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Nice transition from flashback to present-time. I seemed very natural.
Submitted by shandythedog (user info) at 2004-01-28 18:48:43 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
i just tried to catch you on messenger Insane, but my fucking cocksucking arsehole cunt head computer crashed, and when i returned you'd vanished.
anyway, catch up before too long hopefully
would you mind having a look at a thing of mine called i think The Rousing of Magago.
its not anything great or special, but i'm quite fond of it. curious on what you think.
Submitted by shandythedog (user info) at 2004-01-28 18:09:25 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
taking time off work, insane? appollo will be off for a month shortly as well apparently. are you still keen on cccc work? if so this might be a good opportunity to try and forge ahead, as i still have a few months until i return to the cubicle.
i've had an idea for the cccc that involves using our existing material more extensively, ie stories like this one. will send you an email.
Submitted by Insanethemind (user info) at 2004-01-27 14:02:22 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
interesting idea shandy. That's pretty much what I meant. I chose the subtler route.
As always, I appriceate your thoughts. I'm working on some things myself, with much more time, as I quit my job today! So, it seems I'll be on a vacation for a month or more, which I am thrilled about of course.
Let's try to chat on messenger sometime.
Submitted by shandythedog (user info) at 2004-01-27 08:48:00 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
fucking hell!
there is some brilliant stuff in here, and it is quite a trip. definitely worth re-reading.
the only thing, after one reading, that i would think of changing would be to modify the ending with some kind of silly humour along the lines of this line:
Yes son, she *needed* it to live, but has no use for it now," says his father, rather smugly.
which made me laugh out loud.
hang on a sec, i will see if i can have a crack at it, rating to continue after a smoke break, computer crashing, wife telling me to go to sleep, child sqwarking etc etc
Submitted by GodChicken (user info) at 2004-01-26 19:18:24 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Interesting story. good job with the cutovers, it didn't interrupt the flow at all.
There's no explanation as to why there was a broken heart, in the first instance, or the last..
The thing that comes to mind is almost a ritual of mercy.
The mother was sick and dying, the father in emotional pain from watching her slip away, took her heart physically to fix the one breaking in his own chest..
The son revisits the father in nearly same circumstances?
That's a vicious but loving cycle.
Submitted by Yes (user info) at 2004-01-21 22:48:36 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Death_Metal_Dude (user info) at 2004-01-21 22:38:40 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
I thought I rated this before...
Submitted by UrbaneMischief (user info) at 2004-01-21 22:24:54 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
*gasp*
good....creepy...but good
Submitted by Kristen (user info) at 2004-01-21 14:11:19 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
This is some creepy stuff...
Submitted by kgbpasha (user info) at 2004-01-20 16:58:41 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Perplexd (user info) at 2004-01-16 17:28:41 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Excellent story. Very well done.
Submitted by The_Doc <jason_of_2000.at.hotmail.com> at 2003-12-29 03:23:06 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Nice man, real nice story. I liked the ending, middle and begining. Nicely done, nice characters, nice story, nice job. Nice.
Submitted by coley (user info) at 2003-12-29 03:00:47 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
How did I miss this?
Submitted by bonus (user info) at 2003-10-16 11:44:12 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Cracking.
Submitted by Jake <andyhunt_009.at.email.com> at 2003-10-16 11:07:11 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Ho Lee Shit.
That was a fuckin awesome twist.
Me likey.
Submitted by apollo88 (user info) at 2003-10-01 14:44:55 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
How did I miss this!
fucking quality AND *highly disturbed*
Submitted by TuTs (user info) at 2003-09-29 10:57:33 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
WOW. True to form?
Submitted by Insanethemind (user info) at 2003-09-26 08:30:50 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Thanks iddqd. Interesting that you say such a thing, as I would like to be able to write like a lot of the stuff that you put up.
Submitted by iddqd (user info) at 2003-09-26 01:27:59 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
fucking quality.
i love it when you can be bothered posting, insane. you write crazy shit, that id like to write if i could. maybe one day.
Submitted by DJMattB241 (user info) at 2003-09-25 17:46:03 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
insanethemind, INDEED!
Submitted by GoingBlue (user info) at 2003-09-25 17:44:40 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Why I stick around.
Submitted by JMG114 (user info) at 2003-09-25 17:11:59 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Like beautiful music, it jumps off the page.
Submitted by DrunkMonk (user info) at 2003-09-25 16:56:15 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Nice story Insane.
Chilling.
Submitted by PeopleAreStrange (user info) at 2003-09-25 16:32:28 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Hmm, twisted and dark. I like it.
Submitted by Anjie (user info) at 2003-09-25 16:01:06 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Great story....I was alittle confused for a moment, but recovered quickly.
Submitted by Loren1 (user info) at 2003-09-25 15:58:55 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Your style reminds me a little bit of an older Steven king short story. I think it was called "The man who had flowers" or "The man with flowers." Only, you didn't get quite as graphic. :-)
Submitted by FATMANTPK (user info) at 2003-09-25 15:50:29 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Great writing. Sad, but entertaining.
Submitted by Murphy1844 (user info) at 2003-09-25 15:29:15 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
5 min. in. Delightful smile back.
Good story.
Submitted by skelts39 (user info) at 2003-09-25 15:08:15 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
sweet
Submitted by Phinch (user info) at 2003-09-25 15:08:13 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
it got a little confusing in the middle, but it had a very strong ending.
Submitted by loki (user info) at 2003-09-25 15:03:39 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
wow
Submitted by MAB (user info) at 2003-09-25 14:57:46 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Um, very creative. It seems a little far-fetched that the father would still even have custody of a child and not be in jail or hospital if he had reached the point of doing what he apparently did, but what do i know?
+2 for plumbing the depths of human misery and depravity, and I hope you feel better soon :).
Submitted by spacemonkey (user info) at 2003-09-25 14:56:13 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Delightfully twisted.
Submitted by Acarnis (user info) at 2003-09-25 14:51:54 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by El_Guapo (user info) at 2003-09-25 14:47:22 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
you people are starting to scare me, heheh