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Submitted by Deadly (View user info) at 2004-09-04 13:11:48 EDT
Everything about you amazes me.
You're more beautiful than a summer evening sky painted with different shades of orange, red, purple and blue. You take my breath away, always will.
I've waited so long for this moment, I've imagined it a thousand times over.
Now it's real. To feel like this I would've waited for all eternity.
Now you're here in my arms and I've never felt so alive. My head is spinning. I finally have you. I never want to give you up. I wont. Thoughts of our bright future together will give me the strength and patience to strive to be a better person, for you, for me, for us.
I Know at this very instant that I'll always be there for you, when you need me and when you don't. When you hurt me I'll forgive you. When you push me away I'll give you space but still I will be there.
Sure, there'll be times when I make you cry, times when I make you angry, times when my words will cut you like the sharpest of knives, still my love for you will be paramount
You look up from the comfort and security of my arms and into my eyes, your warm breath on my chest makes my hair stand on end, I'm falling more and more in love with you as each second passes. Is it possible?
"I love you"
My eyes smile and my heart sighs knowing that one day you'll tell me that you love me too.
You're the only girl to ever have captured my heart whole.
I know what it feels like to hold the world in my hands, thank you
User Reviews
Submitted by Circe (user info) at 2004-09-04 22:31:50 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Very sweet, if cliched.
What are you going to rename this one? "It's not OK to shake babies"?
Submitted by gassygirl73 (user info) at 2004-09-04 17:49:30 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
+2 x 10000.
This is great.
Submitted by Deadly (user info) at 2004-09-04 16:10:14 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Thanks stin.
I have lot's of ideas swimming and swirling up in my head, it's just that i find it hard converting them to text.
Submitted by Stin (user info) at 2004-09-04 15:54:43 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
balisongphreak, I wouldn't call this a poem really, would you?
I loved it.
Submitted by Ex_Lux_Astrum (user info) at 2004-09-04 15:47:17 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Better enjoy the beauty and innocence now before she grows up in this pustule of a world, and inevitably becomes a crack ho'..................
Submitted by JonnyBoy (user info) at 2004-09-04 15:28:41 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Aww...I can't wait until I have a baby, with Tori of course...
Submitted by balisongphreak (user info) at 2004-09-04 14:27:29 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
i dont get why people post their poems here...
Submitted by Nator (user info) at 2004-09-04 14:05:14 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Lame.
Submitted by leez <lisapam31.at.hotmail.com> at 2004-09-04 13:39:05 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
ahhh you will be a good daddy.