another motivational piece (323 hits)
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Submitted by Pakifier <pakifier.at.jackpot.com> (View user info) at 2004-08-25 03:38:12 EDT
Dreamers are needed to ensure the progression of man, without dreamers we wouldn't have gone to the moon, or even have the computer with which you are all reading this message.
With out your Dreams you are nothing more than a mindless drone, forever going about your daily duties, with no more thought for the future then the ants beneath your feet.
Remember that a dream can awaken a spirit and enliven a soul, and a person that dreams is a leader of men.
While a person that does not dream is but a follower never to have a thought of their own.
Thus Dreamers are the truest essence of life.
With Love just being the joining of two dreams on a path of happiness.
And while that dream is shared, life is the sweetest that it will ever be, and when that dreams fades, or is simply ended then life can seem to be at its worst that is when you need to open(close) your eyes and let your dreams lead you to your destiny.
Like or Hate it I really don't care, This is what I believe. If you don't like it spamm me with -2's all day long I write for my enjoyment and that of my friends. However, on finding Uber, I thought I might be able to get others feed back(people who don't care about my feelings) and possible improve my style and form.
User Reviews
Submitted by SilvrWolf (user info) at 2004-08-25 06:46:54 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Take the structure suggestions to heart, and you'll do just fine here.
Submitted by bart (user info) at 2004-08-25 04:28:09 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
No Comment
Submitted by pakifier (user info) at 2004-08-25 04:16:20 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by Smokehayze (user info) at 2004-08-25 03:47:39 (#)
Ranking: -1
Please use paragraphs, it will make your work much easier to read. That would be my comment on your structure.
As for the content, I fundamentally disagree with what you say. Dreamers tend to be just that - people who dream - not people of action.
People dreamed of travelling to the a long time ago, but it wasn't until the late 60's anyone actually got off their ass and did it. There is nothing wrong with dreaming, however it won't account for anything unless you back it up with some action.
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Ok, I will bear that in mind about the structure. And I have to agree that you need to back up your dreams with action, I have to point out that People have been attemting to get to the moon for years that is how rockets become into existence the Chinese created the rocket years ago it wasn't until the 60's that the technology needed became available.
Submitted by Smokehayze (user info) at 2004-08-25 03:48:50 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
That should've said "travelling to the moon" in there. My brain just turned off for a moment there.
Submitted by Smokehayze (user info) at 2004-08-25 03:47:39 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
Please use paragraphs, it will make your work much easier to read. That would be my comment on your structure.
As for the content, I fundamentally disagree with what you say. Dreamers tend to be just that - people who dream - not people of action.
People dreamed of travelling to the a long time ago, but it wasn't until the late 60's anyone actually got off their ass and did it. There is nothing wrong with dreaming, however it won't account for anything unless you back it up with some action.
Submitted by Random Joe at 2004-08-25 03:41:42 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
o for effort, -2 for boredom. sorry bro. im stoned and need something interesting to read. not some american bullshit about dreams.
peace out.