not bad for the morning after (601 hits)
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Submitted by Morg Evil <morgan_routledge.at.hotmail.com> (View user info) at 2004-08-21 14:07:28 EDT
this is a something i made late last night and it still sounds not too bad.
tell me what you think.
A breath of air and sigh of relief
The grounds been tiled and full of seed
My eyes open with disbelief
All the dirt is covered with weed
I pull and pluck
Pick and care
I just smile and
Run my fingers thought my hair.
The summers sun is hot and wilts the crop
The well is far and nearly dry
I'll carry the water; I can't stop
With my sweat, it will grow twice as high
That fool on the hill,
He must be mentally ill
Every year he works and toils
And puts his seeds in hostel soils
Every year his crop wilts and dies
He is only lord of the flys
You can't stop me, I'll never quit
So gather round and have a sit
Watch the fool work in strife
I love it all, my simple life
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Submitted by munkeypants (user info) at 2004-08-22 13:00:56 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
it was okay. good effort..
id that you? i want to make love to your sexy arms.
Submitted by Evil_Morg (user info) at 2004-08-21 16:23:55 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
sorry for the repost, i was damn high last night
Submitted by youarsoghey (user info) at 2004-08-21 15:38:58 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Caption contest:
"Disgruntled Scandanavian Snaps: Uses Oversized Scope on Small Gun"
Submitted by dirty_gook (user info) at 2004-08-21 15:32:24 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Munkeypants told me that she'd give me 5 pieces of pez candy if I link my post to all the posts.
http://www.ubersite.com/m/42478
Submitted by WiKi (user info) at 2004-08-21 15:11:25 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Decent.
Submitted by Fartman (user info) at 2004-08-21 15:06:24 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
How many times are you gonna post this?
Submitted by Degreeless_Capibara (user info) at 2004-08-21 14:27:48 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
TOO MUCH POETRY!
hehehe