Ubersite
Home - About Us - Contact
"Good teams win games. Bad teams have meetings." - Ozzie Guillen
Welcome to Ubersite!
Search Ubersite
Search for:

Most Recently Reviewed
  1. You're All Going to Die So...
  2. Word Association Bitch!
  3. I'm Back!
  4. When will women stop sendi...
  5. Wuthering Heights – A book...
  6. What's your Theme Song, Ub...
  7. Sleep now?
  8. Super Important Question
  9. Random Pictures II
  10. A Stoned Question
more...
Most Heated
  1. Sleep now? (77 heat)
  2. What's your Theme Song, Ub... (47 heat)
  3. This isn't creepy at all... (28 heat)
  4. Super Yum? (27 heat)
  5. Wuthering Heights – A book... (24 heat)
  6. 2012: It Could Happen... (22 heat)
  7. SPT, I know why Shlongy di... (20 heat)
  8. Stop! Weathertime, Boring... (19 heat)
  9. Super Important Question (16 heat)
  10. Le Post de Jeudi - Avec Merde (16 heat)
more...
Most Viewed Messages
  1. The Ultimate MS Paint: It... (1216870 hits)
  2. "If I cum now, will it be ... (774198 hits)
  3. How The Hell Do I Get Out ... (507691 hits)
  4. Exploiting Peer-to-Peer Ne... (427363 hits)
  5. Motivating the Weekend (383732 hits)
  6. How To Pick Up Chicks (352545 hits)
  7. Knockoff porn movie titles (327853 hits)
  8. My J-Date Misadventure (317737 hits)
  9. Masturbating on Skype with... (313778 hits)
  10. Badass Australian Cows (275470 hits)
more...
Most Viewed Authors
  1. Bart Cilfone (1572746 hits)
  2. S. William Moore II (1562185 hits)
  3. Razor (1536156 hits)
  4. JMG114 (1496972 hits)
  5. Sydeburnz (1433051 hits)
  6. MickGinny (1400425 hits)
  7. loki (1143751 hits)
  8. Jonukah (1084191 hits)
  9. VACANCY (1071552 hits)
  10. Sayonara (1065609 hits)
  11. weeeeep (1026954 hits)
  12. Obama Fofana (993893 hits)
  13. Yankees! (979697 hits)
  14. Tom (923202 hits)
  15. THE MIGHTY APOLLO (847621 hits)
  16. I Got A Life So I Don't Ha... (833598 hits)
  17. ++TIGER++ ++LILLY++ (815369 hits)
  18. Sorrell (805583 hits)
  19. Wally (797892 hits)
  20. RIP™ (778871 hits)
  21. Tremble, hetero swine! (760373 hits)
  22. Phallic_Cymbals (751918 hits)
  23. RON PAUL 2008! (749269 hits)
  24. HIDDEN101 (741484 hits)
  25. Will Zone (728033 hits)
  26. T then ToM (719901 hits)
  27. User Blocked (714453 hits)
  28. iddqd (701020 hits)
  29. kaos-king (687759 hits)
  30. kaos-king (670209 hits)
Click here to return to the list of messages.

Captive Audience (583 hits)

Category: None
Labels: crap:fiction

Rating: 1.75 on 11 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Labels:

Submitted by Circe <feral_pet.at.yahoo.com> (View user info) at 2004-04-19 09:26:32 EDT


I have you here now. You can't say you won't listen. No, you can't. NO YOU CAN'T!

I'm sorry. I'm sorry... don't cry. You're so pretty.. please, don't cry. I'm sorry I shouted, and hit you, but you won't listen, none of you will listen, and it's going to be too late.

I can hear them. At night. They never make a sound if there's anybody here, but when it's just me, I can hear them. When they laugh it's like glass breaking. They're quiet during the day. I wrote it in my notebooks. I have notebooks, so you have to listen, I have it written down, I have lists, no DON'T YOU TURN AWAY FROM ME.

The breaking glass aching pain laughing at night.

My head... my head... they only come out at night, but I think they do something to the wires in the roof to make my brain burn during the day.

Stop crying and listen.
Stop that snivelling sound of broken crying hurt, they'll hear, they'll come, why aren't you afraid of them?

I need to tell you. I brought you here to tell you because I saw you and you're so pretty, pretty with your crying eyes, and they might hurt you if you don't know about the notebooks.

Did I tell you about the notebooks? You have to know about them because my burning light seared things in the wires brain forgets but the notebooks remember.

Don't cry. They'll come. They'll come. They laugh and you cry and it all sounds like glass and my head oh my poor head....

I'm sorry the ropes are tight. They have to be tight so that you listen. You won't listen if I let you run-scamper-scuttle and if you don't know then you won't know. I have notebooks. It's all in there. I've written letters but I think they know.

No.
No.
No.

NO crying, no snivelling, no more sound of broken glass and pain that eats me like they do in the night and you should be afraid, but not of me, never of me, I just want to help you, save you, make sure you know so that you can know.

They'll come if you cry. It's nightime now, and they can come whenever they want.

You don't want to listen and you keep crying, you won't stop that CRYING, and the crying calls them, calls them from the wires and the roof and the dark-in-the-day places where they live.

I won't let you call them.

Submit to Digg Submit to StumbleUpon

User Reviews


Submitted by Fey (user info) at 2007-04-23 05:43:00 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2

I really like your fragmentary stuff.

It's difficult to do well, one of my favourite styles, and you make it work.

Submitted by Doodles (user info) at 2006-12-10 13:07:06 EST (#)
Ranking: 2

You don't want to listen and you keep crying, you won't stop that CRYING, and the crying calls them, calls them from the wires and the roof and the dark-in-the-day places where they live.

I won't let you call them


Submitted by Wish_I_Were (user info) at 2004-09-12 03:20:10 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2

Reminds me vaguely of the writing in one of my fav books The Tin Drum by gunther grass.

Submitted by PatheticCapitalistFuck (user info) at 2004-09-12 02:44:42 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2

+2 to offset Falco's obvious stupidity.

Submitted by Jo_of_the_golden_P (user info) at 2004-09-12 02:43:44 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2

nice


Submitted by electrictoothsyndrome (user info) at 2004-09-12 02:31:17 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2

No Comment

Submitted by Falco (user info) at 2004-09-11 22:13:07 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2

Crap

Submitted by Coyote (user info) at 2004-04-19 11:34:01 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2

+2 for knowing the importance of keeping notebooks.

Submitted by Jays567 (user info) at 2004-04-19 10:10:51 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1

Reminded me of something the Texas Chainsaw Massacre guy would say.

Submitted by lowsodiummonkey (user info) at 2004-04-19 09:53:06 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1

the hurt my brain.

here's some payback - http://www.ubersite.com/m/14532


feel the burn.

Submitted by shark25 (user info) at 2004-04-19 09:52:21 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1

well written


It works on any Ayatollah! Ayatollah Nakhbadeh, Ayatollah Zahedi ... Even
as we speak, Ayatollah Razmara and his cadre of fanatics are consolidating
their power!

-- Homer Simpson
Two Bad Neighbors