Creatures Of The Night: The Beginning: Part 1 (1703 hits)
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Rating: 2 on 21 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by Matt Maiorano (View user info) at 2004-12-05 15:32:08 EST
Leyon looked on as the two young werewolves wrestled. It had always fascinated him when two members of the same race fought each other. Even in the heat of battle, it was so controlled - so calculated. Neither member would ever turn their weapons on each other. It was all so simple.
And when they were through, they would part ways knowing that much more about each other. Sometimes, they would even part as friends.
"Shall we separate them?" A youth asked.
"Leave them be, Ajin. Just watch." Leyon answered.
Ajin looked on and watched his two friends fight. One dark-haired boy fought with a certain grace that Ajin had never seen before. The other boy, body covered in scars, was the complete opposite. He relied on his power to try and overwhelm the dark-haired boy.
Blow after blow landed, but it was the dark-haired boy who stood over the other.
"Let that be a lesson to you, Feras! You can never beat me! How many times must I bash your head in for you to understand this!?"
"You're all talk, Siras! While you may have won, I'm learning how you fight. Just you wait!"
Siras' eyes darkened with rage when he heard this. He couldn't show it, but his head was aching from the last blow Feras had landed, and he was sure that Feras' threat was not an empty one. Without thinking, Siras lunged forward with his thumbnails drawn.
A thick arm wrapped around his own, and another around his throat. The nail was hovering just inches away from Feras' throat. His eyes were widened in terror.
"That is quite enough, Siras. You should know better than to draw your nails against your kin, especially when you are victorious."
Siras shut his eyes and cleared his throat in embarrassment. Feras scrambled away and bolted back to his home. Siras mumbled something.
"I'm sorry? I couldn't hear that, boy. Speak up."
"I apologize, Leyon. It won't happen again." Siras grumbled through his teeth.
Leyon loosened his grip around Siras' arm and neck.
"Do not apologize to me, Siras. Go back to your home and apologize to your brother. I don't want to see any of that again."
Siras obeyed and shamefully walked back to his home. Ajin stood by in amazement. He had never seen Siras humbled by anybody before. In truth, Ajin found Leyon to be the most terrifying werewolf in the village as well as the most fascinating. Leyon was known throughout the land for killing countless humans with his bare hands. He had torn soldiers limb from limb; he had single-handedly built his notoriety upon the blood of lieutenants, commanders, and generals.
Yet here he was, smiling as he watched two children fight. Ajin wanted to know more about him. But before he could approach him and tug on his sleeve, one of the elders stepped out.
"Leyon! The council calls for you! Humans approach from the east!"
to be continued....
User Reviews
Submitted by eppliks (user info) at 2006-07-26 13:50:27 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Good opener, albeit a bit short (but fitting for a prologue).
Submitted by Crystle (user info) at 2005-05-13 02:05:20 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I know, I know.. but I've only just read the series...
Submitted by Timmah (user info) at 2005-02-20 02:32:17 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
What I've been waiting for. A breath of fresh air in the stagnant pond that is uber right now.
Submitted by thecaes (user info) at 2005-01-10 16:43:23 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Crap. Now I have to track down all the other installments in the series.
Bastich.
Submitted by Brdn_Nkd (user info) at 2005-01-10 15:29:15 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by sebcharrot (user info) at 2004-12-05 16:40:53 (#)
Ranking: 2
Oh yes...
Oh yes oh yes oh yes oh yes oh yes.
Damn fucking skippy.
+2 for bringing back the ULTIMATE Uber series
Submitted by xenon (user info) at 2004-12-06 14:17:22 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Oh junk, they're back!
Submitted by munkeypants (user info) at 2004-12-06 12:57:17 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
kicker of all ass
Submitted by Ancius (user info) at 2004-12-06 12:20:34 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Briiiiiiiing iiiiiiiiiiit!
awooooooo!
Submitted by AshK (user info) at 2004-12-06 11:20:11 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Woo!
Submitted by Darshiscool (user info) at 2004-12-06 02:06:04 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
oh thank you for this
Submitted by cwl989 (user info) at 2004-12-05 22:54:08 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Holy shit, YES.
Submitted by Saxon (user info) at 2004-12-05 19:51:27 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
I will keep an eye on this series with definate interest.
Submitted by LadyPlural (user info) at 2004-12-05 19:41:19 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Continue, you fucker.
Submitted by zakalwe (user info) at 2004-12-05 17:29:52 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Interesting. Must look up this series.
Submitted by BalloonKnot (user info) at 2004-12-05 17:26:41 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by JMG114 (user info) at 2004-12-05 16:59:59 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Nothing's better than a prequel to possibly one of the greatest serials ever written on this site.
Submitted by creep_firebombing (user info) at 2004-12-05 16:49:59 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by sebcharrot (user info) at 2004-12-05 16:40:53 (#)
Ranking: 2
Oh yes...
Oh yes oh yes oh yes oh yes oh yes.
Damn fucking skippy.
+2 for bringing back the ULTIMATE Uber series
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Werd.
P.S. Come to my house the day after Christmas. "No." is not an acceptable answer.
Submitted by sebcharrot (user info) at 2004-12-05 16:40:53 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Oh yes...
Oh yes oh yes oh yes oh yes oh yes.
Damn fucking skippy.
+2 for bringing back the ULTIMATE Uber series
Submitted by Lechuga (user info) at 2004-12-05 16:35:06 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Holy shit, back from the dead. . . Creatures Of The Night fucking rocks!
Submitted by funkchomper (user info) at 2004-12-05 16:06:54 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Aw, Matt. That was so short. Continue!
Submitted by TigerLilly (user info) at 2004-12-05 15:36:08 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Very good professor.