Intuition: Part 4 (711 hits)
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Submitted by Matt Maiorano (View user info) at 2004-04-28 17:18:06 EDT
Related Poetry - http://www.ubersite.com/m/19537
Part 1 - http://www.ubersite.com/m/30751
Part 2 - http://www.ubersite.com/m/30846
Part 3 - http://www.ubersite.com/m/31188
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Julius continued blasting down I-95. He knew they were coming for him. He heard the story on the radio. The rage had clouded his mind so badly, he could barely remember what he had done. All he could remember was the blood....
Blood everywhere.
He looked over to the passenger seat where Lana lay asleep. He couldn't believe what he was doing. Killing the girl's father and running away with her? He knew what it looked like, but he couldn't stop here. He had to keep going. Maybe there was a chance.
How badly had he beaten her father, though? The only clues were Julius' clothing. Smears of blood covered his face, and several bloody hand-prints covered his shirt. His arm was swollen terribly. It might be broken. He had to know what he did to that man. Maybe Lana had seen everything.
He touched her arm.....
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"Daddy, please stop!" He heard her cry
"Shut up, you fucking cunt!" Her father screamed back. His hand reached back and smashed across her jaw. She tasted blood.
"What have you been telling that bastard at school!? Tell me!!"
She started sobbing. He hit her again, this time in the sternum. The breath was knocked from her, and she collapsed on the ground.
"Little bitch. I bet you're fucking him too, aren't you!?"
She could only lay there, clutching her chest, gasping for air. "What is he going to do to me?" Her mind chanted.
To her horror, her father began to unbuckle his belt.....
"What's it going to take for you to learn to keep your mouth shut?"
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Julius snapped his arm back. That bastard..... her own father...... Julius could feel the hurt and pain Lana felt. It tore his heart open seeing these things, but he had to know more. He had to watch that shell of a man die. He touched her arm again.
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"Shit! He's here! What did you do, did you call him!? Get your clothes on, and get into your room. I'll deal with you later."
By this time, she had run out of tears. Every time she screamed, she was hit. If she started crying now, there was no telling what he would do to her. All she could do was hope Mr. Delmedico finds out what was happening to her.
She heard the front door open.
"Julius! What a surprise! Please, come in."
She didn't hear a response from Mr. Delmedico. What was he here for? She peeked around the corner, and saw her father holding a bat behind his back. She cringed.... he was going to hurt Mr. Delmedico! Suddenly, her eyes locked with Julius' eyes, and she saw that he knew.
He knew what her father had done. He screamed, and lunged at her father.
"What did you do to her!?"
She saw her father swing the bat at Julius' face. Julius quickly brought his arm up, and took the blow straight into his forearm. With his other arm, he grabbed the bat and wrenched it from her father's grip.
She screamed. Julius grabbed her father and threw him down the front steps. She ran to the door, and watched as Julius began to pummel her father. They wrestled on the street. Each landing a blow to each other's head. She continued to watch as her father wrapped his calloused hands around Julius' throat. She had to help him. She had to help Julius.
Lana grabbed the nearby bat, ran to her father, and swung the bat as hard as her 11 year old body could. Her father released his grip and stumbled back. She hit him in the face again. Her father went down.
Julius slowly stood up, coughed, and took the bat from Lana. He walked up to the pitiful creature laying in the street, gripped the bat, and swung it down onto his chest. He could hear several bones break. He did it again. Then again. Julius then threw the bat away, dragged him over to the car, opened the door, and proceeded to slam the door repeatedly on her father's head.
Julius kept screaming. It wasn't even intelligible. Just cries that an animal would make.
Blood began to pour from her father's misshapen head. She could actually see the chips of bone from her father's skull land onto the street pavement. But she wasn't frightened. She silently stood watching. Julius finally stopped, and let her father fall limp onto the street.
He was still breathing. Blood-clotted gasps were the only sounds they could hear. Julius just stared at her. She looked back.
"What are you going to do?" Her eyes questioned.
Julius looked back at her, and then down at the bloody mass before him. Her father barely looked human. He began to sound out a word: Daughter.
"You were never my daddy." Lana quietly said.
Julius leaned down, gripped Joseph Highland by the throat, and ripped his adams apple out. Joseph's eyes widened, blood gurgled in his throat, and then he died.
"Let's go." was all Julius said to Lana.
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As Julius let go of Lana's arm, all he could do was smile with satisfaction.
to be continued...
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Submitted by polyamorousaj (user info) at 2004-04-28 23:50:11 EDT (#)
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65 hits? That's way too fucking many for this piece of Gar-Bage.
Submitted by AshK (user info) at 2004-04-28 18:20:45 EDT (#)
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Holy shit balls.
Submitted by ohlookasquirrel (user info) at 2004-04-28 18:09:34 EDT (#)
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NU UH!
I love matt!
Submitted by Adona at 2004-04-28 17:55:12 EDT (#)
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I love you, Matt.
Submitted by Tastycat (user info) at 2004-04-28 17:33:57 EDT (#)
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Holy damn Matt... write some more. You know you want to.
Submitted by NotApologizing (user info) at 2004-04-28 17:28:43 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
yeah, definitely a plus 2.
Submitted by NotApologizing (user info) at 2004-04-28 17:24:52 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Dude, I was just reading #3 again wondering "Where the fuck is part 4. That lazy motherfucker better....Oh, there it is"
I'm giving it +2 before reading because I know it'll be good and I see that it's longer this time. I'll return after reading.