The Age of Symmetry (666 hits)
Category: Quotes & Stories -> PoetryRating: -0.91 on 13 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by Martyn Steiner (View user info) at 2004-11-24 10:48:14 EST
A stretching hand reaches out into the void.
A timeless watch methodically sings away the days of my life.
And all this time, i sit, dormant; a shadow of my former self in a tomb of pain.
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Submitted by Spam (user info) at 2004-11-24 18:26:57 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
No Comment
Submitted by GodLovesALittleLovin (user info) at 2004-11-24 12:48:13 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Write something funny. I know you're capable.
Submitted by potatomanjack (user info) at 2004-11-24 12:26:14 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Please let this be a suicide note...
Please let this be a suicide note...
Please let this be a suicide note...
Please let this be a suicide note...
Submitted by Martyn_Steiner (user info) at 2004-11-24 11:31:16 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Haha! This was never a serious post. I was partially taking the piss and partially seeing if I would get positive reviews for pseudo-intellectual poetic bullshit. Obviously not. You win...
Haha...
Submitted by jgreening (user info) at 2004-11-24 11:24:10 EST (#)
Ranking: -1
"A timeless watch methodically sings away the days of my life."
And a pointless post ruthlessly rips away the minutes of my break...
Submitted by Dervel (user info) at 2004-11-24 11:23:44 EST (#)
Ranking: -1
Submitted by triple_optics (user info) at 2004-11-24 10:53:42 (#)
Ranking: 1
spaghetti Bolognese for tea tonight.
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I had that for tea last night.
Submitted by Phallic_Cymbals (user info) at 2004-11-24 11:06:52 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
They should cut off the modem connection to your tomb of pain, and do it quick..
Submitted by Sassmasterr (user info) at 2004-11-24 11:05:52 EST (#)
Ranking: -1
as long as you're sitting dormant, whip out some porn and jerk it til it's raw.
Submitted by WhatTheHell (user info) at 2004-11-24 11:04:44 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
SHUT THE FUCK UP SHUT THE FUCK UP
SHUT THE FUCK UP SHUT THE FUCK UP SHUT THE FUCK UP
SHUT THE FUCK UP SHUT THE FUCK UP
SHUT THE FUCK UP
Submitted by Iago (user info) at 2004-11-24 10:58:28 EST (#)
Ranking: -1
C'mon! your not even trying!
Submitted by triple_optics (user info) at 2004-11-24 10:53:42 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
spaghetti Bolognese for tea tonight.
Submitted by professorfuckface (user info) at 2004-11-24 10:51:07 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
It's a good title, but a shitty, shitty post.
Submitted by zakalwe (user info) at 2004-11-24 10:49:37 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
I liked it.