out on the town (492 hits)
Category: HumorRating: -2 on 2 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by adam sexton <cliftonrules456.at.msn.com> (View user info) at 2004-05-22 16:31:53 EDT
ok listen up fuck heads. this one time me and my buddie kyle were rideing arround in my buddies car. kyle being the dumb ass he is decides he was going to ride the rest of the night in the trunk. well that wasint a good idea. any way it just so happens in this car the trunk sucks major balls. and is really really week plus the pipes are run out the side. it just so happens that we go over a big ass bump and the flooring in the trunk gives way. my friend kyle spends the rest of the nigt walking home.
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Submitted by conrad (user info) at 2004-05-23 12:29:15 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
A laugh a minute - unfortunately, this did not extend to a minute.
Submitted by Fixer (user info) at 2004-05-22 16:39:11 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
ok listen up fuck heads:
Try using an outline or sequence of events. Some things are not fully explained in your gripping tale.