The Legend of the Drunken Hermit (301 hits)
Category: NoneLabels: poetry
Rating: -2 on 2 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by spacemonkey (View user info) at 2003-10-02 13:34:32 EDT
In a cave upon the highest hill
The drunken hermit stands looking down
He grabs his moonshine to drink his fill
Wearing nothing, save a frown
At another time, in another life
He was quite far from alone
He had two kids, a loving wife
And a dog chewing on a bone
His life was perfect, not a thing he lacked
He had everything you see
Then one day his family was wacked
Not even the dog could flee
He was filled with the grief of a hundred men
So he shunned the life he once celebrated
He went to a cave to live in zen
But soon became intoxicated
So it is here I end this tale
Of lonely, drunken sadness
And I ask that you forgive this male
Of his anger and his madness.
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Submitted by spacemonkey (user info) at 2003-10-02 15:20:48 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
+2 to balance out the philistine's comment.
Submitted by Moloch (user info) at 2003-10-02 14:55:12 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
this sucked so bad i actually created an account so i could rate it. what kind of stupid name is spacemonkey anyway? im actually going to go as far as creat a post devoted to how much you suck.