Fifteen Floors Up. (Baby I Love You) (2106 hits)
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Submitted by Bigmike (View user info) at 2004-11-06 00:21:18 EST
He watched as she walked in the door of the apartment after a hard day at work. Even after the stress of the day had beaten her down, he could see that she was still a ravishing beauty. Her long chestnut hair flowed like a river, gently breaking at her shoulders and curling ever so slightly at the bottom. Her eyes were a green fire, restless, yearning for something just out of her reach. That fire never seemed to dim. She crossed through the living room and to the bedroom, turning each light on as she glided through the apartment. Once in the bedroom, she stopped in front of the dresser and looked in the mirror. He watched as she gently released her upper body from the bonds of a tight fitting leather coat. He watched as she gently dropped the coat onto the chair next to the bed. He then saw her cross the room and turn on the stereo. She pawed through her stack of cd's and plucked one from somewhere in the middle of the stack. Opening the case, she turned to the cd player, pressed the "open" button and put the cd into the player. She gave the cd tray a gentle push and it glided into place. She then hit the "play" button. The guitar groove started instantly.
"If you want my lovin
If you really do
Don't be afraid baby
Just ask me
You know I'm gonna give it to you "
As the music began to play, she walked over to the dresser again and looked into the mirror once more. Her hips were swaying back and forth to the music as she started to unbutton her blouse. As she went from button to button, her hips swayed even more seductively. When she reached the last button, he watched as she did a slow turn to the music and put both her arms to her side. With a little shrug, the blouse came off her shoulders and slipped down her arms to the floor.
"Oh and I do declare
I want to see you with it
Stretch out your arms little boy,
You're gonna get it
Cause I love you
Ain't no doubt about it
Baby I love you,
I love you, I love you
I love you, baby I love you"
She was wearing a pink lace push up bra. It was his favorite. Every time he saw her in it he felt his body surge with desire. As she crossed the room in time to the music, he hung on her every movement. Without missing a beat she reached down and to the right, slowly unzipping her skirt. As she did this, she turned and looked right into the dresser mirror. Slowly, very slowly that zipper came down and when it was at the end she put both her hands on either side of her hips and gently, one hand then the other, pushed that skirt to her ankles. She was bent over now, looking at the skirt on the floor. She flipped the hair that had fallen in her face in a fanlike motion, directly over her head and onto her neck and back. She rose slightly as she did this and arched her back He could see the matching lace panties that were part of the lingerie she was wearing. His surge continued.
"If you feel you want to kiss me
Go right ahead I don't mind
All you got to do is
Snap your fingers and I'll come running
I ain't lying, I ain't lying"
She slowly raised the top half of her body up until she was standing upright. Moving in time with the music, she came directly over to the window and pressed up against it, arms up over her head, fingers splayed out on the glass. She moved her body rhythmically against the cool glass up and down. Her breasts and stomach tingling at the temperature of the glass, she slowly turned around and pressed her shoulders against the glass as well. Her back was arched again and her buttocks also touched. She seemed to jump and he could tell that the coolness had raised her intensity up a notch. She didn't care because the apartment was fifteen floors up. Nobody could see her.
"I heard you once little boy
You know you got it
I'd deny my own self
Before I see you without it"
She was staring directly into the mirror now and as she crossed to it, she reached behind her and unlatched her bra. She watched herself in the mirror as she cupped both breasts and let the straps of the bra fall off her shoulders. Leaning forward just a bit, sticking her ass out and arching her back, she slid the cups of the bra off of her breasts and slowly rubbed the bra down her front, stopping right at her crotch and letting the bra fall to the floor. She then danced to the bed.
"I love you
Ain't no doubt about it
Baby I love you, I love you, I love you
I love you, baby I love you"
She got to the foot of the bed and laid her palms flat on the satin spread. She shifted her weight forward and the satin began to slide, her palms going with it. Slowly, painfully slowly her body inched forward until she was prone on the bed. She shifted herself forward just a bit more and turned over on her back. She then lifted both her legs up and toward her head while at the same time bringing her hands to the back of her panties. She then deliciously slid the panties up over her butt, and while bringing her legs back down in one fluid movement, slid the panties down her legs and over her feet. She held the panties in her hands and moving with the music, passed them seductively over her face and nose.
"Someday you might want to run away
And leave me sittin' here cryin'
But if it's all the same to you baby
I'm gonna stop you from sayin' goodbye"
Then she was still, listening to the beat of the music. She casually lifted her right leg and reached with both hands to either side of her right thigh. She pressed her hands to her thighs and started to roll her lace topped thigh high stocking down her leg while bending her knee. She got to the bottom, removed the stocking and tossed it to the side of the bed. She then started with the other leg in the same manner. He didn't know how much more of this he could take.
"Baby I love you
Baby I need ya
Said I want ya
Got to have you baby
Don't let your neighbors
Tell you I don't want you"
She was naked now. Naked and arching her back to the music while lying on those midnight blue satin sheets. He could sense her sweat. He could hear her heartbeat; he could smell the perfume mixing with her excited musk. He could after all, because he had been in her apartment before. As she reached down between her legs, Aretha Franklin belting out the seductive lyrics, he couldn't take it any longer. He had had enough.
He stood up slowly and dropped the binoculars on the table. He removed the headphones and dropped them to the floor. He took one last glance across the distance that was between the buildings, fifteen floors up. He turned his body and walked across the room, stopping momentarily to look at the pictures of her he had tacked up on his bedroom wall. As he entered the bathroom, her body and smell still on his mind, he thought one singular thought.
"Someday I'm going to be there when she gets home."
User Reviews
Submitted by Aiya (user info) at 2006-01-15 21:22:46 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
This was incredibly sexy.
Submitted by mrwolf (user info) at 2004-12-04 04:48:01 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Is it wrong this got me so horny... well good, I don't care/
Submitted by Circe (user info) at 2004-12-04 03:35:06 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
http://www.ubersite.com/m/53404
There it is, Mike... what any stalker watching through MY window would see.
Submitted by TigerLilly (user info) at 2004-11-11 14:12:40 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
You painted a fantastic picture.
Submitted by Bigmike (user info) at 2004-11-11 11:41:45 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by apollo88 (user info) at 2004-11-11 04:26:13 (#)
Ranking: 1
Even after the stress of the day had beaten her down, he could see that she was still a ravishing beauty.""""
Puh-lease.
Yes, I see your point but this is a stalker we're talking about here. :)
Submitted by apollo88 (user info) at 2004-11-11 04:26:13 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
Even after the stress of the day had beaten her down, he could see that she was still a ravishing beauty.""""
Puh-lease.
Submitted by Bigmike (user info) at 2004-11-08 20:47:37 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
You're welcome mystia.
Submitted by mystiamoon (user info) at 2004-11-08 14:35:47 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
How nice to stumble upon a sliver of awesomeness. It's quite the rarity on this site nowadays. That's why i hardly ever read Uber anymore.
Thank you Bigmike for always posting QUALITY, moving, intelligent, thought provoking and warm fuzzies inducing pieces of writing. You have my utmost respect.
Less than 5 of the over 20 authors that drew me to this site to begin with even post anymore. You are still here though and that is one of the few postive things left around here.
Submitted by Jeanneee (user info) at 2004-11-08 14:18:03 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Hotness.
Submitted by AshK (user info) at 2004-11-08 14:02:42 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
This was a perfect blend of erotic and disturbing. Coincidentally, I am now disturbingly hot and bothered.
Submitted by Bigmike (user info) at 2004-11-06 23:21:45 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by Autism (user info) at 2004-11-06 19:38:29 (#)
Ranking: -2
"still having sex with goats?"
He said after looking down at his crotch with that "Oh my god I wish I was born without this CHODE" look on his face."It looks just like a goddamn can of tuna" he thought. "Fuck."
Wapner.........Wapner.........KMart..........Wapner.
Submitted by lojope (user info) at 2004-11-06 23:17:39 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
http://www.ubersite.com/m/50813#937959
Submitted by LadyPlural (user info) at 2004-11-06 20:47:06 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
What Circe said, only without the writing talent.
Otherwise, I'm *so* there.
Submitted by lessthanfour (user info) at 2004-11-06 19:44:04 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
appropriately creepy.
Submitted by Autism (user info) at 2004-11-06 19:38:29 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
still having sex with goats?
Submitted by Bigmike (user info) at 2004-11-06 19:26:33 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by MickGinny (user info) at 2004-11-06 19:20:58 (#)
Ranking: 2
who is this pearnban jackass? or should i say which pussy is using an alter to fuck with the mike?
Yeah Mick, which one now? There is always one. Always. Doesn't matter.
Submitted by MickGinny (user info) at 2004-11-06 19:20:58 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
who is this pearnban jackass? or should i say which pussy is using an alter to fuck with the mike?
Submitted by Bigmike (user info) at 2004-11-06 19:11:10 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by Pearnban_Uber (user info) at 2004-11-06 17:33:41 (#)
Ranking: -2
Fat Mike you're a fucking shitstain.
We all end up being shitstains in the end. All of us.
Submitted by lojope (user info) at 2004-11-06 17:41:10 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Mike, the post deserves a +10. I love this.
However, due to this comment, there is now Dr.Pepper and spit all over my computer screen, so I hate you. Thanks a lot, Fagot!!! :oP
Submitted by Bigmike (user info) at 2004-11-06 06:53:04 (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by bart <bart.at.cilfone.com> at 2004-11-06 06:13:25 (#)
Ranking: 0
And then...this one time at band camp...I fucked this fagot named BigMike right in his super dilated asshole. He bled to death from his injuries. I celebrated by drinking a 12 pack of beer and smashing the bottles upon his head.
THE END
I don't know how many times I have to say this.......It's f-a-g-g-o-t. Faggot. If you are going to use childish, moronic statements to try and insult me, spell them right.
Submitted by Pearnban_Uber (user info) at 2004-11-06 17:33:41 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Fat Mike you're a fucking shitstain.
Submitted by Scott_James (user info) at 2004-11-06 17:31:34 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Yams (user info) at 2004-11-06 17:26:23 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Here we are:
Get up
get up
get up
get up.
Wake up
wake up
wake up
wake up.
Oh baby
now let's get down tonight
baby I'm hot just like an oven.
I need some loving - and baby
I can't hold it much longer.
It's getting stronger and stronger and when I get that feeling
I want sexual healing - sexual healing.
Oh baby
makes me feel so fine
helps to relieve my mind.
Sexual healing
baby
is good for me
Sexual healing is something that's good for me.
Whenever blue teardrops are falling
And my emotional stability is leaving me
There is something I can do
I can get on the telephone and call you up
baby
and
Honey
I know you'll be there to relieve me.
The love you give to me will free me
If you don't know the things you're dealing
Oh
I can tell you
darling
that it's sexual healing.
Get up
get up
get up
get up
let's make love tonight.
Wake up
wake up
wake up
wake up
'cause you do it right.
Baby
I got sick this morning
a sea was stroming inside of me
Baby
I think I'm capsizing
the waves are rising and rising
And when I get that feeling
I want sexual healing.
Sexual healing is good for me
makes me feel so fine
it's such a rush
Helps to relieve the mind
and it's good for us.
Sexual healing
baby
is good for me
Sexual healing is something that's good for me
And it's good for me and it's so good to me
My baby oohhh - come take contro1
just grab a hold
Of my baby and mind soon we'll be making it.
Honey
oh we're feeling fine
you're my medicine open up and let me in
Darling
you're so great
I can't wait for you to operate.
Get up
get up
get up
let's make love tonight.
Wake up
wake up
wake up
'cause you do it right.
I can't wait for you to operate
When I get this feeling
I need sexual healing.
Oh
when I get this feeling
I need sexual healing.
Oh
when I get this feeling
I need sexual healing.
Submitted by Random Joe at 2004-11-06 17:11:09 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Yams (user info) at 2004-11-06 14:42:32 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by DanielH (user info) at 2004-11-06 13:56:10 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Awesome again. I think you're ready for the majors.
Submitted by GodLovesALittleLovin (user info) at 2004-11-06 12:03:17 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
This was a great read. I'll be sure to read your back catalogue this weekend.
Submitted by Badlands (user info) at 2004-11-06 11:20:55 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
The scene I allowed you to paint in my mind's eye was just incredible. What description. I thoroughly enjoyed this.
Submitted by Bigmike (user info) at 2004-11-06 08:02:20 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Oh, and by the way Circe, take that top off, It's never been my favorite. :)
Submitted by Bigmike (user info) at 2004-11-06 07:52:59 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by Circe (user info) at 2004-11-06 07:20:21 (#)
Ranking: 2
Hey Mike... I liked this. Of course I liked it, I like all your stuff. But I have the need to write what I would consider a more realistic stalking scenario.
Circe, you write whatever your little heart desires and I will read it. You can linkwhore all you want on my posts because if it's written by you, it's going to be good.
As far as realism is concerned, you don't really think it's all hunters and bird watchers buying up millions of binoculars each year do you? Most women might not think that the guy across the street in that high rise is watching. He is though. He might not have bugged your apartment yet, but he is watching.
Trust me.
Submitted by Circe (user info) at 2004-11-06 07:20:21 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Hey Mike... I liked this. Of course I liked it, I like all your stuff. But I have the need to write what I would consider a more realistic stalking scenario.
If I were to post that, and link to yours, you wouldn't think I was mocking you, would you? You know I love you...
And by the way: The alternative is me writing the madman back to life.
Or cutting off your foot with an axe.
I remain undecided.
Submitted by Bigmike (user info) at 2004-11-06 06:53:04 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by bart <bart.at.cilfone.com> at 2004-11-06 06:13:25 (#)
Ranking: 0
And then...this one time at band camp...I fucked this fagot named BigMike right in his super dilated asshole. He bled to death from his injuries. I celebrated by drinking a 12 pack of beer and smashing the bottles upon his head.
THE END
I don't know how many times I have to say this.......It's f-a-g-g-o-t. Faggot. If you are going to use childish, moronic statements to try and insult me, spell them right.
Submitted by BlinkSparky (user info) at 2004-11-06 06:31:59 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
dont bother,they just ring the cops everytime
Submitted by bart <bart.at.cilfone.com> at 2004-11-06 06:13:25 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
And then...this one time at band camp...I fucked this fagot named BigMike right in his super dilated asshole. He bled to death from his injuries. I celebrated by drinking a 12 pack of beer and smashing the bottles upon his head.
THE END
Submitted by Ainkara (user info) at 2004-11-06 05:43:25 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Oh... wow... I love you...
Submitted by Istaros (user info) at 2004-11-06 02:04:03 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
"'Baby, I Love You' by Aretha Franklin.
If there is a sexier song I don't know what it is."
all of these are pretty good. some aren't obviously sexual until you start thinking of them that way, but once you do, oh man. others are just pulse a kind of sexuality that floors you outright:
Lamb
"Lusty"
"Gorecki"
(and several others too, as a matter of fact)
Massive Attack
"Inertia Creeps"
Duke Ellington and His Orchestra with Johnny Hodges on alto sax
"Prelude To A Kiss"
Chris Isaak
"The Wicked Game"(well the video in any case)
Natacha Atlas
"Kidda"
Cowboy Mouth
"Red-Blooded All-American Man"
Cassius
"The Sound Of Violence"
Bebel Gilberto
"Céu Distante"
Dead Can Dance
"The Snake And The Moon"
Submitted by Vato_Is_A_SOAD_Fan at 2004-11-06 01:59:23 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
"Obviously you've never heard the song 'Sugar' by System of A Down! Man that song is romantic! "
The Kombucha Mushroom People!
Sitting around all day!
WHO can believe you?
WHO can believe you?
Let your mother pray...
SHUGAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Submitted by sparkle_pink (user info) at 2004-11-06 00:47:13 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Yay! Thanks Bigmike. You are my friend to the max.
Submitted by Bigmike (user info) at 2004-11-06 00:45:53 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
sparkle, you're just cool. :)
Submitted by sparkle_pink (user info) at 2004-11-06 00:43:14 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by Bigmike (user info) at 2004-11-06 00:22:12 (#)
Ranking: 0
"Baby, I Love You" by Aretha Franklin.
If there is a sexier song I don't know what it is.
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A sexier song? Anything by Debussy. He is so hot. If I could go back into time I would get married to him in a second.
Submitted by AsshOly (user info) at 2004-11-06 00:32:29 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Or 'She is Beautiful' by Andrew WK.
Regarding the post: Knocked my britches off.
Submitted by Disektor (user info) at 2004-11-06 00:27:00 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Obviously you've never heard the song 'Sugar' by System of A Down! Man that song is romantic!
Submitted by Bigmike (user info) at 2004-11-06 00:22:12 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
"Baby, I Love You" by Aretha Franklin.
If there is a sexier song I don't know what it is.