Dye My Eyes and Call Me Pretty (520 hits)
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Submitted by SAECULUM.AUREUM (View user info) at 2004-09-06 02:34:36 EDT
There have been many nights that I don't remember. There are many nights that I'd prefer to forget. But amongst them all, there was tonight.
I fell in love.
And as cliche and typical as that sounds, it was a long time coming.
So I'm drunkenly writing this post to let you know, for whatever it's worth, that love can come and go. Love is something you can refuse to believe in. Love is something that you can feel time and time again. But, most importantly, love is the one thing that makes the rest of the world jealous, spiteful and secluded, yet holds the most precious emotions that man can stay.
So in my drunken slur, I'll leave you with even greater reason to hate this post:
It wasn't prostitution
Just a due restitution
For a life full of endings
Not quite as gripping
As the end of your last poem
It was touching, let it be known
Writing verse about frivolity
Unrehearsed I was celebrity
And I wouldn't kill myself today
Although today's a holiday
I'd wait a week
Or maybe more
I'd wait a lifetime
I can't be sure
Touched by a decade
It ate my mind until it decayed
I learned to trust myself
I learned to be just myself.
Piss off NYC.
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Submitted by Genko (user info) at 2004-09-06 11:05:32 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
"I'll leave you with even greater reason to hate this post"
There was reason enough before the poem.
Submitted by project_nessa (user info) at 2004-09-06 04:01:03 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
what? dumbass>
Submitted by cshape (user info) at 2004-09-06 03:05:56 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
bad.
Submitted by Disektor (user info) at 2004-09-06 02:52:37 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Looks like a picture of Jewtoast trying to cop a feel.
Submitted by thelemonofpink (user info) at 2004-09-06 02:42:02 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Congratulations.
That picture looks like a wack Edward Hopper painting.