Where Did I Go Wrong? (499 hits)
Category: Quotes & Stories -> PoetryRating: -0.78 on 11 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by facts (View user info) at 2004-07-10 01:57:11 EDT
Where did I go wrong?
I walked a line
not without contempt
but I walked it straight
My reward has been this
this that which tears at my soul
Don't I deserve better than
effusive screams and cheap adoration
The light says no
WOOO MCDONALDS/HABEEB
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Submitted by StabkiII (user info) at 2004-08-27 21:48:21 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Har Har Peener
Submitted by StabkiIl (user info) at 2004-08-27 21:46:14 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Great!
Submitted by LizardSpark (user info) at 2004-08-24 21:09:56 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
I vote for Albuquerque. Walking straight always leads to trouble. Try walking forward.
Submitted by FetishII (user info) at 2004-08-24 20:59:21 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
One more for good measure.
Submitted by I_Have_a_Kristen_Fetish (user info) at 2004-08-24 20:56:42 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Next time you give me a retaliation rating, make sure I'm the one who actually spammed you.
Submitted by facts (user info) at 2004-08-24 20:02:21 (#)
Ranking: -2
there you go.
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Submitted by facts (user info) at 2004-08-24 20:02:11 (#)
Ranking: -2
one more
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Submitted by facts (user info) at 2004-08-24 20:01:54 (#)
Ranking: -2
woops.
You gave me this for a rating by I_Have_A_Kristen_Fetish_, notice the extra underscore fagot. That wasn't me. However, this is.
Submitted by I_Have_a_Kristen_Fetish_ (user info) at 2004-08-24 19:21:48 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
No Comment
Submitted by denim9 (user info) at 2004-07-18 15:35:03 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Everything you ever wanted to know about facts
User id: 7539
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Thanks!
Submitted by munkeypants (user info) at 2004-07-10 19:49:32 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
very short but not bad.
+1 for mentioning habeeb ... or are you habeeb? wtf? why confuse me?
it only makes my life difficult.
Submitted by Rob at 2004-07-10 19:33:36 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
I thought it was fine personally. But to answer your question, you went wrong by posting poetry on ubersite.
Submitted by I_Have_a_Kristen_Fetish (user info) at 2004-07-10 06:47:09 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Poetry should be marked as such in the title.
Placing it in that category doesn't always shield my eyes.
Submitted by Genko (user info) at 2004-07-10 02:03:28 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Good poem, what made you write it?