Paybacks (695 hits)
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Submitted by girlintheworld (View user info) at 2004-11-30 17:24:49 EST
In between the spaces, there are lies.
Sometimes, I wish you'd leave me alone.
Her kisses were becoming lifeless.
And maybe the best thoughts are the things that are never said.
I kept them safe. Hidden.
Give me the rest that only a deep sleep knows sweetly of.
Is nothing sacred?
Is everything silent?
There's a way you look at me, and I can't feel the same.
Does it help to know I feel inadequate? But the scars tell their own stories.
She wondered what the thoughts were inside his head. Did he think about her in those moments? Or was it all a vain fantasy? Did he realize that she thought she was ruining him and all he used to be?
Your eyes burn, taunting my indecision.
Out of fear I cried but you never got a hold of my mind, did you?
No amount of pounding could save me from my head.
Not everything is as it seems, and nothing follows suite.
Falling faster than before; I think you saw me right before I hit the ground. And you smiled and said, "Paybacks are a bitch, huh?"
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Submitted by Viciousriffs (user info) at 2005-06-30 19:16:35 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Peanuts are yummy.
Submitted by darko (user info) at 2004-11-30 20:29:26 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
gah these are getting out of hand, at least i can say i did mine early on http://www.ubersite.com/m/52990
Submitted by Impassive-Digressive (user info) at 2004-11-30 20:14:34 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
This post did very little for me, I'm afraid.
Kai's parody however was more than worthy of a chuckle.
Submitted by Adamdidit2u (user info) at 2004-11-30 17:49:45 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Kai earned you this +2
Submitted by Stin (user info) at 2004-11-30 17:47:14 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
The changes of person and tense really bothered me. But it's been a long day, so that could just be me.
Submitted by TigerLilly (user info) at 2004-11-30 17:44:51 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Kai, I just spit on my keyboard. Oh man you make me laugh.
Submitted by hidden101 (user info) at 2004-11-30 17:38:34 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by girlintheworld (user info) at 2004-11-30 17:38:22 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Havent gotten any in a while, huh Kai?
Submitted by kai070169 (user info) at 2004-11-30 17:35:42 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
In between the spaces, there are lines.
Sometimes, I wish you'd quit posting.
Your words were becoming lifeless.
And maybe the best thoughts are the things that are never written.
Keep them safe. Hidden from intelligent people.
Give me a break from your crappy writing.
Is nothing sacred?
Is everything silent?
I know you love reading my crap; and I can't feel the same.
Does it help to know I am superior? I'll make your ass fall off.
She wondered what size the peener was inside his pants. Did he think about her and get wood? Or was it all a vain fantasy? Did he realize that she bored the hell out of him with her writing?
Your crotch burns, antibiotics can't help.
Out of fear you rubbed my love lump but you never got a hold of my weiner, did you?
No amount of ass pounding could save you from giving me head.
Not everything is as it seems, and don't tell me I "taste salty".
Falling faster than before; I think you saw me right before I blew my load. And you smiled and said, "Any time, sailor boi!"
Submitted by TigerLilly (user info) at 2004-11-30 17:27:54 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
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Submitted by StonedSilly (user info) at 2004-11-30 17:27:34 EST (#)
Ranking: -1
Good god, stay on one topic.