Fiction: Vignettes: Mind Fuck (600 hits)
Category: NoneRating: 1.83 on 16 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by Glitch Cow (View user info) at 2004-12-06 19:32:15 EST
[fictional]
Let me count the joys.
He uses sex as a strange sort of weapon. The withholding of sex, that is.
It's seven AM, maybe eight. A slightly ungodly time. He's plugging away at some sort of accounting book. I'm not sure, but it looks deathly boring. I lean over and put my hand on his lap, moving it inwards.
"Get off this."
Closely followed by "Oh don't be such a goddamn baby", when I turn away.
Let's try another.
I'm looking at him, and he leans in with a certain look in his eyes, and at this point I am completely unsure as to whether he is going to kiss me or hit me.
Hit me hit me hit me hit me, something that wants to put an end to this already, says. Go on, I know you want to. Just hit me in the goddamn face and then this can all be over. The physical abuse would be final, the kind of final that I need - not these shaded over emotional mind fucks and toying games.
And he doesn't hit me. He doesn't kiss me either. Instead, he mutters something under his breath about not following him around so much (for chrissakes).
Oh.
Let's try one more.
"What would you say if I asked you to marry me after graduation?"
Quite possibly my favorite mind fuck ever. The best moment, the one that might even transcend "I'm attracted to you...kinda". This is one that will probably go down in a little list I make of the most well-played games he's thrown my way.
That was probably three months ago.
That little sentence bound me to him in a sickening way. He half retracted it so soon, but not soon enough to stop the frantic scramble on my part, to stop the images of what...
He owns me now. I'm half proud, half horrified.
One last moment. We're waiting at a bus station, and I lean in to whisper something in his ear, to draw him closer to me. He jerks away from me, takes my arm and moves me towards his side.
"Don't do that. People are looking. Don't put your back to the street like that...I saw people look at you and me."
"So?" I reply, and smile, ruffling his hair and inviting him to say something along the lines of let them look, or who cares. That's all fantasy, of course.
I see something flicker over his eyes for a moment.
"I don't want other people to look at you."
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User Reviews
Submitted by William_Q_Percy (user info) at 2005-03-30 03:10:56 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Happy belated birthday!
Submitted by Istaros (user info) at 2005-02-18 18:28:04 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
what are you, dead?
then again, if you are... extend my condolences to the clown on 42nd Street...
Submitted by Avals (user info) at 2005-01-31 14:16:06 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
I don't know why I dug this up so late, but here I am...
And here's the obligatory: SHOW US YOUR TITS!
Submitted by Istaros (user info) at 2004-12-18 00:20:12 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
there aren't enough people like you
Submitted by TigerLilly (user info) at 2004-12-07 09:41:28 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
This really pulled me in.
Excellent writing.
Well done.
Submitted by WhatTheHell (user info) at 2004-12-07 09:30:18 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Can I ass fuck you ?
.....just wondering.........??
Submitted by lojope (user info) at 2004-12-06 23:22:42 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
wow.
Submitted by FuckTheArmy (user info) at 2004-12-06 21:53:36 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Biggest Mindfuck Evarr.
Submitted by GlitchCowman (user info) at 2004-12-06 21:17:20 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
HA!
No.
I haven't.
It's sad...my birthday is february 3rd. Then I'll be legal, finally.
Submitted by hidden101 (user info) at 2004-12-06 21:13:59 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
forget about your boyfriend. i'm coming to Chicago in a couple weeks for a concert and i'll have a nice big suite downtown.
wait, did you turn 18 yet?
Submitted by GlitchCowman (user info) at 2004-12-06 21:06:14 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
The apps are coming along well, meaning that I haven't really...sort of...done anything since I sent in my early stuff. Oh well, I still have Christmas break, and all I have left to do is a short essay or two for U of C.
But I'm encountering a problem...I don't want to leave Chicago because I don't want to leave my boyfriend.
Submitted by shitfuck (user info) at 2004-12-06 20:24:38 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
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Submitted by spedmonkey (user info) at 2004-12-06 20:10:44 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
+2 for Viv. How your apps coming?
Submitted by hidden101 (user info) at 2004-12-06 20:01:31 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
make love to me.
Submitted by darko (user info) at 2004-12-06 19:48:37 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
I'm attracted to you... kinda.
Submitted by LadyPlural (user info) at 2004-12-06 19:36:12 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Cool.