A Token Of My Infection-11. Black as Coal (1714 hits)
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Submitted by MickGinny (View user info) at 2004-05-31 15:34:26 EDT
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A Token Of My Infection-11
Black as Coal
Things had changed when I was released from the nuthouse. I was only committed for three weeks but man! I was coming home to a load of bullshit.
Wayne was at my door the next morning after my release. Im not sure if it was a coincidence or he somehow knew.
Whatever the case, he was desperate, I could see it in him.
"What the fuck are you doing at my house Wayne? We talked about this a long time ago"
"Relax dude, we need to talk about something pretty damn important"
Wayne's important thing was he was strapped and needed money, dope, and a car and due to the fact that he "gave" me dope and I made money with him selling dope he figured I owed him. That's one of the many negative things about getting involved with guys like Wayne they are like parasites.
I knew better than to tell Wayne to get bent. Even though that is what I wanted to do and what he deserved. The reason being, Wayne is a genuine badass who has no conscience. I wasn't worried that we would throw down even though I had seen him in action and knew I would most likely lose but rather he knew where my family lived and I could not put them in harms way.
"Listen to me Wayne. You need some help and I am willing to give it to you. However I want something in return; forget you know me, never come to my house again, never call me, after this we are strangers, ok?"
"Sure man, whatever. I think you are over reacting, but whatever"
I gave him $500 bucks and transferred ownership of a piece of shit 85 sedan deville into his name.
He was shot and killed 4 days later in Newark as he slept in the backseat of my old caddy. It was bound to happen.
So I knew my suspicions were correct that spook had tracked Wayne down into New Jersey and had him killed when he told me that his last two mules were with Wayne. That was his way of intimidating me. Spook was not the kind of guy to come out and tell people what he had done even though everyone including the police knew he was responsible.
Someone like spook exists because he instills fear in everyone>>>including the police.
Spook was BLACK. You ever see a piece of anthracite coal? well it is the best representation of his skin color. There are black guys then there are BLACK guys .biggie smalls was white compared to Spook.
Even though spook was a ruthless drug dealer, I have to admit he had honor and was surprisingly honest for a thug. He didn't look or talk or act like a thug either. Those guys usually die before they are 25. Spook was a guy about 35 an OG is what he is considered because like I said the guys who are in this lifestyle have a short life span. 35 is approaching senior status.
The last time I delivered dope to J, spooks main man. J locked the door and asked me to go downstairs with him. Spook and another guy I had never seen before were standing around a bar in J's cellar.
"Where is my motherfuckin' money?"
"What the hell are you talking about spook?!"
"Don't fuck with me and make this worse than it has to be the guy you met in the city this morning came up 5k light!"
"whoa, whoa man! I didn't touch that money except when J gave it to me and I counted it in front of him. It was all there right J"
"Yea it was all there... last night when I gave it to you"
"Smoke this lying fucker Spook"
It may have been the first time I had seen this guy but I knew I didn't like him after that comment.
Spook pulled out an automatic pistol, put it next to him on the bar, and asked J and the other guy to leave.
I could not believe I was going to die for something I didn't do. But it didn't really matter if I stole the money or not. I was the stupid asshole who got involved with this guy even though I knew I shouldn't.
I was scared shitless and mad as hell at the same time.
"You are either gonna believe that nigger or me is what it comes down to spook."
"Did I just hear you say nigger?"
"Yea I said nigger. nigger, nigger, nigger, nigger, nigger, nigger, nigger, nigger, nigger. And you! You are the biggest, blackest, ugliest nigger I have ever seen! "
There was a long pause.
He who speaks first loses.
Instead of shooting, spook started laughing.
"You know what? You are the craziest white boy I have ever seen! You're alright man!"
TBC
MickGinny
User Reviews
Submitted by Degreeless_Capibara (user info) at 2004-11-08 18:17:21 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Holy shit. Either that was really really stupid, or stupid tripe.
Submitted by munkeypants (user info) at 2004-11-08 17:52:37 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
holy shit. either that was really really brilliant or really really stupid.
Submitted by Method (user info) at 2004-07-03 23:20:33 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Can_Always_Trust_A_Liar (user info) at 2004-07-03 22:24:59 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
At first I was tempted to say my respect for you grew after this, then I thought about and changed my mind. You got balls man. Glad you survived.
Submitted by iamhewhoisnot (user info) at 2004-06-08 16:49:51 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
you deserve much praise
Submitted by chipolatte (user info) at 2004-06-04 15:40:17 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
cool, cool.
Submitted by smokymtcsw (user info) at 2004-06-01 23:57:34 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
This writing is amazing. How did you score such a great wife as an adrenaline needing junkie?
Submitted by smokymtcsw (user info) at 2004-06-01 23:57:04 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
son of a
Submitted by smokymtcsw (user info) at 2004-06-01 23:56:48 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Your life has been hard. The craziest guys I know are ex infantry grunts from the marine corps. They went in on a deferment from jail, usually aggravated assault or battery, and when they were in they all smuggled coke from Panama back up to Lejeune because the only guy checking them out when they landed was a corporal who was smuggling also. Those guys are now in a clique that is so tight and so hard I am scared when one of them calls me. I am glad they live up in KY, and deal further north because I do not want to be around them. They all got out of the marines with no diploma and no way to get paid except slanging. They took lots of their gear with them, and they are fairly motivated. The half who do not use but only sell are 4 guys who I think could successfully take down a string of banks. They would make a cool movie, but they would not be open to that suggestion. I am glad to live in an area now where guys like that would have the police on the way.
If they ever did make it all the way to the house, the AR 15 would get used like the old black dude in Belly, but I doubt I would take one of them out before I was dead. Oh well. That thrill of adrenaline thing is something many successful criminals and soldiers share. You would have made a great crooked cop.
Submitted by moebius (user info) at 2004-06-01 23:34:29 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Thank you, sir.
Submitted by MickGinny (user info) at 2004-06-01 15:31:19 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Og= old gangster.
Submitted by moebius (user info) at 2004-06-01 15:17:51 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I really love this series. But what does "OG" mean?
Submitted by Yes (user info) at 2004-06-01 15:11:45 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by antluvdog (user info) at 2004-06-01 14:58:53 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Spook was BLACK. You ever see a piece of anthracite coal? well it is the best representation of his skin color. There are black guys then there are BLACK guys .biggie smalls was white compared to Spook.
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I love that last sentence.
Great job so far. Keep it up!
Submitted by hcp28 (user info) at 2004-06-01 09:23:50 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by dakingisdead (user info) at 2004-06-01 01:07:11 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Black as Coal WE DECIDED TO SKIP LUNCH AND HEAD BACK TO THE MOTEL ROOM TO FUCK INSTEAD.
Malone
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Malone you cunt you is plagiarising me.
I like it!
Submitted by Bigmike (user info) at 2004-05-31 20:22:50 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Right on Mick.
Keep going.
Submitted by shandythedog (user info) at 2004-05-31 18:47:47 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
whether or not this is fiction, one day i'm going to sit down and read the whole thing. i've dipped into it and found it interesting and entertaining. this probably isn't the best part, but i liked the 'nigger nigger nigger' stuff at the end.
Submitted by RateMachine3000 (user info) at 2004-05-31 18:21:39 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Enjoyable.
Submitted by hidden101 (user info) at 2004-05-31 17:47:32 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Nator (user info) at 2004-05-31 17:35:28 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
I can't believe you used the term 'OG'.
Submitted by gain (user info) at 2004-05-31 17:10:22 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
*to*
sorry, but i had to
Submitted by ohlookasquirrel (user info) at 2004-05-31 17:05:11 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by gain (user info) at 2004-05-31 16:59:21 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
i think what seperates these from other things on uber is how easy these are two read. Beautiful.
Submitted by BLITZKREIG_BOB (user info) at 2004-05-31 16:53:50 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Anthracite coal?
I live on a fucking mountain filled with the shit.
I live in the coal region of PA. (AKA The Polish Poconos)
I'm going drinking now.
Submitted by Spiral_Abraxis (user info) at 2004-05-31 16:43:18 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Nigger, nigger!
Submitted by Lucifer_Industries (user info) at 2004-05-31 16:22:47 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Your post should have read:
A Token Of My Infection-11
Black as Coal WE DECIDED TO SKIP LUNCH AND HEAD BACK TO THE MOTEL ROOM TO FUCK INSTEAD.
Malone
Submitted by FATMANTPK (user info) at 2004-05-31 15:49:04 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
You are a crazy white boy to pull that off!