Downpour (918 hits)
Category: NoneLabels: Erotica
Rating: 1.82 on 22 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by Snark << snarkk.at.gmail.com (View user info) at 2004-11-23 11:47:47 EST
This is the sequel to TORRENT
http://www.ubersite.com/m/43889
DOWNPOUR
She's burning him to death with her scent.
She's ripping him apart with subtle breath and gentler touch.
He wants her beyond the meaning of want and he lets her know it with deep tongue and ragged breath.
He is muscle and growl and towering presence, but he is not in control here.
In this place control is lost and found in her embrace, in the promise of nipple and thigh and the moist between.
She drinks deep of his hardened lust then pauses before beating him down with sultry eye and gentle curve.
Her voice need not cross his ear to put him on his back, parted lip and wanton moan are command enough.
Deliciously astride, she dictates his desire with quick tongue and firm grip. Her lace has become his chain and he lavishes in her wet imprisonment. Drunk and lost and tortured beyond redemption by her most secret places.
Heaven visits but doesn't make itself at home.
Not yet.
It is for her to invite it and she chooses to wait... chooses his purgatory one lick at a time.
"God!"
The fire she's started is spreading now, jumping from nerve to nerve, igniting him in blissful inferno and he yearns for release with taught muscle but his bonds hold.
Lace can be stronger than soft.
Soft can be tougher than force.
"Please!"
And still... despite his need, she guides him further with musical sigh, keeping heaven in sight but
Just
Slightly
Out of reach...
Until all at once, everything that she is at this moment can sense it...
The critical moment of his ascent...
The sweet burn of impending release...
and
Just
Like
That
She's gone.
Fucking Tease.
User Reviews
Submitted by Jo_of_the_golden_P (user info) at 2004-11-29 21:29:29 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Snark (user info) at 2004-11-24 20:03:35 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
AHAHAHAHAHA!!!
Submitted by Coyote (user info) at 2004-11-24 00:42:38 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by Snark (user info) at 2004-11-23 17:51:45 (#)
I'm so sorry. I was walking across the street and suddenly a sack slips over my head and the next thing I know I'm bound and gagged in the trunk of a car.
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Damn, so that's where my car disappeared to!
Hey, maybe if you're lucky that cute girl who walks home by herself from the library each day will be able to unbound and ungag you, and together you can figure out some way of getting out of the trunk.
Submitted by Snark (user info) at 2004-11-23 19:25:51 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Hehehe
Circe,
Do you see now how you inspire me?
Submitted by Circe (user info) at 2004-11-23 19:10:15 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Oh, my...
Oh... Snark, I LIKE this. A lot.
And by the way: The two of you crack me up. You guys are awesome. Coyote, that sister of yours needs some serious help.
Submitted by Snark (user info) at 2004-11-23 17:51:45 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Coyote,
I'm so sorry. I was walking across the street and suddenly a sack slips over my head and the next thing I know I'm bound and gagged in the trunk of a car.
The rest was beyond my control.
(She needs drugs. Lots and lots of drugs)
Submitted by Coyote (user info) at 2004-11-23 17:44:11 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by Snark (user info) at 2004-11-23 12:16:20 (#)
I think we both know who that line was written for.
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I thought I told you to stay away from my sister!
...you know, because of her being such a tease and all...
Submitted by indepth25 (user info) at 2004-11-23 17:09:23 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Doesn't she know nobody likes a tease?!? hahahaha but it was deserved so all is good
LMAO warm apple pie under your desk, I can only imagine the contraption you use to keep it warm.
Submitted by TigerLilly (user info) at 2004-11-23 13:02:05 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by Snark (user info) at 2004-11-23 12:54:09 (#)
Ranking: 0
I have a warm apple pie taped upside down to the bottom of my desk.
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Sawsome!!!
Submitted by Jeanneee (user info) at 2004-11-23 12:59:03 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
McWicked Sexy
Submitted by Snark (user info) at 2004-11-23 12:54:09 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
I have a warm apple pie taped upside down to the bottom of my desk.
Submitted by TigerLilly (user info) at 2004-11-23 12:49:53 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by munkeypants (user info) at 2004-11-23 12:39:10 (#)
Ranking: 2
goddam sexy lusty posts... i can't be reading this shit at work...
<runs to the ladies room>
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Munkey, you have to get the micro-mini vibe which works great
at wor....never mind.
Submitted by munkeypants (user info) at 2004-11-23 12:39:10 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
goddam sexy lusty posts... i can't be reading this shit at work...
<runs to the ladies room>
Submitted by Snark (user info) at 2004-11-23 12:37:41 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Ahahaha
Nope, just thought she needed a turn.
Submitted by LadyPlural (user info) at 2004-11-23 12:34:40 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
I sense a bit of bitterness here- been cockblocked recently?
Submitted by TigerLilly (user info) at 2004-11-23 12:34:02 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Very good.
Submitted by Sassmasterr (user info) at 2004-11-23 12:29:07 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
splendid ending. a "splending", perhaps?
Submitted by Snark (user info) at 2004-11-23 12:16:20 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Thanks Coyote,
I think we both know who that line was written for.
Submitted by Coyote (user info) at 2004-11-23 12:11:45 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
I like "drunk and lost and tortured beyond redemption".
Submitted by AshK (user info) at 2004-11-23 11:56:12 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
sorry about that, my rollover minutes were dwindling.
excuse me while I go grab a smoke.
Submitted by Snark (user info) at 2004-11-23 11:49:27 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
I whipped this out real quick after a particularly inspiring phonecall last night.
I guess I figured it was only fair she get her revenge.
Submitted by WhatTheHell (user info) at 2004-11-23 11:49:02 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Not
Too
Shabby