Lips For the Reading (976 hits)
Category: RomanceRating: 1.64 on 29 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by Parlor Trick (View user info) at 2004-07-05 19:26:42 EDT
The man behind the counter hasn't seen me yet.
He is deeply beautiful. As some men are in the most powerful way.
"May I help you?" His voice touches me first. Our eyes are meeting, deciding.
"Yes. I want you to be naked. I want to feel our lips touch open and hesitating. I want you to kiss me as if nothing could stop you.
I want to sink into your body slowly with my face on your neck so I can smell your skin and taste your salt with the tip of my tongue.
I want to my press my chest against yours as if they never should have been apart. I want to align our fingers, palm to palm, arms straight, locked at our sides, clutching, leaning, pushing forward. Hips hard together, asking, insisting, begging.
I want to feel you surrender. I want to feel you attack. Tangle our legs denying all space between us. I want to whisper in your ear "touch me, taste me, seize me". Feel your grip tighten and release control to you.
I want to stand before you uncensored and have your eyes draw my skin leading your hands and your mouth over my existence. I want you to permit me, to direct me to take you as my reward. I want to lay with you, mix with you, and feel your frenzy. I want your weight on me within me, your force to open and take me prisoner."
"May I help you?"
"No...just looking...thank you".
User Reviews
Submitted by electrictoothsyndrome (user info) at 2005-10-20 12:12:26 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Pooz (user info) at 2004-08-24 04:36:30 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
PISS
Submitted by ruthless (user info) at 2004-08-10 16:29:55 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I know I've read this before, why didn't I rate it? Must've been drunk... or something....
This is great, thank you.
Submitted by CoachMagirk27 (user info) at 2004-07-08 22:40:35 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Meh.
Love,
Peepoepoewitz
Submitted by Anansie (user info) at 2004-07-07 17:55:35 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Smurfs (user info) at 2004-07-07 17:52:58 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Quite good, and not gratuitous
Submitted by gbusman (user info) at 2004-07-07 17:52:52 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Damn, Baby, all you gots ta do is ask!
-Bus
Submitted by Kristen (user info) at 2004-07-07 17:43:31 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
VERY nice.
Submitted by boomslang (user info) at 2004-07-06 10:01:25 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Nice work.
Submitted by Random Joe at 2004-07-06 09:12:54 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Nice!
Submitted by Bellebrown (user info) at 2004-07-06 07:59:19 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
No Comment
Submitted by fluff (user info) at 2004-07-06 07:42:28 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Woooops....Sorry about that...this should have been a +2
Submitted by fluff (user info) at 2004-07-06 07:41:46 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
No Comment
Submitted by JMG114 (user info) at 2004-07-06 07:32:43 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Ah, subtext.
Submitted by ParlorTrick (user info) at 2004-07-06 02:10:35 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Thanks for the reviews (with one obvious exception).
[Let the record reflect that I think of nothing but...ah...the Bible the other 364 days of the year, really.]
Submitted by bart (user info) at 2004-07-06 01:01:33 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I want to take a cold shower.
Submitted by GodChicken (user info) at 2004-07-05 23:59:55 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I still love the little fragments at the bottom.
This is good writing, and then coming from what appears to be a near-exotically pretty woman, it makes it all that much better.
Submitted by munkeypants (user info) at 2004-07-05 22:50:37 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
damn! i thought you were talking to me!
Submitted by shitfuck (user info) at 2004-07-05 20:54:58 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Good.
I like your name so +2.
Submitted by Donitsu2002 (user info) at 2004-07-05 20:36:05 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by CystMaster (user info) at 2004-07-05 20:25:39 (#)
Ranking: 2
I totally agree. Same thing happened here http://www.ubersite.com/m/37531
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Cystmaster i hope you die you little linkwhoring piece of trash.
+4 for your post
-2 cause that kid is an idiot.
Submitted by comicbookguy (user info) at 2004-07-05 20:14:53 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
This should have a much higher rating
Submitted by checkyourmail (user info) at 2004-07-05 20:06:22 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
This made me want to puke...you must like men...I'd give you my number but I don't want herpes.
Submitted by dakingisdead (user info) at 2004-07-05 19:51:11 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
hahahahahahaha
I have been there done that so many times!
You captured the moment perfectly!
Submitted by euripidestrousers (user info) at 2004-07-05 19:42:30 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
No Comment
Submitted by tartpumper (user info) at 2004-07-05 19:34:47 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
No Comment
Submitted by tartpumper (user info) at 2004-07-05 19:34:31 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
I have a semi
Submitted by comicbookguy (user info) at 2004-07-05 19:31:07 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I just turned gay
Submitted by FilthyAssistant (user info) at 2004-07-05 19:30:47 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
A well-written post and a semi-gratuitous tit shot: bravo.
Submitted by Spiral_Abraxis (user info) at 2004-07-05 19:29:53 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Short and sweet.