A dream (SPF) (635 hits)
Category: RomanceRating: 0 on 11 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by Jon <jont2005.at.comcast.net> (View user info) at 2004-09-03 16:54:06 EDT
The time, it has come, I'm finally here with her, embracing her, making love to her.
The evening had started off like any other, I just headed over to her place to hang out, watch some TV and chill. I expected nothing more than some small talk, food, TV and maybe a little flirting. I don't know how but in an instant I was with her on the couch. We were just sitting there enjoying ourselves watching some of the TV series Chobits. She always had a fascination with Chi, and I always thought Hideki was great. I would sit there, with thoughts of Tori in my head, hoping that she would one day fall in love with me, as Chi loved Hideki.
After getting lost in a daydream, I look over at her, and just softly mutter, "I love you Tori". She just looked back, with an amazing smile, a glare that I had never seen in the 8 years that I have known her.
She slowly crept towards me, and she kissed me. The feeling of her soft lips against mine excited me like nothing before. There was the woman I love, on top of me, gently kissing me and caressing my chest. I slowly moved her to her bedroom, kissing and feeling each other along the way. We were at that point inseparable. As soon as we entered the room she shut the door and started to take her shirt off.
She had a body more beautiful than I remembered, her curves exquisite, her breasts perfect. She slowly walked towards me, unbuttoned my shirt and threw it on the floor.
She knocked me off my feet, pinned me to the floor and started to take my pants off. My man hood was ready. She kissed me once more, took off her skirt and looked me in the eye and she smiled.
I couldn't believe it, was this real? Was she really going to make love to me?
"Tori, you don't have to do this, I'll love you anyways." I said as reassuringly as possible, hoping that this was not just her trying to make me happy.
"Jon, I want this. I've been holding in my feelings for too long. I love you."
"I love you Tori"
After I said that a single tear started to glide down my face, the woman I had loved for years finally admitted she loves me, and she was going to prove it.
I looked at her, gently rolling over so she was lying down, and I gently slid into her. We spent the night together, making love. We did not "fuck" once; we kept on proving our love for each other. I'll never forget that look of pleasure and pain on her face that night, and I will never forget the smile on her face when she told me that she loved me...
User Reviews
Submitted by JonnyBoy (user info) at 2004-09-23 23:52:04 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Ohh man, its thursday, and I had the urge to read all my posts again...
Yet this one sticks out in my mind, not because it has Tori's name, but because to me it doesnt have her face...
When I read this story, I just cant imagine this situation, I just can't, I don't see it happening, and I don't believe it would ever happen...
I wish I could change this post...I don't like the fact it has her name, so...Bart if you read this can you delete this post? that or change all Tori to umm...uhh... Nicole
Submitted by JonnyBoy (user info) at 2004-09-06 14:34:29 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Ya know, yesterday I was looking at Tori, and I just can't imagine having sex with her, I just can't.
Submitted by JonnyBoy (user info) at 2004-09-03 21:57:09 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
read this shit, I feel like hit whoring!
Submitted by ugaly (user info) at 2004-09-03 19:46:43 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Meh. Reminded me too much of this post. Even had the same side caption. You just had far less description of what was going on.
http://www.ubersite.com/m/43889
Submitted by tinactin (user info) at 2004-09-03 18:14:26 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Eat a baby
Submitted by Random Joe at 2004-09-03 17:54:13 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
jeez you are one fucking big wussie
Submitted by KoolMang (user info) at 2004-09-03 17:48:37 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
This is now officially SHIT POST FRIDAY!
SHIT POSTS ARE NOW ON THURSDAY AND FRIDAY!
Submitted by Garet_Jax (user info) at 2004-09-03 17:27:59 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
Cheesey
Submitted by JonnyBoy (user info) at 2004-09-03 17:15:23 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
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Submitted by Gnome (user info) at 2004-09-03 17:12:54 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
meh, it shifted.
Submitted by Monarch (user info) at 2004-09-03 16:57:50 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
I don't know.
It was kinda okay, but I keep feeling like it needed some type of background to make it really GOOD. Not bad try though.