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Submitted by El_Wizardo (View user info) at 2004-11-05 14:53:24 EST
It's quiet outside. No one to disturb me now. I can look and see you, almost reach out and touch you. All I have to do is just
Reach.
But there is always the pesky darkness seperating you forever from me. I can't quite see you clearly, like I always do in my dreams. Always in my dreams, you come in as clear as I want you to. But for some reason you always blur away in reality. Sometimes I wish reality was just a
Dream.
I have to climb to get to you. I dangle over the ledge, I can't look down, I will fall. I do anyways, its just
Habit
I'm up there now, waiting for you my love. I'm so close that the darkness is banished. The soft glow from your room is so inviting that I almost can't stand it. If only I could fly... maybe its not too far to jump. I could jump and be with you, but the ground is so far below me that I think I might die. But without you life is just
Empty.
There you are, silloueted by the light. I can see you like some angel from the underworld. Some demon from paradise. I can't stand it. I'm frozen in the beauty that I behold. How anyone can doubt this I don't know. I've been told to stay away, all friends I thought I had, long gone now. I don't listen to people who tell me to just
Let Go.
I can feel them come for me. Taking me away. I've let you see me again. I'm sorry what we have scares you. One day you will let me in. One day I won't have to climb to you. One day we I will just
Love.
Just
Hope.
Just...
User Reviews
Submitted by The_Wizard (user info) at 2004-11-07 01:20:16 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
That was kind of the point. The whole stalker thing. It does need something though. Ah well.
Submitted by Monarch (user info) at 2004-11-05 16:49:43 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by JenBee (user info) at 2004-11-05 15:14:52 (#)
Ranking: 0
what?
i really wish i could
just
give you a plus two but i
cant
it seems like you are trying too
hard
and you come off as a bit of a
stalker.
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Ditto.
Submitted by ardubs (user info) at 2004-11-05 16:42:24 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
No Comment
Submitted by arcane (user info) at 2004-11-05 16:39:26 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
If I would of known you would turn out this way i would have never waved to you as you walked by on the side walk. Now get out of my damn bushes!
Submitted by domenad (user info) at 2004-11-05 15:29:41 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
You get a 1 for effort, and it really wasn't bad, just needs....something.
Submitted by JenBee (user info) at 2004-11-05 15:14:52 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
what?
i really wish i could
just
give you a plus two but i
cant
it seems like you are trying too
hard
and you come off as a bit of a
stalker.
Submitted by WhatTheHell (user info) at 2004-11-05 14:59:32 EST (#)
Ranking: -1
No
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you