DSoL: Genesis - Book 1 Act 1 (711 hits)
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Submitted by 10c7c (View user info) at 2004-11-10 11:45:31 EST
Disclaimer: This is the start of what I hope will be a long project for me. However, in many areas it will possibly be seen as blasphemous to satanists and christians alike, so if you are likely to be offended, please change the channel now. Oh and one more thing, all the 'facts' etc in this will be completely made up, its a work of fiction, dont bother telling me to research.
Hope ya'll enjoy..... =)
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"her mother was the virgin when she carried him, carried him therein
if the little girl came later then was she conceived in sin?
and in sorrow? and in shame?
did jesus have a sister?
what was her name?
did she long to be the savior saving everyone she met?
and in private to her mirror did she whisper...
saviorette?"
-Dory Previn, 1990
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So few stories today seem to start at their beginning. Possibly because it is often hard to pinpoint exactly where the 'beginning' of a story is. For some stories, the beginning is so long ago, so abstract and so far removed from the story's purpose it almost seems irrelevant. This is one such story. However, without an understanding of how something was created, we are often left with no real background knowledge. And besides, every story has to start somewhere.
This tale begins in 1914, in a small village just North of London, England, known to the locals as Angleford. In a rather large house in the village, in fact the largest, four people are seated around a large wooden table finishing off the last parts of their extravagant dinners. Upon completion of their meals, they relax and bask in the overall success of the evening as a young servant boy removes their dishes from the table. This had been no ordinary dinner; rather it had been what would in modern terms be known as a business meeting.
Mary Christopher considered her husband with a vague pride she had not felt in a long time. Afterall, it appeared that he was finally getting their lives back on the road to success that she had always felt they deserved. For whilst the Christophers had fell on hard times recently, Mary had always regarded them as being much more well-deserving than the peasants she was surrounded with.
In as much has Mary hoped for success, Steven Christopher always knew he was destined for greatness. Up until the past few months, he had been a wealthy and influential man throughout the town, who commanded respect from all. Steven had also been a property owner, he had run two small businesses right in the centre of town. One was the general store, the other a tavern. In addition to his wealth, he had on regular occasions dined with royalty, and other members of the upper classes in the village. Furthermore, he felt himself privileged he always had a loving and respectful wife to rely on in times of crisis. For that was exactly what the last few months had been for Steven, an absolute crisis.
It had all began around February, when the young lady had first entered his general store. He wasn't sure what it was about her that had driven him so crazy. Perhaps it had been the flicker of her eyes as she smiled at him. When he gazed in to them, he felt like her gaze was burning in to him, it was a passion he did not understand. He had been totally perplexed by her, watching her movements carefully as her tight dress clung to her curved hips. She came back day in and day out, everytime buying small objects; a bottle of milk perhaps, or a loaf of bread. Yet each day she was there she took her time, moving constantly around the store, never speaking to anyone, and always smiling.
What had started as an involuntary moment of lust soon became an obsession for Steven, this lady was all he was able to think off. He felt guilty about his feelings with his wife, but it was a passion that consumed him. As he slept, he saw her face, and when he returned to the real world and his store she was there as well. Asking around town he discovered that she had only recently moved to the town, with two of her sisters. She was apparently a single woman, whilst for her beauty this seemed ludicrous, Steven felt he had to act.
It had been that day of action, when his life had taken a turn for the worse. He barely remembered the actual event. He had approached her, and she had moved close to him, smiling. He remembered she had moved seductively, almost snakelike, and that at this point his mind was overcome with a roaring hissing sound. Upon grabbing her, a scream was suddenly let out, that pierced not only the relative calm of the village, but also the overwhelming hissing noise in his head. She spoke for the first time, yelling that she would reveal his sexual attack to the whole town. It was at this point Steven saw her for what she really was, and everything made sense. His irrational obsession, her coming to this town with only two 'sisters', no job and no source of money; yet still able to live and dress well. A witch had entered Angleford, and he had to stop her now.
He remembered the stench in the air as she struggled to free herself from the ropes that held her to the stake. He saw the flames licking up around her as her pretty dress started to smoke. He would never forget the burning in her eyes as she stared right in to his, the flames within were matched by the flames that surrounded her. She screamed in her final moments of life "You have only destroyed one of three you fool! My sisters will make you pay for this act! You are cursed forever for this sin!". With that her eyes had closed, the flames had entirely engulfed her body, and she was no more.
Of course following these events, Steven had searched the house of the three sisters, but it was to no avail; the house was empty as if noone had ever been there. Over the next few months he still didn't see the two, however the witch's curse had certainly taken effect. Both of his local businesses had burnt down, and his own house had caught fire twice, but Steven had been able to sustain the blaze. His own stable had unfortunately not managed to escape the fire, and his prize horses had all been caught inside, burnt to death.
However, tonight Steven was happy and proud again. It had been almost a month now since the last fire, and he was finally again where he belonged, with the rich upper class members of the village. Through careful negotiation, he had managed to gain a job as a manager in one of Lord Jameson's factorys. He would be able to rebuild the damaged parts of his home, and get on with his life with his loving wife.
Lord Jameson sat back in satisfaction at what could only be described as a great evening. He had enjoyed fine conversation with a man who certainly belonged in the same league as himself, and knew he had done enough to guarantee Steven Christopher's return to the luxurious life he had previously been accustomed to. He thought for a moment, as to what they should do now:
"I say Steven, how about we keep this night going down at the local pub? I hear there is a new band on tonight too"
"Absolutely, sounds like fun, might even have a bit of a dance eh?"
With that, the party of four left the comforts of the warmed house to brave the chilly air outside. They set off for their destination a little drunk, but excitedly anticipating a great time in the village centre.
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Submitted by Wazza (user info) at 2005-04-30 04:57:26 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Good write, but heavy uh. ah well.
Submitted by Happy-Tree-Friend (user info) at 2004-11-17 07:36:25 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
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Submitted by Asylem (user info) at 2004-11-16 10:09:26 EST (#)
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Submitted by Socialist_Joe (user info) at 2004-11-13 06:08:16 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
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Submitted by FuckTheArmy (user info) at 2004-11-10 19:43:58 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Damn man, good work. Needs to keep going, probably should have been 1814 (factories were just starting as a big thing around then). Doing a little more research would have helped for you.
Aside from that, it's going great.
Submitted by Method (user info) at 2004-11-10 13:14:26 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Submitted by 10c7c (user info) at 2004-11-02 00:35:23 (#)
Ranking: -2
It's the azn nigga fuck the rest
Dallas to New York jigga, we the best
Vietnam to Japan to Mongolia
Philippines to Taiwan to Cambodia
Korea, ah ah, hometown China
who you got, huh?
you got shit nigga, feel the size
it's the A-Z-N better recognize
got rice, bitch? got rice?
got food, got soup, got spice?
got brains like us? got skills like us?
got cars? got clothes? got girls like us?
wassup we the shit and we kill ya'll fools
we got money in the bank from our family jewels
can we help it if we raid and corrupt the schools?
it don't matter fuck the law shit we break the rules
we jack cars, pop games, yo we got the tools
flip it up, break it down then we shoot some pool,
you fuck with me, you fuck with all bitch, don't think it's cool
one on one fuck that it's three on one no duels
got rice bitch? got rice?
anything you can show that is nice?
got cash,got moves, got thoughts like us?
Fuck no, Hell you white you'll never be like us
Take off your shoes when you enter please
or Crawl around on the floor with your fucking knees
don't mind the smell you'll get used to it
moth balls, fried squid, and that buddha shit
what the hell is that you think i don't see
no forks in the house chops sticks only
have a taste don't be scared try the lemon tea
you don't want thats alright try the fuck on me
Got rice bitch, got rice?
Got luck anytime you roll the dice?
your luck is bad unless you run and hide,
coz we're thugs for life baby, Asian Pride...
It's the azn nigga fuck the rest
Dallas to New York jigga, we the best
Vietnam to Japan to Mongolia
Philippines to Taiwan to Cambodia
Korea, ah ah, hometown China
who you got, huh?
you got shit nigga, feel the size
it's the A-Z-N better recognize
got rice, bitch? got rice?
got food, got soup, got spice?
got brains like us? got skills like us?
got cars? got clothes? got girls like us?
wassup we the shit and we kill ya'll fools
we got money in the bank from our family jewels
can we help it if we raid and corrupt the schools?
it don't matter fuck the law shit we break the rules
we jack cars, pop games, yo we got the tools
flip it up, break it down then we shoot some pool,
you fuck with me, you fuck with all bitch, don't think it's cool
one on one fuck that it's three on one no duels
got rice bitch? got rice?
anything you can show that is nice?
got cash,got moves, got thoughts like us?
Fuck no, Hell you white you'll never be like us
Take off your shoes when you enter please
or Crawl around on the floor with your fucking knees
don't mind the smell you'll get used to it
moth balls, fried squid, and that buddha shit
what the hell is that you think i don't see
no forks in the house chops sticks only
have a taste don't be scared try the lemon tea
you don't want thats alright try the fuck on me
Got rice bitch, got rice?
Got luck anytime you roll the dice?
your luck is bad unless you run and hide,
coz we're thugs for life baby, Asian Pride...
It's the azn nigga fuck the rest
Dallas to New York jigga, we the best
Vietnam to Japan to Mongolia
Philippines to Taiwan to Cambodia
Korea, ah ah, hometown China
who you got, huh?
you got shit nigga, feel the size
it's the A-Z-N better recognize
got rice, bitch? got rice?
got food, got soup, got spice?
got brains like us? got skills like us?
got cars? got clothes? got girls like us?
wassup we the shit and we kill ya'll fools
we got money in the bank from our family jewels
can we help it if we raid and corrupt the schools?
it don't matter fuck the law shit we break the rules
we jack cars, pop games, yo we got the tools
flip it up, break it down then we shoot some pool,
you fuck with me, you fuck with all bitch, don't think it's cool
one on one fuck that it's three on one no duels
got rice bitch? got rice?
anything you can show that is nice?
got cash,got moves, got thoughts like us?
Fuck no, Hell you white you'll never be like us
Take off your shoes when you enter please
or Crawl around on the floor with your fucking knees
don't mind the smell you'll get used to it
moth balls, fried squid, and that buddha shit
what the hell is that you think i don't see
no forks in the house chops sticks only
have a taste don't be scared try the lemon tea
you don't want thats alright try the fuck on me
Got rice bitch, got rice?
Got luck anytime you roll the dice?
your luck is bad unless you run and hide,
coz we're thugs for life baby, Asian Pride...
It's the azn nigga fuck the rest
Dallas to New York jigga, we the best
Vietnam to Japan to Mongolia
Philippines to Taiwan to Cambodia
Korea, ah ah, hometown China
who you got, huh?
you got shit nigga, feel the size
it's the A-Z-N better recognize
got rice, bitch? got rice?
got food, got soup, got spice?
got brains like us? got skills like us?
got cars? got clothes? got girls like us?
wassup we the shit and we kill ya'll fools
we got money in the bank from our family jewels
can we help it if we raid and corrupt the schools?
it don't matter fuck the law shit we break the rules
we jack cars, pop games, yo we got the tools
flip it up, break it down then we shoot some pool,
you fuck with me, you fuck with all bitch, don't think it's cool
one on one fuck that it's three on one no duels
got rice bitch? got rice?
anything you can show that is nice?
got cash,got moves, got thoughts like us?
Fuck no, Hell you white you'll never be like us
Take off your shoes when you enter please
or Crawl around on the floor with your fucking knees
don't mind the smell you'll get used to it
moth balls, fried squid, and that buddha shit
what the hell is that you think i don't see
no forks in the house chops sticks only
have a taste don't be scared try the lemon tea
you don't want thats alright try the fuck on me
Got rice bitch, got rice?
Got luck anytime you roll the dice?
your luck is bad unless you run and hide,
coz we're thugs for life baby, Asian Pride...
Submitted by TigerLilly (user info) at 2004-11-10 12:45:45 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
This was good stuff. Well done.
Submitted by scrumdown (user info) at 2004-11-10 12:22:59 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Interesting, very, very interesting.
Submitted by 10c7c (user info) at 2004-11-10 12:02:22 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
lol, damnit it was originally 1814.... but i changed it because i wasnt sure exactly what they had in those days and how much it would effect things i could do.
i wish i could tell you what DSoL stands for, but it would kinda ruin it. ill let you know that this is heading in a very different direction to where it currently is, and you will find out the meaning of DSoL at the end of the book of genesis.
thanks for the support btw
Submitted by BLITZKREIG_BOB (user info) at 2004-11-10 11:55:25 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Oh yeah, What does DSoL stand for?
Submitted by BLITZKREIG_BOB (user info) at 2004-11-10 11:52:47 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
I liked this. A lot.
The only thing that made me think twice was the time period. Perhaps 1814 or 1714 would make more sense than 1914? Plus you have a few more centuries to give history to if you used an earlier date. Just a thought.