The Party (2 of 3) (953 hits)
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Submitted by Sully (View user info) at 2004-09-14 01:09:47 EDT
-Katie Connelly-
"So aren't you so excited?" asked Jess in a giddy tone. Nirvana played loudly in the background.
"Oh my god, yeah," Katie said immediately.
"We're gonna be like the youngest people there, I think," continued Jess.
"Haha! I know," replied Katie. Her mind was wondering. She was listening to her best friend with a faint ear, as thoughts of romance clouded her mind. She had a boyfriend but they had never been close and they had only gone out three times, getting as far as a peck on the lips. Katie had secretly had a crush on her cousin Nick's best friend, Jim. Inches in front of her sat the object of her concealed affection, in the driver's seat.
The house was in view, only about one-hundred yards away, as Jim had just turned onto Parker Street. Wanting to wrap up the conversation, Katie said "We're almost there so..."
"Katie are you even paying attention to me? You've been giving two word answers ever since we've started talking. You're thinking about Jim aren't you?" interrupted Jess.
Katie gave a nervous laugh and after slight hesitation, answered simply with "Yeah."
"Heh. He is pretty cute, but..."
"Yeah he is..." Katie said, brushing her hair out of her eye so she could admire the back of Jim's perfectly gelled hairstyle.
"But he's twenty-one and in college. We're only sophomores, Katie," Jess continued, as the Chevy Impala pulled up onto the side of the curb, "plus he's your cousin's best friend. If you two ever got together somehow, it'd be, like, so weird."
Jim, Nick, and Katie got out of the Impala and walked past the cars on the front lawn.
"Jess, I'm here, so talk to me inside. Okay?"
Jess continued to talk to Katie, as she was a chatterbox. After some more effort, she finally got her off the phone, just in time for Chris Benner, a good friend of Jim's, to open the door.
"Hey Jim! C'mon in you guys!" he yelled over the music. Katie caught him glancing at her chest, "Hey, Nick is this your girlfriend?"
"Nah, she's my little cousin. Where's the bong?" Nick answered. He walked briskly through the crowd as soon as Chris pointed him in the right direction. Jim went in the other direction, without a word.
"So what's your name?" Chris asked.
"Katie."
"Cool, I'm Chris. This is my house," he took a sip from his cup of beer, "Help yourself to any food or whatever. See ya around."
Katie wandered into the multitude of people looking for Jess, nearly ever guy giving themselves permission to take a gander at her abundant cleavage. She started to regret picking out a yellow low cut tank-top, that she had worn in hopes that Jim would finally notice her.
She walked past a crowd of people chanting her cousin's name as he bonged beer after beer. Nick, who had graduated from high school just this year, was an alcoholic, and had been since he was in eighth grade. She had moved in when she was 7, with Nick and his parents (her aunt and uncle) after her mom had died of cancer, leaving her without a parent. They had been very close for years and she went wherever he did. He was like a brother to her.
She finally gave up looking for Jess in the masses and decided to go sit down on the couch. To her excitement, Jim had already made it there.
"..and twins. And I...LOVE...YOU TOOOOOO. Here's to football!" rang the television just as Katie sat between Jim and a guy and girl kissing. Jim awoke from his nap and his eyes shot right at her breasts.
"Hi Jim," she said as sweetly as possible.
"Hi Katie," he said back, sitting up and looking at the TV.
"Are you tired?" she asked. She leaned forward ever so slightly, in case Jim wanted another glimpse.
He remained focused on the TV as if he was trying to avoid looking at her, "Uhh. Yeah I am. Where's Jess? I thought you were gonna talk to her once you got inside."
"I don't see her. I'll just wait here until she sees me, I guess. I love your shoes by the way," she said. It was forced flattery in hopes of getting him just to look at her.
He seemed taken aback by this, as he started to stutter, but remained looking at the screen and said "Thanks, I love your..." there was a noticeable hesitation and then, "I'll be right back," and got up to walk into the rave of party goers.
"Hey, wait, what do you love about me? You were going to say something," said Katie, at an attempt just to get him to stay and talk to her.
With another bout of hesitation he said he loved her shirt, and left her alone with the passionate couple.
Her heart raced and she crossed her legs to avoid embarrassment.
"He loves my shirt..." she hugged herself and tilted her head back.
At that moment, Katie's best friend, Jess, had sat next to her.
"Hey Katie! How come you look so happy?"
"Jim just said he loves my shirt..." she was in a state of ecstacy over such a simple thing.
"Oh my god, really? Jim's a sweet guy. But he does drugs and stuff so I'm not really attracted to him," Jess said, looking at the TV.
It was true. Katie had seen Jim doing marijuana countless times, in fact she had seen him doing it just before they left to come to the party. She had even caught him doing cocaine on a few occasions and Nick had told her that he used to be into heroin. Katie wasn't sure if it was the drugs that made her attracted to him, but she was without a doubt in 'love.'
"Who cares? He's a great guy. He's funny and smart and..."
"Yeah. Anyway my mom called me and said I'm grounded 'cuz she found out I snuck out of the house. So I gotta go, Katie. Be careful alright? Love ya," said Jess, and gave her a hug and headed for the exit.
Katie was now alone. Without anyone to talk to, she just payed attention to the football game, oblivious to anything that was happening on the screen. The couple next to her started kissing much heavier, and the girl even took her shirt off. Katie pushed over to the very opposite end, so they wouldn't roll on her.
What seemed like an eternity later, someone finally sat next to her.
"Hey Katie, how you doin? I'm Allen, in case you didn't know. You're in my chemistry class. I'm a senior," he said, handing her a cup of beer.
"Oh yeah, I recognize you. No thanks, I don't drink."
"Ahh, c'mon. It won't hurt. Just drink a little of it. You won't get drunk from just one cup," he said it with a sly smile.
With some reluctance, Katie decided to start sipping the beer. The two talked for awhile, small talk, trying to get to know each other. The fumes of pot wafted throughout the house now, and the air was smoky.
"Hey, you wanna go upstairs? It's more quiet and we can listen to tunes up there if you wanna," said Allen, standing up without waiting for Katie to respond.
He seemed like an alright guy, and he was somewhat interesting so far. "Sure," she said.
She stumbled up the stairs, and didn't make it to the top before passing out.
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Heavy metal blasted in her ears. Searing pain ripped through her cervix as she was being raped.
"HAHA! Fuck that bitch!"
"Dude she's bleeding everywhere! Hahaha!"
"Holy shit check out that tight pussy. She's a fuckin virgin!"
"I'm next, hurry up."
Katie screamed as loud as she could, but her face was being held down into the pillow. She could feel that her clothes were discarded. She felt herself bleeding vaginally and anally as at least seven people took turns with her. There was a stinging sensation on her bare back as someone must've put out their cigarette. Was this really happening?, she thought. The agony was so intense that it was numbing. It seemed like a dream. A nightmare.
She heard the door open. She maneuvered her head just enough so that one eye could see the doorway. Two blue Timberlands were standing behind the door.
"JIM! JIM!" she screamed, to no avail. The pillow muffled her voice and the door closed as fast as it had opened. Was he ever really there at all?
One of the guys punched her as hard as they could in the back of the head. "Shut the fuck up!" he yelled.
Katie vomited into the pillow and breathed it in. She could feel someone snorting cocaine off her lower back.
When is it going to end?, she thought to herself. It was as if she was no longer the victim but someone looking on.
User Reviews
Submitted by Random Joe at 2004-09-20 22:50:16 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
How original.
Submitted by Spider-Man (user info) at 2004-09-20 17:53:47 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Holy horse that's descriptive.
Submitted by Random Joe at 2004-09-17 05:22:11 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Come oooon, where's the last bit :P
Submitted by Totally_useless (user info) at 2004-09-14 15:55:10 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
What an endearing love story.
I'm getting all sentimental.
Submitted by Random Joe at 2004-09-14 15:00:46 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
<ejaculates>
Submitted by thaumaturge (user info) at 2004-09-14 11:54:57 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
!
Submitted by runninginplace (user info) at 2004-09-14 11:18:08 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
different points of view, doing good so far.
hurry up with part 3
Submitted by Random Joe at 2004-09-14 08:17:15 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Drugs and rape. How original!
Submitted by jack11058 (user info) at 2004-09-14 01:49:28 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Jesus. Disturbing, but well written. Like the concurrent timeline from different points of view.
Submitted by wild_redhead_76 (user info) at 2004-09-14 01:40:22 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
come on with part 3 already!!!!!
Submitted by Disektor (user info) at 2004-09-14 01:17:03 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
God damn..