Objectification (681 hits)
Category: RomanceRating: 0.41 on 15 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by Damien Smith <videorenta.at.hotmail.com> (View user info) at 2004-10-23 04:39:54 EDT
He was born Jason P. Stewart, a perfectly healthy baby boy in the St. Anne's hospital, on September 10th, 1979. His loving family crowded around his bed, his mother holding him tightly. There was a sparkle in his dad's eye as he squeezed his mother's hand tightly; "He's perfect, how lucky we are."
She stared at the boy standing in front of her with absolute hatred. His name was Charlie, and he had been picking on her for almost a week now. But she couldnt tell teacher because that would make her a dobber, and she knew she didnt want that. Charlie held her hat just out of reach, with a playful smile on his face, "Na-na-nyaaah little baby" he mocked her. She exploded in a fit of rage, punching him harder and harder til he fell to the ground with his hands in front of his face, still laughing at the rage in her face.
"Argh! Oh my god!"
He ran one hand up her thigh, repositioning her legs around him. His other hand caressed her breast, rubbing it harder and harder, as he sucked on her neck with intensity.
Jason read the letter again, he couldnt believe that he was being suspended. He had only hit the kid once, if Jonny couldnt take it why did he start the fight in the beginning? He couldn't possibly show this to his 'parents'; he just wished his father could come back in to his life. His father had been gone for a year, and in that time his life had fallen apart. His marks had fallen terribly, he was on detention every week. His mother never believed him when he told her what his stepfather did to him at nights when all was quiet... she would hit him and beat him.... and the scars would not heal.
Charlie put his arm around her in the darkness, she gave him a quick kiss on the cheek to show her appreciation. This small affection was something Charlie had begun to get used to, and he liked it. For a long time he was frustrated with her absolute frigidness, her views on sex before marriage seemed the only flaw in his otherwise perfect girlfriend. It was meaningless now however; as he looked down at the beautiful engagement ring on her finger he felt an absolute satisfaction. He held her closer as the movie's opening credits began on the screen in front of them.
"Holy shit! Im coming! Im coming!"
Her lack of a response didnt bother him as he felt the most incredible rush of his life. He ejaculated in to her with full force, holding her now limp arm tightly.
The blood ran down his arm in a smooth line, like a perfect river. He barely felt the pain any more he realised, briefly looking at the scars all over his body. They were a result of many of these sessions since he had been kicked out of his school and was forced in to work for his stepfather's hospital. Jason's desperate plees for attention were unheard in this family from hell, he had not even heard from his father for eight years now. His hatred for the world was intense; he had broken away from society completely. Tonight he needed another form of release though, his shame in his evergrowing horniness disgusted him. Eventually he cleaned his arm and left his home to find a lover for the night. He needed a girl badly; someone to hold, someone to love. It would be his first time, but an idea had played on his mind for a long time now; he needed to try it.
She had never been so happy before, her marriage to Charlie had been perfect. Now driving to the airport she knew soon they would be on a plane to the ultimate honeymoon destination. She could hardly wait for their marriage to be consumated tonight; she had waited so long. As they pulled up to a set of traffic lights, Charlie rubbed her hand and gave her a smile, she loved him for these subtle touches he had done so well over the years. The lights turned green, and they started to cruise across the intersection. They barely had time to turn their heads to see the stolen sportscar coming, not that it would have mattered. The red car slammed in to the driver's side of the car, killing her husband instantly. She actually made it to a hospital, but internal bleeding caused her death within an hour. She was delivered to the morgue a day later. It was late that night, when the door of the morgue opened, and a stranger stepped in to her world.
In his final orgasmic moments, Jason felt a great weight lifted from him; he had achieved not only an amazing sexual release, but had performed an act which would truely consumate his isolation from the world. He was exhausted, yet fairly satisfied as he looked down at the girl's cold corpse beneath him. He tossed the condom on to her, and began pouring gasoline over her dead body. He left a trail to the door, then flicked a match on to the trail to burn the body and the morgue. Before running home, he looked at the girl one last time; wondering how her life had been. He looked in detail at the died blonde hair, the large wedding ring on her finger, and her obvious physical beauty. He laughed to himself, the bitch deserved it.
After all, her life had probably been perfect.
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Submitted by Happy-Tree-Friend (user info) at 2004-11-17 07:37:38 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
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Submitted by Asylem (user info) at 2004-11-16 10:10:30 EST (#)
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Submitted by Method (user info) at 2004-11-10 22:07:41 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Submitted by 10c7c (user info) at 2004-11-10 21:57:31 (#)
Ranking: -2
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Vietnam to Japan to Mongolia
Philippines to Taiwan to Cambodia
Korea, ah ah, hometown China
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got food, got soup, got spice?
got brains like us? got skills like us?
got cars? got clothes? got girls like us?
wassup we the shit and we kill ya'll fools
we got money in the bank from our family jewels
can we help it if we raid and corrupt the schools?
it don't matter fuck the law shit we break the rules
we jack cars, pop games, yo we got the tools
flip it up, break it down then we shoot some pool,
you fuck with me, you fuck with all bitch, don't think it's cool
one on one fuck that it's three on one no duels
got rice bitch? got rice?
anything you can show that is nice?
got cash,got moves, got thoughts like us?
Fuck no, Hell you white you'll never be like us
Take off your shoes when you enter please
or Crawl around on the floor with your fucking knees
don't mind the smell you'll get used to it
moth balls, fried squid, and that buddha shit
what the hell is that you think i don't see
no forks in the house chops sticks only
have a taste don't be scared try the lemon tea
you don't want thats alright try the fuck on me
Got rice bitch, got rice?
Got luck anytime you roll the dice?
your luck is bad unless you run and hide,
coz we're thugs for life baby, Asian Pride...
It's the azn nigga fuck the rest
Dallas to New York jigga, we the best
Vietnam to Japan to Mongolia
Philippines to Taiwan to Cambodia
Korea, ah ah, hometown China
who you got, huh?
you got shit nigga, feel the size
it's the A-Z-N better recognize
got rice, bitch? got rice?
got food, got soup, got spice?
got brains like us? got skills like us?
got cars? got clothes? got girls like us?
wassup we the shit and we kill ya'll fools
we got money in the bank from our family jewels
can we help it if we raid and corrupt the schools?
it don't matter fuck the law shit we break the rules
we jack cars, pop games, yo we got the tools
flip it up, break it down then we shoot some pool,
you fuck with me, you fuck with all bitch, don't think it's cool
one on one fuck that it's three on one no duels
got rice bitch? got rice?
anything you can show that is nice?
got cash,got moves, got thoughts like us?
Fuck no, Hell you white you'll never be like us
Take off your shoes when you enter please
or Crawl around on the floor with your fucking knees
don't mind the smell you'll get used to it
moth balls, fried squid, and that buddha shit
what the hell is that you think i don't see
no forks in the house chops sticks only
have a taste don't be scared try the lemon tea
you don't want thats alright try the fuck on me
Got rice bitch, got rice?
Got luck anytime you roll the dice?
your luck is bad unless you run and hide,
coz we're thugs for life baby, Asian Pride...
It's the azn nigga fuck the rest
Dallas to New York jigga, we the best
Vietnam to Japan to Mongolia
Philippines to Taiwan to Cambodia
Korea, ah ah, hometown China
who you got, huh?
you got shit nigga, feel the size
it's the A-Z-N better recognize
got rice, bitch? got rice?
got food, got soup, got spice?
got brains like us? got skills like us?
got cars? got clothes? got girls like us?
wassup we the shit and we kill ya'll fools
we got money in the bank from our family jewels
can we help it if we raid and corrupt the schools?
it don't matter fuck the law shit we break the rules
we jack cars, pop games, yo we got the tools
flip it up, break it down then we shoot some pool,
you fuck with me, you fuck with all bitch, don't think it's cool
one on one fuck that it's three on one no duels
got rice bitch? got rice?
anything you can show that is nice?
got cash,got moves, got thoughts like us?
Fuck no, Hell you white you'll never be like us
Take off your shoes when you enter please
or Crawl around on the floor with your fucking knees
don't mind the smell you'll get used to it
moth balls, fried squid, and that buddha shit
what the hell is that you think i don't see
no forks in the house chops sticks only
have a taste don't be scared try the lemon tea
you don't want thats alright try the fuck on me
Got rice bitch, got rice?
Got luck anytime you roll the dice?
your luck is bad unless you run and hide,
coz we're thugs for life baby, Asian Pride...
It's the azn nigga fuck the rest
Dallas to New York jigga, we the best
Vietnam to Japan to Mongolia
Philippines to Taiwan to Cambodia
Korea, ah ah, hometown China
who you got, huh?
you got shit nigga, feel the size
it's the A-Z-N better recognize
got rice, bitch? got rice?
got food, got soup, got spice?
got brains like us? got skills like us?
got cars? got clothes? got girls like us?
wassup we the shit and we kill ya'll fools
we got money in the bank from our family jewels
can we help it if we raid and corrupt the schools?
it don't matter fuck the law shit we break the rules
we jack cars, pop games, yo we got the tools
flip it up, break it down then we shoot some pool,
you fuck with me, you fuck with all bitch, don't think it's cool
one on one fuck that it's three on one no duels
got rice bitch? got rice?
anything you can show that is nice?
got cash,got moves, got thoughts like us?
Fuck no, Hell you white you'll never be like us
Take off your shoes when you enter please
or Crawl around on the floor with your fucking knees
don't mind the smell you'll get used to it
moth balls, fried squid, and that buddha shit
what the hell is that you think i don't see
no forks in the house chops sticks only
have a taste don't be scared try the lemon tea
you don't want thats alright try the fuck on me
Got rice bitch, got rice?
Got luck anytime you roll the dice?
your luck is bad unless you run and hide,
coz we're thugs for life baby, Asian Pride...
Submitted by Method (user info) at 2004-11-10 22:05:20 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
LOOK OUT FOR CHARLIES UP IN THE TREES
Submitted by Despiadado (user info) at 2004-11-02 04:40:19 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
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Submitted by Sepsis (user info) at 2004-11-01 00:21:58 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
well written. good stuff.
Submitted by Seralena (user info) at 2004-10-29 00:56:50 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Heh... you're not bad yourself. Good job.
Submitted by 10c7c (user info) at 2004-10-24 12:16:10 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Nah your definitely rite on the execution. Ive re-written it a bit now, its still up there in draft form; so let me know if you want the finished product.
Submitted by sparkle_pink (user info) at 2004-10-24 02:39:13 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Gah. I really should have given this a +2 instead. It was well written. AND my sister's birthday is on September 10th. How could I not give this a +2?
Submitted by sparkle_pink (user info) at 2004-10-24 02:35:55 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
I had a difficult time understanding this. I see that you had the two stories going on at the same time. Perhaps it could be better executed. But who am I to say? It's not like I'm a terrific writer.
Submitted by rad1101 (user info) at 2004-10-24 02:24:54 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Well written. And Necrophilia.
Submitted by 10c7c (user info) at 2004-10-24 02:05:23 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Thanks, to be honest it wasnt really even finished when i submitted it, but i had to leave so just clicked submit.
The father, I hadnt even really thought through that much. In the beginning I was going to have him die, but I guess its just up to the readers interpretation. He could have found someone else and left with them, which would explain the new stepfather; but basically he just left the family.
Submitted by Davros (user info) at 2004-10-23 15:17:36 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Maybe I need to read this sober, but I didn't understand.
-Davros
Submitted by zakalwe (user info) at 2004-10-23 07:19:45 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
This reminded me of one of my posts. http://www.ubersite.com/m/48714
Seen it? Necrophilia always makes a good read. What happened to the father?
Submitted by Stin (user info) at 2004-10-23 07:10:21 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
I couldn't quite get my head around this. I think I'll come back to it later, because it appeared to be well written and thought out.