convalescence (616 hits)
Category: RomanceRating: 0 on 11 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by Sepsis (View user info) at 2004-11-08 22:34:58 EST
It was a little awkward, I guess.
I knocked, and the door opened.
She greeted me with wide eyes and a bright smile. I was led down a small hallway, past several dusty tapestries. The house had a uniform dimness, candles burned like beacons through the fog.
Her father was already sitting at the table. Her mother seemed busy lighting more candles.
The father looked over to me. His eyes locked with mine. I looked away.
I could make out a man standing sentinel in the shadow of a looming bookcase... I felt his eyes meet with mine.
My girlfriend smiled at me, motioning for me to sit down.
It was a little awkward, I guess.
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Submitted by Mitchell (user info) at 2004-11-10 11:24:36 EST (#)
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and then... you whipped out a machette and chopped him to bits?
Submitted by cosmogirl2k (user info) at 2004-11-09 21:27:57 EST (#)
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Submitted by Commie_bastard (user info) at 2004-11-09 19:55:29 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
You are indeed god
Submitted by Thored (user info) at 2004-11-09 09:05:03 EST (#)
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Yeah, I feel dumber after reading that post.
Submitted by WhatTheHell (user info) at 2004-11-09 08:57:56 EST (#)
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WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT ??
Submitted by HardK0re (user info) at 2004-11-09 03:48:55 EST (#)
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AND THEN?
AND THEN?
AND THEN??
Submitted by Tom (user info) at 2004-11-09 01:43:17 EST (#)
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This post lacked a few things. I shall now list them:
Everything.
Submitted by Istaros (user info) at 2004-11-09 00:11:04 EST (#)
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this one didn't have that 'spark'
Submitted by Sepsis (user info) at 2004-11-08 23:57:02 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
this was terrible. thank god it passed under the radar.
Submitted by Sepsis (user info) at 2004-11-08 22:46:50 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
and as the summer's ending.. the cold air will rush your hard heart away, baby
Submitted by kai070169 (user info) at 2004-11-08 22:45:37 EST (#)
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So this post sucked, I guess..... sounds like Dad has the hots for you.