Finally it comes (549 hits)
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Submitted by fever<autumn.at.fa.com> (View user info) at 2004-11-07 17:50:22 EST
Things lately had been so hard for us. Constant fights over irrelavent things and fights that never gained closure. I was always left wondering what had happened between us from the beginning. We used to get along so well, working through our problems with ease and at least trying to live together as best as possible. Yet our problems were not as big as they are now.
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I stepped through the door only wishing to see you with open arms waiting for me. I knew it could never be, but what we wish in our minds can be so strong sometimes that we can almost feel it in reality. As I came in I knew something was different, I knew this day would one day come but I never let myself believe it could happen. I have been living in a fantasy world where all the problems just go away and where we could be content like we once were. The note I saw on the kitchen table had etched the words in it that I had been dreading for so long yet I knew would one day come. I knew you had left and were never going to come back.
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The problems had grown bigger and bigger between us and the bonds had grown wider and wider. You were distant and I could tell just by the look in your eyes that it would never be the way it used to be. You didn't love me the way you once did and you showed me by the way spoke to me. You wanted to leave even though you never said so, you showed it with every touch and every word said. I could feel your pain even though you tried to hide it. We both knew deep down it could never keep going on like this.
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Words could never explain the way I felt the day I saw the note. Thoughts could never tell of the way I felt at that moment. I was battered, broken, and discarded by the only person who I trusted the most.
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I guess that's why I stand here today looking down on little specs of people cluttering the streets.
30 stories up seems alot higher when you're not looking at it from the ground. Now, the only two things I trust are the gravity and solid pavement that will help me on my way.
The ground beckons me, and I answer. I feel the air rush by me and the wind roar in my ears and finally, what I've been seeking for so long...
Closure
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Submitted by precision (user info) at 2004-11-08 23:09:48 EST (#)
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Submitted by InkyFingers (user info) at 2004-11-08 13:11:07 EST (#)
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After reading this again, I noticed somehting I liked about it. It got a -2 post.
Submitted by InkyFingers (user info) at 2004-11-08 13:09:47 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
My boots want to go on a date with your face.
Submitted by Thadder (user info) at 2004-11-07 19:43:26 EST (#)
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Submitted by Stin (user info) at 2004-11-07 18:08:39 EST (#)
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Submitted by hidden101 (user info) at 2004-11-07 17:59:23 EST (#)
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