Dream me a dream. (313 hits)
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Submitted by MysitcStarLite (View user info) at 2004-08-30 12:47:26 EDT
Looking at the runway, I realized I need to get out of my realm and explore my options. I turned around and looked blankly at the long stretch of road and my rusted, piece of crap of a car. "How will I do it?" I wondered to myself. Slowly, I walked back to my car as I soaked in the summer sun. I reached for the handle of my car, when suddenly, I am lifted into the air. I look up and see nothing. On my shoulders, I feel claws digging into my skin. The world begins to spin...glitter fills the air...the soft coo of a baby echos through my ears.... "What is happening to me?" I whisper. I close my eyes for a moment. Suddenly, a gust of wind blows hard into my face. I open my eyes to see a large creature cloaked in black staring at me with it's fangs showing. Behind the creature, a child darts out and giggles madly. I try to open my mouth to say something, but I am silenced....unable to speak, and unable to move. The creature gets closer to my face and starts moving it's head quickly while letting out screams and angry words. It's eyes roll into the back of it's head, then it becomes deathly quiet. I look back over at the child. His face changes into the face of a lion, then into a cluster of bubbles. A wind picks up and sends the bubbles soaring. A stray bubble floats it's way over to the creature and lands on it's shoulder, causing the creature to blow up into a flock of doves. A sense of awe sweeps over me at the sight. I close my eyes for a moment. Suddenly I find myself at my car again with the summer sun beating down on me....."I am thirsty." I climb into my car and drive away.
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Submitted by MysticStarLite (user info) at 2004-08-30 13:06:30 EDT (#)
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Thanks. I realize how messy it looks. ^_^ It kinda resembles my thought process a bit. I will try to make it neater next time and mess with it a bit in Word before actually making a submission.
I havent written my odd "stories" in a long time, so it is going to take me a bit to jump back into the swing of things.
Submitted by NetProphet (user info) at 2004-08-30 13:02:44 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Not too bad. Collect your thoughts, edit and revise your posts before submission, and use paragraphs next time.
Submitted by JMG114 (user info) at 2004-08-30 13:02:07 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
This was a nice first post. Do you think that it might've worked better as a poem?
Submitted by TigerLilly (user info) at 2004-08-30 13:01:13 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I liked this.