So far away (781 hits)
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Submitted by Seralena (View user info) at 2004-11-15 20:21:15 EST
Kara looked up, a tear running down her acne-ridden face.
"But I thought you loved me," she spat out, every word hurting her. She was curled up on Mike's bed, completely naked, her clothes having been tossed to the side during the frantic and all too quick sex that had just occurred.
Mike laughed in her face. "You believed me? You're even more stupid than we all thought!" He was cleaning off his dick with an antibacterial wipe, and threw it in the small Ziploc bag where he had already discarded the used condom. Kara stared in shock. "Then why did you do this?"
Mike laughed again. "It's a bet, of course. Whoever bangs the nastiest girl in the school gets the pot, which is over three hundred dollars now. Well worth the money it took to get your slutty nasty-ass in bed." Kara blushed, realizing she probably shouldn't have slept with Mike two days after he asked her out, simply because he was the most popular guy in school, and so dreamy... What the fuck, she thought, why am I still fantasizing over him?
"I knew about the bet."
"The fuck you did, bitch. Don't try to play it off. You let me pop your cherry because I told you I loved you, and you BELIEVED me! What a 'tard."
Kara stood up, wrapping the sheet around herself as she did. "You don't believe me, fine. But you know that Sam told me about it, right?"
"What the hell are you talking about?" Mike was suddenly suspicious.
"Sam knew he could win if I could be disqualified. He just fucked Sandra last night. According you guys, she's second from the top of the list, behind me. Well, he just disqualified you. Eat shit, you fucking bastard. You sucked ass in bed anyway. You thought I was coming? I wasn't even FAKING well, and you bought it. And liked it. Just wait until I tell THAT to Sam. The least I was expecting was a decent fuck."
Mike just stared as she was talking. "Of course I sucked. I wasn't trying, bitch, I just wanted to get the fuck out of that hellhole you call a cunt." His mind was churning as he thought this over. He couldn't let that bitch get away with saying all that! Especially if she told Sam, then it would be all over school. Not to mention, he'd just fucked the class cow for nothing. He couldn't let her know he cared, though.
"The fuck you let me sleep with you anyway, slore?"
Kara turned bright red. "I wanted someone decent in bed."
"You sure as fucking hell did NOT. Fucking cherry. No girl gives up her fucking cherry over that. You tell me what the hell you were thinking."
She looked at her feet as she answered, turning even brighter red. "Well... The bet seemed like one of those horrible teen movies... The ones where the guy falls in love with the girl anyway, and they live happily ever after. I wasn't going to be the bitch who gets all pissed off when she finds out about the bet."
Oh dear God, why did I just tell him that, she asked herself. He looked her in the eyes and talked about taking her virginity, and she spilled EVERYTHING. What the hell was wrong with her?
Mike was doubled over laughing. "You think it's the fucking movies, bitch? Wait 'til you see what everyone hears about you at school tomorrow. Get the fuck out of my house."
Kara ran out of the house, finally crying in earnest, not realizing she was wrapped in a sheet and her ass was showing to the entire neighborhood. Luckily, one of the neighbors grabbed her and pulled her into the house.
"Sweetie, what did Mike do?"
This particular neighbor had lived here for over fifteen years, and had seen Mike growing up since he was three years old. Rosa knew what a sadistic little boy he'd been, and probably still was.
Kara didn't respond, just continued crying. Finally, Rosa gave her some clothes, and sent her on her way, without getting any answer from her.
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She called in sick from school for a week. Her parents were considering taking her to see a specialist soon. She was constantly vomiting, and couldn't keep any food down at all. Yet no one could figure out what was wrong with her.
Kara didn't even get any calls from her friends at school. She didn't know the rumor that was going around, but she could guess it would be vicious. Everyone at school "knew" how Kara had barged into Mike's house and accused him of raping her best friend. The best friend was totally confused, because she'd never even spoken to Mike in her life. When she told people this, everyone decided Kara was a pathological liar, including her friend. Who wouldn't believe Mike, when he was so popular, and handsome, and did so well at everything he tried?
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Kara went to see a specialist, who told her she was pregnant. Despite the condom, despite it being her first time, she had gotten pregnant.
There was no way she could have this child. It was a little parasite, just as evil as its horrible father. When she told her parents she was going to have an abortion, they kicked her out of the house. They were too fundamentalist to accept something like that. With no friends to go to, she wandered the streets, wondering what she was going to do with herself.
She walked to her school, where classes were currently in session. She knew exactly what classroom Mike was in. How could she not, seeing as she had stared at him for entire semester from the back corner of that room?
In the middle of class, she walked into the room, and sat down on the top of Mike's desk. "We're having a baby," she told him. Loudly. The entire class looked on, spellbound.
Mike sputtered, "But I used a condom, bitch!"
The entire class gasped in unison. So Mike had lied about something.
In one fluid motion, Kara punched him in the face, then slid off the desk and slapped him on the back of his head, so that his broken nose hit against the desktop.
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The girl standing on the edge of the highway looked harmless. Overweight, and she had a bit of acne, but not bad-looking. Corinne couldn't help but stop for her. Most hitchhikers didn't seem so forlorn. Or so... wrong, somehow. She looked like she should be in school somewhere, getting ready to enter the workforce for a mediocre life. Not thumbing on the interstate.
"Where ya headed, sweetheart?"
The girl looked at Corinne and smiled slightly. "As far from here as you can take me."
User Reviews
Submitted by Seralena (user info) at 2005-03-07 22:11:34 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
No, I know who Ray Charles is. I'm not that bad.
Submitted by thecaes (user info) at 2005-02-15 00:25:00 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
Pretty good story, but like someone else said, it seemed to be rushed in the second half. But nicely done.
Oh, and in response to this:
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Submitted by Seralena (user info) at 2004-11-18 16:07:47 (#)
Ranking: 0
Coley? Who's Rod Stewart?
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Sweet Jebus, are you for real?? Well...at least that's not as bad as those three teenage girls I met the other day who had never heard of Ray Charles.
p.s. if you say you don't know who Ray Charles is, I'm going to beat you half to death with a piano.
Submitted by AshK (user info) at 2004-12-02 11:07:18 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by coley (user info) at 2004-11-18 05:45:49 (#)
Ranking: 2
You can't seriously fuckin tell me that nobody knows that song. Just because of this post I had to sing it to my husband (not pretty, let me tell you!!) and HE doesn't know it either!!
WHAT THE HELL!
HATH UBER NO LOVE FOR ROD STEWART??
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Good story
Carole King wrote and sang this son. Rod recorded it years later. Both are nice versions.
Submitted by BambiAmbi (user info) at 2004-11-30 14:51:39 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Wow. Simply wow. Is there more?
Submitted by Istaros (user info) at 2004-11-19 20:37:11 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
(i know of Rod Stewart... pretty fly for a white guy)
Submitted by coley (user info) at 2004-11-18 17:57:56 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
a HA! I KNEW IT!
even if my lyrics were all fucked up..
.check it
http://www.seeklyrics.com/lyrics/Rod-Stewart/So-Far-Away.html
Submitted by coley (user info) at 2004-11-18 17:56:42 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Stin: but does not Mr Stewart sing it?
I'm only 24 but I know that song!
Submitted by Stin (user info) at 2004-11-18 16:53:47 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
Girlies, it was written by Carole King.
Sorry to disappoint you!
Submitted by Seralena (user info) at 2004-11-18 16:39:52 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
I'm 18. Explain please, maybe I'll look into it.
Submitted by coley (user info) at 2004-11-18 16:37:27 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by Seralena (user info) at 2004-11-18 16:07:47 (#)
Ranking: 0
Coley? Who's Rod Stewart?
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WHAT!!?? you don't know who SEXY ROD IS??
Oh my GAWD liek hes so HOTT!
I can't believe this. How old are you?
Submitted by bluegoddess (user info) at 2004-11-18 16:26:20 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
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Submitted by coley (user info) at 2004-11-15 22:25:11 (#)
Ranking: 2
"Doesn't anybody STAY in one PLACE ANYMORE>......"
Okay, I'll read it now.
Good God - I was just reading this review and this song just started playing on the radio.
Submitted by thaumaturge (user info) at 2004-11-18 16:25:18 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
Your story kicked asses out until
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She called in sick from school for a week. Her parents were considering taking her to see a specialist soon. She was constantly vomiting, and couldn't keep any food down at all. Yet no one could figure out what was wrong with her.
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.... then it totally seemed rushed. I think you were on to something good.
Submitted by Seralena (user info) at 2004-11-18 16:07:47 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Coley? Who's Rod Stewart?
Submitted by coley (user info) at 2004-11-18 05:45:49 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
You can't seriously fuckin tell me that nobody knows that song. Just because of this post I had to sing it to my husband (not pretty, let me tell you!!) and HE doesn't know it either!!
WHAT THE HELL!
HATH UBER NO LOVE FOR ROD STEWART??
Submitted by SilvrWolf (user info) at 2004-11-18 00:42:24 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
Good post.
Submitted by the_lone_stranger (user info) at 2004-11-17 18:21:41 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
I liked it.
Submitted by riggyrow (user info) at 2004-11-17 18:21:04 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Seralena (user info) at 2004-11-17 18:06:04 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Nope, never heard it. Thanks though, I feel better now that I understand!
Submitted by coley (user info) at 2004-11-17 18:02:02 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Seralena:
Submitted by Seralena (user info) at 2004-11-15 22:32:18 (#)
Ranking: 0
Coley, you confused me!
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Submitted by coley (user info) at 2004-11-15 22:25:11 (#)
Ranking: 2
"Doesn't anybody STAY in one PLACE ANYMORE>......"
Okay, I'll read it now.
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Haven't you ever heard that song? Rod Stewart, I believe? It goes:
"So faaaar away...doesn't anybody STAY in one PLACE ANYMORE.....it would be so great to see your FACE at my DOOR...and you wouldn't have to GOOO...so FAAAAAAAAAAAR AWAY"
or something like that.
I liked the story, anyhow.
Submitted by Seralena (user info) at 2004-11-17 00:33:10 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Wow, thanks Sepsis. I'll forgive you the random -2 you gave me on the last one.
You liked this one because there was violence, didn't you?
Submitted by Sepsis (user info) at 2004-11-15 23:45:14 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
i really liked this
Submitted by darko (user info) at 2004-11-15 22:43:13 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Seralena (user info) at 2004-11-15 22:32:18 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Coley, you confused me!
Submitted by coley (user info) at 2004-11-15 22:25:11 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
"Doesn't anybody STAY in one PLACE ANYMORE>......"
Okay, I'll read it now.
Submitted by Shizae (user info) at 2004-11-15 21:51:27 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by JMG114 (user info) at 2004-11-15 21:28:46 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
Haunting.
Submitted by Seralena (user info) at 2004-11-15 21:26:31 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Yeah, sex ed was part of our health class, and our teacher quit on the first day, so they told us it was study hall, and they'd give us an A if we showed up. And it was a first period class, so it sucked getting there early, but it was a good chance to do homework.
Then they got us a teacher two weeks before the class ended, and we only got through drugs and alcohol.
No sex ed for me!
Submitted by LadyPlural (user info) at 2004-11-15 21:05:36 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Ok, you get a +2 for that response. Hahahahaha. In fifth grade for sex-ed, the principal ended up talking to us about it. I didn't think that it was possible for him to make the subject boring to a bunch of fifth-graders, but damned if he didn't have half of us mostly asleep by the end.
Submitted by Seralena (user info) at 2004-11-15 20:56:18 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Sorry... Originally I was going to make her bulimic, but changed my mind. And I did miss Sex-Ed, thank you very much, my teacher quit and they never found us a new one.
Submitted by LadyPlural (user info) at 2004-11-15 20:52:23 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
Did you miss sex ed? When you're pregnant, almost nobody gets morning sickness until at least the sixth or so week from conception. If that was when that part took place, you weren't clear at all.
Otherwise, mostly decent. +1 for you.
Submitted by sparkle_pink (user info) at 2004-11-15 20:43:34 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
Submitted by Dead_0hi0_Sky (user info) at 2004-11-15 20:36:45 (#)
Ranking: 1
too "after-school special with lots of swears", but good nonetheless.
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And I had a hard time understanding the logic going on about the bet not working and the guy being disqualified and all.
Maybe it's just because I'm sick.
Submitted by Dead_0hi0_Sky (user info) at 2004-11-15 20:36:45 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
too "after-school special with lots of swears", but good nonetheless.
Submitted by Istaros (user info) at 2004-11-15 20:34:13 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
it needs an ending...
Submitted by I_Have_a_Kristen_Fetish (user info) at 2004-11-15 20:34:09 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by 10c7c (user info) at 2004-11-15 20:27:15 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment