Conversation After (583 hits)
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Rating: 0.33 on 16 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by J Baker <Superjack11058.at.yahoo.com> (View user info) at 2004-08-22 04:48:45 EDT
"Hello."
"Yeah, it's me."
"I've been waiting to hear from you."
"I know..."
"Did you do it?"
"...ah...yeah. I did it..."
"I could tell by how excited you sound. So, was I right?"
"Oh, man, were you ever. She came over...and..."
"It was good, wasn't it?"
"Fuck yes it was good. I've never felt anything like her! It was like seeing the face of God..."
"Like tasting heaven?"
"I was just going to say that! You were right...there's nothing better on this earth."
"Slow down, breathe a little. It's always the most exquisite the first time."
"Well, you were right about something else, too. Now that I've done her, I want to do it again! I don't think I ever want to stop."
"I know."
"Can you come over? I'm still coming down from the high...the amazing way she felt...I'm still a little shaky."
"Yes, I'll be right over. Did you leave her in the bathtub as I suggested?"
"Yes."
"I'll bring the garbage bags."
User Reviews
Submitted by doctorj24 (user info) at 2005-06-16 18:12:01 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
So-so.
Submitted by CoffeeAndSmokes (user info) at 2005-02-26 23:04:25 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
this also deserves a higher rating. it's just creepy and really creative.
Submitted by omnifica (user info) at 2004-09-01 17:45:49 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
oooh baby
Submitted by bakerlover (user info) at 2004-08-23 22:26:50 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
wow. can i give the ring back?
Submitted by Wish_I_Were (user info) at 2004-08-23 01:46:20 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
This deserves a higher rating.
Submitted by Avals (user info) at 2004-08-22 13:12:51 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Damnit, this was halfway decent!
Heaven tastes like pussy. Totally!
What?
Submitted by tinactin (user info) at 2004-08-22 13:05:46 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
I wonder what Heaven actually tastes like? I always imagined pork rinds.
Submitted by munkeypants (user info) at 2004-08-22 12:19:25 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
interesting...
Submitted by blujnbbyqn (user info) at 2004-08-22 05:54:06 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Somehow I don't think so. At first I thought the convo was about passing some slut around.(A mighty great fuck, but still a GIRL slut passed between BOYS.)In the end it was plain to me that, while both participants of the dialog may be male, they are discussing the thrill of murder.
IMO, peer pressure at it's best!
Michelle
Submitted by Ex_Lux_Astrum (user info) at 2004-08-22 05:48:51 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Submitted by Siren (user info) at 2004-08-22 05:36:40 (#)
Ranking: 1
I didn't think it was that bad.
How is killing someone gay, guys?
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They killed a woman didn't they? ....Flaming Ass-pirates for sure...........
Submitted by Method (user info) at 2004-08-22 05:39:54 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
trust me, it's gay.
If this post could talk, it would lisp.
Submitted by Siren (user info) at 2004-08-22 05:36:40 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
I didn't think it was that bad.
How is killing someone gay, guys?
Submitted by blujnbbyqn (user info) at 2004-08-22 05:23:11 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Freaky Deaky
Michelle
Submitted by Ex_Lux_Astrum (user info) at 2004-08-22 05:13:24 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
"Conversation After" After what? ...I tend to agree with Method-- a flaming felch-a-thon is what.
Submitted by seanfogy (user info) at 2004-08-22 05:05:26 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
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Submitted by Method (user info) at 2004-08-22 04:57:20 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
This smells like gay.