That feeling... (818 hits)
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Submitted by BlinkSparky (View user info) at 2004-11-01 07:32:39 EST
There's nothing quite like climbing that last dune, the anticipation stabs like a thousand knives, the roar of the surf urges you on like a crowd of thousands never could. Every second seems an eternity; every sense is heightened
The sand between your toes, the smell of salt water in the air and the chorus of silver gulls all becomes one big sensory overload.Yet for those few seconds you are young again and without a care in the world.
As u reach the crest pictures of truly awesome waves flash through your mind that leave even the most beautiful of women for dead
U find yourself with a smile spread from ear to ear.
You slowly look up savouring every last second of ignorance
"Fuck man!! It's as flat as my sister's chest! How we supposed to surf that shit?"
Every feeling thought and emotion that has built up for the last 20 seconds is shattered into a million pieces
Then you tear your eyes away from the crystal blue waters
"I wouldn't mind surfing that!"
And before you know it another day has passed, lounging in the sun watching the bikini clad scenery pass you by
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Submitted by BlinkSparky (user info) at 2004-11-02 03:43:44 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
she's online right now mutha fuker so am i
and all body boarders call it surfing slut....u have no idea
body boardings come a long way over the last few years
Submitted by darko (user info) at 2004-11-02 03:34:22 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
decent post...
Submitted by darko (user info) at 2004-10-30 01:28:50 (#)
Ranking: -1
I call shenanigans on them actually being brother and sister, one of them is an alter.
Submitted by BridgetJones (user info) at 2004-11-02 03:32:52 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Oh, and what do you mean, talking about when you were "young"? What do you mean, SURFING? You boogy board, you don't surf. And there IS a difference.
God this is such an awful awful piece of writing. You actually attempting proper prose is as stupid as me going for jogs or trying to play sport. Please, stick to your box of tissues and dumb bells.
Submitted by BridgetJones (user info) at 2004-11-02 03:30:15 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA.
Oh? It wasn't meant to be funny?
How sad.
YOU SUCK.
Submitted by BlinkSparky (user info) at 2004-11-02 03:07:24 EST (#)
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hahahaha yer this post is pretty crap and does deserve a good bagging, it didnt work out at all. I just couldnt capture that feeling...need to practice more i fink....you know what that means? more crappy posts :D
Submitted by 1Point21Gigawatts (user info) at 2004-11-01 09:48:15 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
I was just thinking about the difference between "boring" pieces and this wonderful bit of writing...
Submitted by BLITZKREIG_BOB (user info) at 2004-11-01 09:39:39 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
That was my Ubermadness title. I wrote about the feeling that you get when you have diarrhea.
Submitted by BlinkSparky (user info) at 2004-11-01 07:40:24 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
hahaha i went over that like 3 times looking for spelling mistakes, i'm hopeless...too used to msn
Submitted by apollo88 (user info) at 2004-11-01 07:34:09 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
stop writing U instead instead of you. It is most irritating.