Closer than Close (740 hits)
Category: Politics -> IraqRating: 0 on 7 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by <jamespeddle.at.hotmail.com> (View user info) at 2004-07-01 06:44:06 EDT
I held you close,
You were everything to me,
My mind filled with what we could be.
I nearly cried when you said you loved me,
And I Did cry when you left me.
You were the reason I got up each and every day,
Now the only reason is the debts I pay.
Sometimes I sit thinking about memories gone by.
Both of us getting dumped outside,
Or when I trapped you finger in the door,
And when you whimpered, I loved you more.
And then it all ended what went wrong,
I ponder I think, yet to no avail,
You loved another, nothing more I could do,
No point being in love, if they don't love you.
Sometimes I sit, thinking about what have could have been,
But there's no point, nothing but dreams.
Occasionally we see each other,
And I remember then,
How it is I loved you, what and why and when.
But as time goes on we all move on,
You have your boy friend a child as well,
So it's time I moved to,
The future is not to dwell.
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Submitted by Spiral_Abraxis (user info) at 2004-07-29 10:53:39 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
+2 for you!
Submitted by Socialist_Joe (user info) at 2004-07-08 02:48:12 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
No Comment
Submitted by totaImusicmaniac (user info) at 2004-07-01 09:56:36 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
That was touching
Submitted by Walrus_King (user info) at 2004-07-01 08:59:21 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Well.... That's my average rateing taking another knock
Submitted by NetProphet (user info) at 2004-07-01 08:14:04 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
... eh
Submitted by euripidestrousers (user info) at 2004-07-01 08:07:28 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
No Comment
Submitted by Beer_bong (user info) at 2004-07-01 07:04:38 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Nobody cares.