Murdering puppies, for kicks! (1057 hits)
Category: RomanceRating: -0.16 on 39 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by Sepsis (View user info) at 2004-10-04 21:00:58 EDT
Nancy was known throughout the neighborhood as a dog lover. She bred dogs for a living, and loved each one of her little puppies very much.
Sampson would have none of this crap. He kicked in the door to her house, which just got a new coat of ugly pink paint. It was three o'clock in the morning.
Armed with only a car jack and a nail gun, he got to work. He slammed on the light switch and ripped Nancy out of her bed.
Sampson kicked her over to the wall and spit in her eyes, which were filled with terror. She screamed, and he screamed back, even louder. He then opened fire with the nail gun, effectively stapling her to the wall. He drove a final nail through her lips, silencing her screams.
He found a puppy that was huddling under the bed in fright, and brought it in front of the squirming Nancy. Grabbing the adorable puppy by the neck, he ripped its asophagus out. Ms. Miller's eyes widened and she gave a muffled shout.
Sampson brought the end of the bloody puppy asophagus to his lips, and blew blood and guts all over Nancy's face. She began to cry.
Ignoring her, Sampson grabbed another puppy and gave it a nail in each eyeball. He then threw it against the wall over and over, breaking it and mangling it more and more with each impact.
Nancy was now bright red, shreaking and quivering uncontrollably. Sampson glanced at her and chuckled.
"Would you like me to stop killing your puppies?"
She nodded vigorously.
He picked up another cute puppy, and jammed the car jack into its mouth. He cranked and cranked until he could hear the puppy's lower jaw snap and disconnect. He smiled. He removed the car jack, and inserted his arm deep into the puppy's body. He then punched Nancy in the face repeatedly, until she was completely unrecognizable as a human being.
Sliding the puppy off of his arm, he let out a deep laugh. He picked up his nail gun, and put a nail into her jugular, before slipping out the back door and into the night.
User Reviews
Submitted by Phallic_Cymbals (user info) at 2004-11-08 09:18:54 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
I have no problem with the content, but this was written really badly.
Why would we feel for Nancy when she isnt even introduced as a character? This was SO EASY to make effective but you just went straight to enacting your little fantasies that are actually directed against you rmother...
Pathetic.
Submitted by icarus1987 (user info) at 2004-11-08 08:50:31 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
I've got a better use for that nail gun. And your ass.
Submitted by Feijuada (user info) at 2004-11-08 08:35:48 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
He shut that bitch up!
Submitted by Kyaste <tibbiegirl18.at.hotmail.com> at 2004-10-16 00:18:29 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Ya know, sensei woud love this, considering her dog started the horrific spiral down to puppy jaw-breaking. You should send it to her.
Submitted by Sepsis (user info) at 2004-10-08 14:42:47 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
teehee. xenon, you went back and read every single one of my posts? thats cute.
Submitted by xenon (user info) at 2004-10-08 14:42:19 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
ditto
Submitted by Sepsis (user info) at 2004-10-05 18:47:22 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
1. Background is for wimps.
2. I suppose I could make it a series.
Submitted by Electro (user info) at 2004-10-05 10:12:07 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
I like puppies.
-2 DIE!
Submitted by hyprspacd (user info) at 2004-10-05 10:09:02 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
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Submitted by Avals (user info) at 2004-10-05 08:45:49 (#)
Ranking: -1
Anyway, the content itself didn't disturb me. What I didn't like, though, is how fucking random and nonsensical this was....Useless. At least _a bit_ of background next time?
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Submitted by MyNameIsTim (user info) at 2004-10-05 09:45:56 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
would have been a 2, but -1 for asophagus
Submitted by Avals (user info) at 2004-10-05 08:45:49 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
Blowing off some steam, are we?
Anyway, the content itself didn't disturb me. What I didn't like, though, is how fucking random and nonsensical this was. "BAM! Burst in the door! WHAM! BAM! Mutilated the bitch! RATATATATA! Kill the fucking puppies!"
Useless. At least _a bit_ of background next time?
Submitted by mrwolf (user info) at 2004-10-05 08:04:21 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Submitted by Spookster (user info) at 2004-10-04 23:50:32 (#)
Ranking: 0
Jesus, a moral dilemma!
-2 'cos it's fucking sick.
+2 'cos it's well written.
Though a 'Worth reading' rating doesn't make sense.
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Yeah but he used the old stand-by of putting it under romance, so I give it plus1
Submitted by Fr057m0urn3 (user info) at 2004-10-05 07:32:10 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Sit!
Submitted by Vermin (user info) at 2004-10-05 02:40:07 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Nice and sick, which I like, just not all that funny though. Still, a good effort.
Submitted by maiorano84 (user info) at 2004-10-05 02:25:03 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Dude, I wish I could tell you how much this cracked me up.
+2 for being disturbingly hilarious
-1 for making me laugh at this
-1 for writing style
Seriously, if you polished this up a little bit and turned it into a series or something, you'd have +2s all the way from me.
God, I'm still laughing you bastard. I changed my mind. +1 for making the dude next to me ask, "What the fuck are you laughing at?"
Submitted by Spiral_Abraxis (user info) at 2004-10-05 01:50:37 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
This is one of my favorite posts, I mean good lord it just fucking cracks me up!
Submitted by Spookster (user info) at 2004-10-04 23:50:32 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Jesus, a moral dilemma!
-2 'cos it's fucking sick.
+2 'cos it's well written.
Though a 'Worth reading' rating doesn't make sense.
Submitted by professorfuckface (user info) at 2004-10-04 23:40:05 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
No photos?
Submitted by youarsoghey (user info) at 2004-10-04 23:24:58 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I am so drunk right now. I am not stupid enough to post, though. +2!
Submitted by Sepsis (user info) at 2004-10-04 22:49:50 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Hmm. I'm getting alot of mixed reviews on this.
Submitted by great_angst (user info) at 2004-10-04 22:12:55 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
fuck.
Submitted by FunnyAsCancer (user info) at 2004-10-04 22:10:13 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I laughed so hard...
Submitted by RyuFu (user info) at 2004-10-04 22:08:48 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
I really don't know how to rate this. I mean, this gets a -2 from me for sure...but I can't justify doing that to you while I have Rambling Superman and Fuzzy and Babba out there...
On the other hand, I love puppies and chicks.
Submitted by Seralena (user info) at 2004-10-04 22:03:06 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
+2 because it was well written
-1 because it was disturbing
-1 because you said esophagus began with an "a".
Submitted by Sepsis (user info) at 2004-10-04 21:56:39 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Queen Ashlee digs my writing style!
Submitted by I_Have_a_Kristen_Fetish (user info) at 2004-10-04 21:56:39 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
No Comment
Submitted by sketch9 (user info) at 2004-10-04 21:55:24 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
+2 for the reaction alone.
Submitted by gibberish (user info) at 2004-10-04 21:50:07 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Wha...whatthe...WHAT THE FUCK?!!!!
Submitted by QueenAshlee (user info) at 2004-10-04 21:45:45 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
What the hell is wrong with you?
Submitted by Spiral_Abraxis (user info) at 2004-10-04 21:44:38 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
HAHAHAHA, this is better than any well thought out post on here.
Plus motha fuckin' 2.
Submitted by Jo_of_the_golden_P (user info) at 2004-10-04 21:37:39 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
ow. that hurts me deep inside where only my vibrator can reach.
Submitted by Arm_The_Homeless (user info) at 2004-10-04 21:18:19 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
You can kill off a hundred people in a story without getting much of a reaction. But a Puppy Holocaust - that touches people.
"Would you like me to stop killing your puppies?" <---Gold
Submitted by Montu-Sekhmet (user info) at 2004-10-04 21:18:11 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
those puppies totally fell for the trap
Submitted by Sekeeth (user info) at 2004-10-04 21:12:50 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Just because Cigar gave it a -2. Im cancelling his vote out.
DETROIT ROCKS
Submitted by Sepsis (user info) at 2004-10-04 21:08:15 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Ah yes cigar, a predictable response from you. You hated my last post too.
Thanks for the advice Tiger Lily! I hired a shrink and he said I might have schizophrenia.. But that's okay, I peed in his eyes and stole his money. I think I'm cured!
Submitted by strangeparadox (user info) at 2004-10-04 21:07:04 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
that was really sick.
alas it was probably worth reading
Submitted by CoachMagirk27 (user info) at 2004-10-04 21:06:09 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
He then punched Nancy in the face repeatedly, until she was completely unrecognizable as a human being.
Sliding the puppy off of his arm, he let out a deep laugh.
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I'm a bastard for laughing at this, but I laughed for about 5 minutes.
I hate you for making me plus 2 this kinda shit.
Submitted by TigerLilly (user info) at 2004-10-04 21:03:16 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
You're sick! Get help.
Submitted by cigar (user info) at 2004-10-04 21:02:59 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
fucking sick and disgusting. I'd expect nothing else from shit like you.