Story Time and Erotica (I don't care if you rate the story or the porn, just give me a review) (1949 hits)
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Submitted by heyzues (View user info) at 2004-10-30 18:04:34 EDT
Part One- http://www.ubersite.com/m/43474
Part Two- http://www.ubersite.com/m/43842
Part three- http://www.ubersite.com/m/44391
Part four- http://www.ubersite.com/m/45028
Part five- http://www.ubersite.com/m/46274
Part Six- http://www.ubersite.com/m/47620
Part Seven- http://www.ubersite.com/m/48601
Part Eight- http://www.ubersite.com/m/49132
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Bob looked in the rear view mirror, letting out a small sigh. He saw the headlights of Lucy's vehicle, trailing several cars behind. "So, did that Amy girl call? Is that why you're all depressed and shit?" Dick asked, once they got onto a main highway.
"Let's just get to you're place, and see what's messed up in my brain... Amy is my problem, so stop bringing it up." Bob didn't feel like talking about Amy, when ever he spoke of her he got unbalanced. "So how many are there? You know, people like us?" Bob saw an opportunity to gain a lot of information from a person, who had been psychic for much longer than himself.
"I've met eleven so far, but I think there is around twenty throughout the world." Dick responded.
"What are they like?" Bob asked.
"Well, their like you and me, mostly guys, I think there's only three chicks. There used to be, like thirty of us, but a few died from brain hemorrhages awhile back." Dick looked at Bob for a brief moment. "Why did you become psychic? What was your motivation?"
Bob thought for a moment. "Amy."
"She's the reason you became psychic?" Dick snickered "No shit, well every one has different reasons. Why would you become psychic because of a girl?"
Bob thought about his question for a second, recalling his motives, then groaned loudly, realizing that the conversation had once again turned towards Amy. "I'd see her date all these guys that were tall and broad shouldered, real athletic types. All these guys were gifted genetically, they didn't have to work for anything, that really pissed me off. I worked out and lifted weights almost every day, but she would never see me as anything more than an emotional security blanket." Bob contemplated his next words, as if he were realizing these things as he said them. "I guess, I just felt that no matter what I did, I would never be good enough for her to care for me the way I cared for her."
Dick nodded in understanding "So you decided to try psychic abilities as a way to become good enough. How long did it take you to develop your abilities?" Dick looked in the rearview mirror to make sure Lucy was still close. "Cause, if it took you as long as it took me, that takes a lot of faith."
"I've been meditating for about six years, but I've been telekinetic for two." Bob stopped to remember the nights he would sit in his room, in his parents house, focusing on a staple, trying to spin it around on the tip of his finger. "There were a lot of times were I'd feel like giving up, but every time she'd call, she'd tell me about her emotional problems then start bringing up her boyfriend of the week. That would just remind me that I wasn't good enough and that the only way I could become good enough was through psychic ability." Bob took a deep breath letting the air out of his lungs slowly. "The moments after our conversations were over, those were the moments where my mind was completely focused. In one of those moments is when I first succeeded with telekinesis." Bob recollected the first time he achieved telekinesis. "Man that's a rush isn't it? It took me awhile to realize what I had done."
"Yea, my motives were a little different." Dick said as he turned the wheel on to a secluded road, surrounded by pitch black desert.
"How so?" Bob inquired.
"Greed, I just wanted money, I thought that with psychic abilities I wouldn't have to worry about money. I guess that's why any person becomes psychic, isn't it? Wether it's the desire for money or the desire to be loved by someone, it's all greed." Dick smirked, as they pulled around a hill and down a ramp, under a secluded circular, glass building, blocked from view by several small hills.
"Jesus Christ, this is so cliche it's retarded. Come on, you've got a five story, solid glass building, with an underground parking garage..." Bob paused as they passed through the security gate and passed three more Jaguars and a motor cycle. "Sooo, where's the bat mobile?" He looked at Dick with a sideways expression of disdain, he could hear Lucy pulling in as Dick parked the car beside the other vehicles. "Well, money obviously isn't a problem any more, now is it?" Bob hopped out of the convertible as Lucy pulled into an adjacent spot.
"The facility is on the second floor, Lucy here," Dick directed his hand at Lucy "will show you around while I go prepare some of the equipment." Dick walked to the elevator, pushed the appropriate buttons and disappeared from sight behind the steel doors.
"So what did you guys talk about?" Lucy asked after waiting for the elevator doors to close.
"Nothing, just small talk."
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As promised
User Reviews
Submitted by Freakmagnet (user info) at 2004-11-24 23:23:18 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by shitfuck (user info) at 2004-10-30 18:08:50 (#)
Ranking: 1
Great tits. For a barbie doll.
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The story is good, i went back and read all of the parts, can't wait for the next one.
Submitted by civic18269 (user info) at 2004-11-06 15:11:08 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
what a babe. very nice...
and to be honest, i didnt read the story.......
Submitted by kiketta (user info) at 2004-11-01 13:56:32 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
The story is evolving nicely. I like that you actually point out some of the more ridiculous aspects (like the building and cars) as being ridiculous. I also think it's nice that the people have worked for their powers and weren't born with it (like mutants or some such thing). The story is dragging a bit now, but I'm sure it will pick up again soon. Keep up the good work.
Submitted by Istaros (user info) at 2004-10-31 11:30:33 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
No Comment
Submitted by Phallic_Cymbals (user info) at 2004-10-31 11:15:13 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
Reminds me of the used blow up doll my counsellor gave me for ramadan. That said, i'd certainly do 'er...
Submitted by drfeggphd (user info) at 2004-10-31 07:54:22 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
nice.
Submitted by rad1101 (user info) at 2004-10-31 05:11:17 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
No Comment
Submitted by heyzues (user info) at 2004-10-31 04:35:33 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
HOW HARD IS IT TAKE TO LOOK AT THE PICTURE OF THE HOT LIGHT SKINNED BLACK GIRL AND GIVE ME A REVIEW?
I hate you all!
Submitted by NinjaSpeed (user info) at 2004-10-31 00:49:49 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
No Comment
Submitted by AsshOly (user info) at 2004-10-30 18:22:40 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Fake or not, melikes.
Submitted by heyzues (user info) at 2004-10-30 18:19:10 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
I don't know what it is. I guess I have a thing for half black, half asian, women. I just can't stop looking at her.
Submitted by shitfuck (user info) at 2004-10-30 18:08:50 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Great tits. For a barbie doll.
Submitted by StonedSilly (user info) at 2004-10-30 18:08:43 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
You are not my son!
-- Homer Simpson
Boy-Scoutz n the Hood
Submitted by zakalwe (user info) at 2004-10-30 18:08:01 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Could she be any more fake?