Fetish Being Nice Because I'm Accidentally in Loveeeeee (795 hits)
Category: RomanceRating: 0 on 25 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by Lojo, I_Have_a_Kristen_Fetish (View user info) at 2004-08-24 01:34:04 EDT
Our first meeting as lovers was short. Brief. Confusing and awkward. Afterwards neither of us wanted to look at the other. We weren't sure what we did or if we even liked it. The truth was we were driven into each other's arms by a cherub of a different sort who preferred the name Captain Morgan to Cupid. But be it by fate or by fermented grains, the end result was the same.
Darkness. Nakedness. Frantic groping in the heat as our tongues sought to meet. Breathing and then, the moment. The moment comes when for a brief instant, the human side re-emerges and grabs for control from the animal feelings that drive your thrusts and moans. When both of you realize you just want to be held, to be close, to feel another human being's soft breath on your bare skin.
Then nature reasserts itself and the desire to finish roars in both of you. The look fades from your eyes and it's back to the business of thrusting as some half echo in the back of your mind wonders "did we just have an understanding?"
It was 3 months later when I saw her next. Neither of us wanted to speak about that night. We talked some about the weather, how I was doing in my new job. She asked if I was seeing anyone. I told her no. She offered to bake me some cookies sometime, but I could tell it was just idle conversation, and that she was no more eager to bake for me then I was to go and pick them up.
The day grew late, and I finished the last of my coffee, grimacing as the now cold bitter taste washed over my tongue.
"I'll see you some other time" she started to say. Nodding I slowly got to my feet while reaching for the bill.
Our hands brushed. Lingered for a moment. Then pulled quickly away, as if some hidden springs had uncoiled in both our hands.
I coughed shyly, and tried to explain how I would pay, mumbling and stuttering in the half word-half redfaced language only the lovestricken know, and the heartbroken try to forget.
And she gently cupped her hand under my chin, raising it up gently till my downcast eyes met hers.
You know, I've read so many times people talking about "getting lost in someone's eyes". I've always chalked it up to weakly silly people, trying to justify the beauty of their attachment to someone in a world that doesn't offer much better then air to breathe and water to drink.
But now I think I understand. It's not the color that gets you. It's the understanding. Something says, "I'm facing the world with you." You lose yourself for an instant realizing that, just for that moment, a moment you try your hardest to burn into your mind for an eternity, just for that moment, you're not alone.
Looking into the deep blue eyes that so perfectly matched my own, I thought how I almost threw it all away. I was ashamed of our first meeting when I should have been embracing it, and the beauty it foreshadowed. My sister gave us a disgusted look as I bent in to kiss her, tongue and all, but I didn't care. Fuck her. Some things are more important then whether or not family approves.
For the 24 years I'd known her, everyone had always called her Debbie.
That night I took her into my bed again. Sober. She was my first woman, and I'd decided that even though I was still young, she would be my only, from that day forward.
You see I've never called her Debbie.
Until that final night, she was alway. . .mom.
User Reviews
Submitted by Zoidberg (user info) at 2004-11-29 18:32:15 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
I wuv u vindication bot you were a stud and a half
Submitted by Degreeless_Capibara (user info) at 2004-08-25 18:55:45 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
I think you like me telling you that you suck. Of course you could just ask anyone else here. You suck major goat balls, asswipe.
Submitted by ThatOneGirl (user info) at 2004-08-25 16:25:13 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
ew
Submitted by dirty_gook (user info) at 2004-08-24 23:17:23 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
You suck balls.
Submitted by Degreeless_Capibara (user info) at 2004-08-24 23:16:55 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Sorry, you must not have heard right.
Submitted by Degreeless_Capibara (user info) at 2004-08-24 20:12:43 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Yeah, did I mention you suck?
Submitted by Degreeless_Capibara (user info) at 2004-08-24 11:38:56 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
If +2s were given for everything that was "well-written", my average rating would be 1 instead of 0.
Submitted by Fleadh (user info) at 2004-08-24 11:22:57 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
cos you're a wanker
Submitted by jumpinjellyfish (user info) at 2004-08-24 10:32:05 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Well written = +2.
Disgusting concept = -1.
Submitted by Stabkill (user info) at 2004-08-24 10:31:29 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
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Submitted by Tom (user info) at 2004-08-24 01:45:59 (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by Tom (user info) at 2004-08-24 01:33:03 (#)
Ranking: 0
At first I thought these things might be Fetish, just trying to draw attention to himself. Then I realized, Fetish just can't write this well.
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Fetish can't write this well? HE CAN'T WRITE AT ALL!!!
This story plainly kicked ass.
Submitted by lojope (user info) at 2004-08-24 08:44:23 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
+2 for my name
Submitted by firefly (user info) at 2004-08-24 08:38:05 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
No Comment
Submitted by I_Have_a_Kristen_Fetish (user info) at 2004-08-24 06:46:11 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
No Comment
Submitted by Falco (user info) at 2004-08-24 04:21:15 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Fucking ass minus twoing all my posts with that pooz account
Submitted by Siren (user info) at 2004-08-24 03:57:17 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by pakifier (user info) at 2004-08-24 03:35:38 (#)
Ranking: 2
I don't care who wrote this or why. All I have to say is excellent writing skills and that they are one sick fuck for that unexpected finish.
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Amen.
Submitted by pakifier (user info) at 2004-08-24 03:35:38 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I don't care who wrote this or why. All I have to say is excellent writing skills and that they are one sick fuck for that unexpected finish.
Submitted by maiorano84 (user info) at 2004-08-24 03:28:05 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I am thoroughly disgusted, but the writing was great.
That, and I totally got a boner from reading this.
Submitted by Circe (user info) at 2004-08-24 03:08:14 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by Tom (user info) at 2004-08-24 01:45:59 (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by Tom (user info) at 2004-08-24 01:33:03 (#)
Ranking: 0
At first I thought these things might be Fetish, just trying to draw attention to himself. Then I realized, Fetish just can't write this well.
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Yeah. Truly awesome literary skills, right here.
Submitted by Bigmike (user info) at 2004-08-24 01:57:38 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
You're boring.
Submitted by Spookster (user info) at 2004-08-24 01:54:38 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Made me laugh.
You dirty fuck.
Submitted by NetProphet (user info) at 2004-08-24 01:49:12 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Here we go again.
Punchline was unexpected, though.
Submitted by Tom (user info) at 2004-08-24 01:45:59 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by Tom (user info) at 2004-08-24 01:33:03 (#)
Ranking: 0
At first I thought these things might be Fetish, just trying to draw attention to himself. Then I realized, Fetish just can't write this well.
Submitted by VindicationBot (user info) at 2004-08-24 01:39:13 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
you know it turned you on cunt
Submitted by honeycake (user info) at 2004-08-24 01:36:46 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
No Comment
Submitted by VindicationBot (user info) at 2004-08-24 01:36:34 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
haha you did your mom
"MOM!!! Tom was being mean to me!"
"There there baby. Mommy will make it all better. Dammit. Did your butt plug fall in again?"