Creatures Of The Night: Part 19 (1073 hits)
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Submitted by Matt Maiorano (View user info) at 2004-08-31 14:21:18 EDT
Part 1 - http://www.ubersite.com/m/38393
Part 2 - http://www.ubersite.com/m/38508
Part 3 - http://www.ubersite.com/m/38615
Part 4 - http://www.ubersite.com/m/38703
Part 5 - http://www.ubersite.com/m/38751
Part 6 - http://www.ubersite.com/m/38831
Part 7 - http://www.ubersite.com/m/38916
Part 8 - http://www.ubersite.com/m/39047
Part 9 - http://www.ubersite.com/m/39203
Part 10 - http://www.ubersite.com/m/40182
Part 11 - http://www.ubersite.com/m/41473
Part 12 - http://www.ubersite.com/m/41692
Part 13 - http://www.ubersite.com/m/42276
Part 14 - http://www.ubersite.com/m/42419
Part 15 - http://www.ubersite.com/m/42723
Part 16 - http://www.ubersite.com/m/42849
Part 17 - http://www.ubersite.com/m/43014
Part 18 - http://www.ubersite.com/m/43406
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Cale stood in front of the council next to Ajin. He didn't care anymore. There was nothing left for him to do but to throw away his pride, and beg for his brother's life.
"Elders, I request for you to hear my words."
The council silently listened. Cale could feel the tears streaming down his face.
"As you know, we are a race of vast intelligence, courage, and power. We have taken it upon ourselves to determine that the human race consists of nothing more than self-destruction, greed, and hatred. My father was killed by humans, and my mother died from grief. I have sworn revenge on the humans for my entire life, but yet it was the acts of two humans who saved the life of my brother."
"What are you asking from us, Cale? Would you like us to simply 'remove' a werewolf tradition that has existed far longer than you can even begin to understand?"
"No. Keep your silly traditions, and keep your vanity. I am simply begging you to let me keep my brother."
One of the elders rose to his feet, his face flushed with anger.
"He is a traitor! We will NOT allow him to live! How can you not understand this!?"
"I understand your reasoning only too well, elders. I had hoped it would not come to this."
Cale slowly rose to his feet and turned his back to the council.
"YOU WILL NOT TURN YOUR BACK TO US, BOY!! That is, unless you choose to share in your brother's fate! Now turn around!!"
Cale stopped. He turned, just as he was told. The elder grinned. But his grin soon faded when Cale suddenly grabbed Ajin's arm in a lock, and brought his nail to his jugular. Ajin yelped in surprise.
"Send out a scout immediately. You will allow my brother to live, or else this assassin dies along with every last member of this council."
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It felt as if he were in another world.
Please, let it be a dream. It has to be a dream. Wake up. Please wake up. None of this is real. This can't be me. She's going to be there when I wake up. She'll have breakfast for me, and I'll get to tell her everything. Isaac will be there too, and we'll go hunting together.
Liek ignored the two figures standing over the bodies. They weren't real. None of it was. It just couldn't be.
He felt himself kneeling down over the girl he loved, and stroked the side of her face. Her jugular had been cut open. She had died rather quickly.
Wake up.
Maybe his will wasn't strong enough. Maybe this was one of those dreams that he couldn't manipulate. He leaned down and kissed her. Her eyes would open, and they would run away together. The two nearby assassins would never catch them. Her lips were still soft and warm, yet his first kiss was never returned. The reality of the situation struck him full-force in the stomach, and he found himself unable to breathe.
He already knew the story:
They found Isaac and asked him where the traitor was. Isaac wouldn't tell them. They attacked, and Isaac tried to defend himself. It wasn't enough, and he was easily slaughtered. He was stabbed repeatedly, and his aorta had been severed. They heard the screams of Hannah, and they finished her off. Then, they waited for him to come back.
Leave none alive. Kill the traitor and those who helped him. Werewolves had to be ruthless in order to be superior. Was this what superiority was? Was this the heritage that he was born into? Why could he not live the way he wanted? What was the point to all of this!?
Liek could feel the tears falling freely. Something was said to him. He couldn't hear it.
Some would say that Liek's anguished roar echoed in the hearts of every werewolf. For the first time, a werewolf swore revenge on his own kind. It was at that point that something inside of Liek snapped, and he attacked the two assassins with a fury that no werewolf could ever comprehend.
to be continued....
User Reviews
Submitted by thecaes (user info) at 2005-01-10 19:25:05 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
I liked a lot of the lines in this story. But the sympathy I might have had for Leik was pretty much made nonexistent, because it's pretty much his own fault that those two died, which he must have known the entire time unless he was an idiot. Of course they would be killed, boo fucking hoo.
I like your stories, but I think there's some tuning that needs to be done.
Submitted by Garet_Jax (user info) at 2004-09-02 16:46:22 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I can't believe you could rate this anything less than 2
The only thing I can say at the end of this is "Aw hell yeah!"
Submitted by causeican (user info) at 2004-09-02 13:01:31 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
write the whole fucking story you whore licking cunt
Submitted by cnympho247 (user info) at 2004-09-02 01:57:12 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Brdn_Nkd (user info) at 2004-09-01 08:35:21 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Good Stuff!
Submitted by Sambuca310 (user info) at 2004-08-31 23:20:39 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Liek should go Matrix on these fuck's asses. Then Cale should kill all the council members. Then Hannah should wake up and Liek should plug her in the pooper.
Submitted by creep_firebombing (user info) at 2004-08-31 20:02:06 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Fucking MORE already!
Submitted by Lechuga (user info) at 2004-08-31 19:13:16 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I think the "To Be Continued" is the equivalent of blueballs. . . Think about it, reading a story this good is like a blowjob, except after 30 seconds it's over, and You have blueballs. Damn it that made no sense.
Submitted by indepth25 (user info) at 2004-08-31 16:41:23 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I actually said out loud "Oh you fucking bastard" when I read to be continued....
Now I must stop drawing attention to myself at work, thanks a lot! hahaha Purely amazing.
Submitted by cwl989 (user info) at 2004-08-31 16:31:07 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
This series makes me hard.
Submitted by munkeypants (user info) at 2004-08-31 16:29:28 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
It's not a dream??? WTF?
He better start rippin' shit up!
Submitted by engine13 (user info) at 2004-08-31 16:03:19 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by jogging_monkey <kweejibow.at.hotmail.com> at 2004-08-31 15:56:07 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
There's are 3 or 4 GODDAM captivating stories I'm following on this site yours in indeed one of them. Pump these out faster SLAVE!!!
Submitted by LadyPlural (user info) at 2004-08-31 15:34:19 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I'm going to allow you to live this time, because undying vengence kicks ass.
Submitted by tinactin (user info) at 2004-08-31 15:33:03 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Fucking werewolves. The Man is always trying to bring me down.
Submitted by xenon (user info) at 2004-08-31 15:19:50 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Once again!
Submitted by Malificent (user info) at 2004-08-31 15:14:43 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
*sniff* I wanted it to be a dream as well. :(
Submitted by GodLovesALittleLovin (user info) at 2004-08-31 14:47:03 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Well, well, well, Benihanarano, another installment....
I propose another idea to you...
Write something else. That's it. This is too good. People are ignoring it marybanaorio, so you must resort to their level. People don't want to review something different and good, they want stupid and formulaic. Look at your posts that made B@W. They followed the precise formula of a bunch of nonsense descriptions with a weak suprise at the end. And it's making you famous!
Now go fetch me a lemonade you bastard!
Submitted by AshK (user info) at 2004-08-31 14:46:32 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Her lips were still soft and warm, yet his first kiss was never returned.
Pure poetry.
Submitted by OneCheapGeek (user info) at 2004-08-31 14:44:59 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I knew Rambo was coming man....
Since he has no nails, can he use the exploding arrow things?
Submitted by Timmah (user info) at 2004-08-31 14:36:51 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Awesome.
Submitted by BLITZKREIG_BOB (user info) at 2004-08-31 14:27:36 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Kick ass!