So there I sat (661 hits)
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Submitted by SubstnceP (View user info) at 2003-12-01 21:23:49 EST
So there I sat, at the very edge of life.
Unsure of my place, try as I might.
Forward I knew was the proper direction.
But the mirror showed me an altered reflection.
I knew the face that looked back at me,
but something inside felt differently.
Onward I strove, despite all the friction.
A lost childhood, a gained disposition.
They wanted a suit, they wanted a dream,
They wanted me to change a big part of me.
Deep down inside an overwhelming yearning.
Although wealth and health are constantly turning.
I think to be once again young, would solve all the issues.
But It's wrong to regress, cause success is like tissues.
It's frail and translucent, hardly a dream.
But torn it means nothing, a loveless fling.
The decision was made and looked at the sky.
Knowing for sure it was indefinitely high.
It eased my thoughts, that moment on the line,
So there I sat, and admired the time.
~C~
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Submitted by TatteredAndTorn (user info) at 2004-02-22 21:04:26 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
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Submitted by j0andre1 (user info) at 2003-12-01 22:52:41 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Here I sit all broken hearted, came to poop and only... took a gigantic shit on this post.
BOOYA -2
Submitted by MIll8178 (user info) at 2003-12-01 22:21:41 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
There once was a poster on Uber
Who thought that their posts were just super
I'm sorry to say,
but that poem was just gay.
Now go somewhere else, fucking loser.
Not into lymericks? I can do Uber Haiku also!
That post was pure shit
it made me want to vomit
choke on my cock, bitch
Submitted by Method (user info) at 2003-12-01 21:26:59 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Youre only getting a positive 2 because Stacy Kiebler is on TV in a school girl outfit. Damn lucky punk. I hate poetry.