Despair (585 hits)
Category: NoneRating: -0.96 on 15 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by <adamchalland.at.hotmail.com> (View user info) at 2004-07-09 15:49:59 EDT
I sit down, I stand up
Cold, alone, tired of this. I despair
Nothing is there, nothing is here, so
I feel no happiness, What am I? Fucked
Why won't it end?
It must.
What must?
A wall, sadness, I am climbing up.
Can it, must it, will it end?
Is there despair?
I stare, distraught, fucked.
Could it be so?
Could it not be so?
I must, you must, it must.
Why is he not fucked?
And I am so fucked up.
Ice, barren, despair.
Nothing for miles, There is no end.
Where is the end?
It is so
Such tire, lonely despair.
Look it must
Down, up
All are fucked.
Fucked?
End
Up.
So
Must
Despair
Where is despair?
Even despair fucked.
Who must?
Can I end.
Who can be so
Up.
I feel so fucked up.
When must it end?
I despair.
User Reviews
Submitted by electrictoothsyndrome (user info) at 2004-07-10 01:03:34 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
Personally, i love poetry, but this is crap dude. Sorry. Try reading some Wordsworth or some Poe...That will cheer you up. :)
Submitted by lickalotopuss (user info) at 2004-07-09 19:56:54 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
fuck, man
go drink youself into oblivion then run over some nuns
Submitted by disAbled (user info) at 2004-07-09 17:35:46 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
You can't call something poetry just because you put in broken line form. If a piece of writing consists of broken thoughts and unfinished semi-musings it isn't worth writing or posting, let alone reading. Holy shit, read your own material and ask yourself if any other being in the universe could possibly find it inspiring. This isn't poetry. It's just another pile of Web-kiddie cyber-drivel that makes me sad for the poetic art. Stop embarassing your sad ass and write something that you have more mastery of...like an obituary for your vision of artistic recognition.
Submitted by griffsrgr8 (user info) at 2004-07-09 17:31:44 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
Despair is not taking a dump in 3 days.
Submitted by Murphy1844 (user info) at 2004-07-09 17:09:22 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Wait until you hit puberty and graduate from high school and drop out of college and are thrust in to this unregulated capitalist sea and expected to at least tred water long enough to keep just your nose above so you can breath on ninety-nine cent menus and generic cigarettes and when you finally have enough money to survive you blow the rest on cheap beer to mask how pathetic life is... how pathetic you've become.
Then we'll talk about despair.
Murphy
Submitted by spedmonkey (user info) at 2004-07-09 16:25:26 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by jme7551 (user info) at 2004-07-09 16:20:05 (#)
Ranking: 0
my underwear was made in korea
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wrong post there...
Submitted by gain (user info) at 2004-07-09 16:24:48 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
We don't take to kindly to your folk here, city boy.
Submitted by jme7551 (user info) at 2004-07-09 16:20:05 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
my underwear was made in korea
Submitted by Adman (user info) at 2004-07-09 16:11:21 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
I understand, I just needed to get something off my chest.
Submitted by CoachMagirk27 (user info) at 2004-07-09 16:08:00 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Sorry man but I only like poetry in songs. Otherwise it's lame.
Love,
Peepoepoewitz
Submitted by Method (user info) at 2004-07-09 15:54:07 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
I think this poem just gave me gonorrhea
Submitted by BLITZKREIG_BOB (user info) at 2004-07-09 15:52:26 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
You're one of those kids in the mall that dress all in black and paint your nails black, aren't you?
Submitted by Adman (user info) at 2004-07-09 15:52:08 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
I'm having a bad day.
Submitted by spedmonkey (user info) at 2004-07-09 15:50:49 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
We ain't big on poetry here.