Evil Slumbers - Chapter One (865 hits)
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Submitted by gain (View user info) at 2004-06-01 20:14:25 EDT
I've been writing this for a few months knew, and i've finally finished up. As I was reading this for the final time, i noticed the similarities to this and 'for i have tasted the fruit'. Please note that these two things are completely unrelated.
Deep in everyone's heart, soul or brain, depending on which you subscribe too, slumbers evil. Pain, hate, anger, jealousy are just a few of the residents. Sometimes, people wake them up, and bad things happen. Sometimes, people jolt them awake to the point where they take complete control, and worse things happen.
Back in school, I was never the popular kid. I was quiet, with a few good friends, and usually fairly happy with my life. But then there were those who hated me.
I never knew why Steve, Matt, Mitch and Frasier hated me. I could theorize about that, but there's no point now. All that matters is that these four, since grade 3, plotted to make my life a living hell.
And they succeeded.
Up until prom, they had wreaked small havoc on my life. It was tolerable, but I still hated them. Prom changed things, unfortunately for them. My memories of it are mostly perfect. Hanging out with friends, with my girlfriend, it seemed picture perfect. Right as the big dance was beginning, evil awoke again. Matt climbed up onto the stage, and took the mike. He invited me up. As I climbed up, I noticed that shit-eating grin, on that acne covered face that had appeared right when anything bad happened. He reached into his back pocket. Right away, I knew what it was he was pulling out.
He took out a note, and began to read. He read the entire note that I had written, professing my love for Jim Sherlock. The fact that I was gay was a complete secret. Sometimes, I had even fooled myself. But secretly, I had dated Jim for a long time. It just seemed so... right. I remember when I handed him the note, saw it tumble out of his hands, and Matt pick it up.
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Two weeks after that, Matt showed me the note, complete with my unmistakable signature. I begged him to get rid of it, to end the life of that wretched piece of paper, and in the end, he did. He ended the life of a high quality photo-copy of it, and made three hundred dollars by doing so.
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As Matt read the note to the crowd, a hush fell over it. Then, out of nowhere, the building exploded in laughter. I was forced to run away, like a dog that shit on the carpet, my tail between my legs. My life had been ruined. I couldn't face anybody I knew. My parents learned of it, and became cold towards me. After locking myself in my room for seventeen days, I ran away. I moved to California, where my dreams had always pointed. I went to university, and was an okay student. But in the back of my head, hatred slumbered, and occasionly stirred.
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Submitted by Freight_Train (user info) at 2004-10-11 19:28:33 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
you are a fag too
lol
Submitted by Heimdallsman (user info) at 2004-06-02 11:31:27 EDT (#)
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Submitted by I_Have_a_Kristen_Fetish (user info) at 2004-06-01 22:48:06 EDT (#)
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Submitted by youarsoghey (user info) at 2004-06-01 21:49:07 EDT (#)
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Submitted by Tom (user info) at 2004-06-01 21:23:20 (#)
Ranking: -2
Meh meh meh meh meh.
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He's pissing me off just a tad.
Submitted by SoxSexSax (user info) at 2004-06-01 21:29:10 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Pretty good, shows a lot of potential. I'll keep an interested eye on any further installments.
Submitted by gain (user info) at 2004-06-01 21:28:21 EDT (#)
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why is that when Tom does this, he's rewarded for it?
-2 for tom
Submitted by youarsoghey (user info) at 2004-06-01 21:23:58 EDT (#)
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No Comment
Submitted by Tom (user info) at 2004-06-01 21:23:20 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Meh meh meh meh meh.
Submitted by gain (user info) at 2004-06-01 21:11:56 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
if i were you, i'd blame memory. He isn't that great at his job.
Submitted by Can_Always_Trust_A_Liar (user info) at 2004-06-01 21:03:59 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
all right, i suspected a serial.
i'm such a fucking dumbshit. it has Chapter One in the title, OF COURSE IT'S A SERIAL!
Submitted by gain (user info) at 2004-06-01 20:43:27 EDT (#)
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this isn't a true story. It's a cool idea i came up with a while back while eating Habanero peppers. It sounds a little weird, but it's explained in chapter 2.
And yes, the editing is pretty bad.
Submitted by Can_Always_Trust_A_Liar (user info) at 2004-06-01 20:42:18 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Is this a true story?
I was a bit confused at parts, like how prom changes things in an unfortunate way fro the likes of Matt.
Submitted by UlfGabe (user info) at 2004-06-01 20:33:02 EDT (#)
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No Comment
Submitted by gain (user info) at 2004-06-01 20:20:33 EDT (#)
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and what would THAT mean?
Submitted by DancingHobo (user info) at 2004-06-01 20:19:37 EDT (#)
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Lemme guess, UCSF?
Submitted by gain (user info) at 2004-06-01 20:18:50 EDT (#)
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and what would that mean?
Submitted by shitfuck (user info) at 2004-06-01 20:17:52 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Hmmm--you have a very, very strong grasp, and by this I mean understanding, of, but not excluding, commas and their phrasing in punctuatory exercise.
As for the story...
Nicht Schlect.