DoaM 24. Darkness Falls Before The Dawn. (969 hits)
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Submitted by Bigmike (View user info) at 2004-10-04 22:34:44 EDT
You fucking bastards.
GET THE FUCK OUT OF MY HEAD!
GET OUT. STOP. FUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCK.........................................FUCK.
No, she's not trying to get away. She can't. I tied her up. Chained her up. No, I don't love her. I don't love any of them. I can't love. I can't love. I can't love. There is no such thing as love, there is only hatred. Hatred and violence. Violence and anger.
That's all there is. You can't convince me otherwise so GET THE FUCK OUT.
She'll be gone tomorrow so stop harping to me about her. I know she's good looking but that's the sin. That's her sin. Nobody gets to be that good looking. Nobody. Jesus broke that little boys nose so that he would have humility, didn't he. I shall smite her in the same way. It will be more than her nose though.
Much more.
I have that kind of power, that kind of will, that kind of constitution. She is nothing. I wonder how all her rich friends would react, seeing her lying there in her own shit. Chained, broken, prone on the floor willing to do anything, yes I said anything, for fifty bucks huh, huh. Yes, I know I'm free associating Frank Zappa, but he had it down. He had the humiliation thing DOWN. He didn't care who knew it.
His brain got fried though, like hers will be. I might boil it while it is still inside her skull. Caress her entrails before slathering them all over my naked body. Pour her still hot blood over my bald head, mouth open to catch the drippings. I will soak my feet in her uterus, play wall toss with her heart, like so many women have done to me. This time it's for real though, not figuratively. Her hair will adorn my wall, pieces of scalp clinging to the paint like shit flung by a mental patient.
Are her parents looking for her? Do you think they even care with their BMW's and their cocktail parties? I saw them. I know what they really care about and it's not her. Will they realize that everything they have is shit compared to their precious little girl? How will they react when they find out she was fucked with a table leg wrapped with fly strips? How will they FEEL? The possibilities are so deliciously gruesome that I get hard just thinking about it. YES I DO, STOP LAUGHING AT ME! STOP IT NOW!
Her friends will not miss her. They all talked behind her back anyway, I am sure of that. They must have, that pretentious bitch. FUCK. FUCK HER. I'm gonna tear her head off and....what? STOP. STOP FUCKING TALKING WHILE I WRITE YOU BASTARDS.
Can you hear her in there? Can you? She's whimpering, I can hear it. I love it when they cry alone. Alone in the dark. I can see her now, filthy and alone, darkness surrounding her like a shroud of death, death that is coming too late for her liking. Is she wishing for death? I think she might be. I do not fulfill those kinds of wishes.
I am omnipotent and have complete control over her destiny. HEY! I"M WRITING HERE! I won't listen, I won't listen, I won't listen. I won't. They are not coming for me. They have no idea what they would have to do, where they would have to go. They have no maps, no clues. I am to myself, that is why I am safe, that is why I continue to rule. No clues. No trail. I can see it all, but it all cannot see me.
This is the way a god feels. I know it.
I have to go make sure she is alive. She has stopped whimpering and I am afraid it is no fun once they are dead. The moments before death are the most fun and the most humiliating. Darkness always falls before the dawn.
Except for today.
Today there is no dawn.
User Reviews
Submitted by LadyPlural (user info) at 2004-10-11 18:38:53 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I love this, Please, read these to your children at night so that the next generation of Bigmikes (Littlemikes, if you will) has a good jumping-off point for creative writing.
Submitted by Quartermain (user info) at 2004-10-05 20:19:15 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
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Submitted by Bigmike (user info) at 2004-10-05 12:00:35 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by loki (user info) at 2004-10-05 10:20:08 (#)
Ranking: 2
Do you read these to your kids at night?
You've asked me this before, I think.
Gosh, can you imagine if I did?
No, I care about their welfare and the quality of their dreams.
Submitted by loki (user info) at 2004-10-05 10:20:08 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Do you read these to your kids at night?
Submitted by Circe (user info) at 2004-10-05 10:17:38 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
That was beautiful, Mike. Romance is such an underrated genre.
Submitted by Ainkara (user info) at 2004-10-05 01:47:52 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Dude, stop making me feel sick. Seriously.
Submitted by Falco (user info) at 2004-10-05 01:44:20 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Not as good as the others.
Submitted by GodChicken (user info) at 2004-10-05 00:23:36 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
These are always good to read, because, unfortunately, the mad whispering in the back of my mind totally enjoys these.
I sometimes wonder what separates us from becoming beasts, from evolving into a creature that feeds off fear and pain and owning something in every way..
The only thing I can ever come up with is Morals / conscience. What a world this would be without those.
Submitted by Bigmike (user info) at 2004-10-04 23:28:31 EDT (#)
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Submitted by youarsoghey (user info) at 2004-10-04 23:22:59 (#)
Ranking: 2
I am so drunk right now. I am not stupid enough to post, though. +2!
By the way, MIKE YOU'RE FUCKING GOING DOWN! Make that...BIG Mike. ha...HA!
Haha, you must be drunk to trash talk me on my own post.
It will be interesting if we end up writing against each other. I fear you may somehow end up disappointed though.
What am I talking about, I have to make it past Siren first and then a few others.
Submitted by youarsoghey (user info) at 2004-10-04 23:22:59 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I am so drunk right now. I am not stupid enough to post, though. +2!
By the way, MIKE YOU'RE FUCKING GOING DOWN! Make that...BIG Mike. ha...HA!
Submitted by sparkle_pink (user info) at 2004-10-04 23:14:50 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
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Submitted by sketch9 (user info) at 2004-10-04 22:59:36 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
you, my friend, are the god.
Submitted by gibberish (user info) at 2004-10-04 22:46:26 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Reminds me of myself.
Go schizophrenia WOO!
Submitted by SullyThePirate (user info) at 2004-10-04 22:42:16 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
This gets more morbid every time.