I'm So Sad and Confused.... (923 hits)
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Submitted by BleedTheSky (View user info) at 2004-05-20 00:17:21 EDT
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And then he was gone. Just like that. Barely even a hint of warning.
"I never want to see you again."
The words echoed in my head. The reality I put off for so long finally bore down on me. I was like Daffy Duck. Someone from high above had dropped an anvil and it had landed directly on my head. I could feel the weight of it on my shoulders, dragging me down. I could hardly stand. The feeling was too overwhelming.
In the last two minutes of my former life, I lost everything.
My house.
My car.
My love.
Myself.
If I could just take everything back, I would. Some things can not be forgiven.
Apparently, having sex with my stepson is one of those things.
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"Come on, Richard. I don't want to fight with you today. You need to take a bath. Look at you. You're.. you're... you're FILTHY. You FILTHY little boy. You're a dirty little boy. Take your clothes off so mommy can give you a good scrub down."
I laughed to myslef as Richard stripped himself of his clothes. My heart skipped a beat when his breifs slid down around his milky white thighs exposing his member.
Not bad for a 12 year old, I thought to myself.
I touched myself as he slid down into the sud-filled water. I dropped to my knees at the edge of the tub and scooped up some water so I could let a handful of water trickle down his chest. My hands found their way down his chest and into his lap where I could feel his penis begin to grow hard.
"What are you doing to me?"
"Don't worry. It will all be over soon."
I began moving my hand up and down his now erect penis. With my other hand, I found my way up my skirt and into my panties.
I was so wet I was dripping.
I inserted my finger into my vagina and removed it. Using the fluids that were now on my finger, I massaged my clitoris. The juices were really oozing out of me now. I was hot.
I ripped my skirt off and climbed into the tub. I sat down on my stepson's lap and gently inserted his penis into my vagina. I started slow. I could see the look of satisfaction on his face as he closed his eyes and moaned.
"Mommy's insides feel good, don't they?"
No real sespnse. Just moaning.
I was beginning to build steam. I was riding him like a bull. Water was splashing out of the tub. It was at this point when I heard the car pull into the driveway. I didn't care. This was too good.
I was at the point of climax when my husband came through the bathroom door with the mixed look of incredulation and rage on his face.
It was at this point that it was all over. He left me and took everything.
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This was all 25 years ago. I'm happy to say I'm out of jail now.
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Submitted by Magicaddict (user info) at 2004-05-19 10:33:06 (#)
Ranking: 2
I agree with Lojope.
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Submitted by Dufflady (user info) at 2004-05-19 10:29:18 (#)
Ranking: 2
You are such an incredible writer. i masturbated to this sotry for hours.
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Submitted by NerfHerder (user info) at 2004-05-19 10:46:57 (#)
Ranking: 2
Can I touch your boob?
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Submitted by lojope (user info) at 2004-05-19 10:28:52 (#)
Ranking: 2
I don't really know if I'm a guy or a girl, but if I'm a guy, then I'd liek to take this moment to staten that I don't really think much of your writing. Hell, I don't even really READ it. I just want to get in your pants.
Come to think of it, the same would apply even if I were female.
User Reviews
Submitted by BleedTheSky (user info) at 2004-05-20 15:24:21 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I guess I could tell you why I set up another account to rate myself, except for the fact that I didn't. I swear that that isn't me. I'm way too lazy to set up another account. Fuck, I'm way too lazy to set up this account.
Think what you will.
Submitted by polyamorousaj (user info) at 2004-05-20 12:11:36 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
You bastard. Why the fuck did you set up another account just to rate yourself and Ainkara? You're a cunt.
Submitted by i_eat_babies (user info) at 2004-05-20 11:51:43 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
go to hell, raters.
The only reason you guys are giving him bad ratings is either the CONTENT (which is OBVISOULY a joke) or he insulted you. Which is again, Not His Fault. It isn't his fault that you pansies, liked that piece of shit writting the other girl wrote. She sucks pussy. That Cunt.
You guys loved her piece of writting, and it was a piece of shit love story. And so was this... only in a weirder way. (again, he was joking).
Go Swallow Some Poison, Bitches.
Die!
Submitted by lojope (user info) at 2004-05-20 08:05:24 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
No Comment
Submitted by lojope (user info) at 2004-05-20 08:05:05 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
I am a girl.
Leave me alone.
Submitted by Ptestsarentfair (user info) at 2004-05-20 00:58:40 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Dude! That is fucking Sickly insane, but funny...
Go fuck yourself
Submitted by conrad (user info) at 2004-05-20 00:54:35 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
No Comment
Submitted by BleedTheSky (user info) at 2004-05-20 00:47:22 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Lets see how many -2's I can get...
Submitted by Zeccs (user info) at 2004-05-20 00:35:16 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Ewww.
Submitted by i_eat_babies (user info) at 2004-05-20 00:34:57 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
**look of confusion**
I'm more than fairly sure this was all a joke, and not true.
And with that said and put aside... You bitches are sick mother fuckers.
"I masterbated to this for hours" I hope your penis gets cut off with a rusty saw you perverted son of a bitch. (no offense to your mother of course). She just raised a stupid mother fucker.... a sick one at that.
I don't know what I would do if I ever met you, but being a girl and all.. I think I would just cut your balls off with a butter knife. That way you couldn't enjoy your self half as much to shit that isn't even arosing. You're sick. I bet you are one of those stupid bitches that has one of those "teen girls" porn sites. Sicko. Or even one of those guys that randomly IM's girls (or boys) online asking them if their right hand is tired this evening. Trying to act all smooth about it. Fuck Off.... Dirty. Go to "Neverland" for shit like that....
And as for this writting. As much as it made me sick to think about it... I thought you did a good job with the adjectives and what not. Good detail I suppose. Even though it was really sick to write about (sorry I had to just say it). But I do think you did well..... just never write about something like that ever again. It makes me think that it is in some way one of your fantasies or something.... ick.
<3 Heather
Submitted by Hairsphincter (user info) at 2004-05-20 00:23:15 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Who's a sick cunt, then?