VIVIsection (623 hits)
Category: NoneRating: 0.98 on 19 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by Remission <Beergood.at.beer.com> (View user info) at 2004-12-23 22:15:17 EST
Test subject 07796
Obligatory test of subjects nervous system.
"In nervous convolutions crouches infant ape, trembling in mothers shit."
Unexpected findings when 30,000 volts of electricity are applied it seems to cause great distress to the test subject. When raised to 50,000 volts it appears to have a sedative effect
"cage eyes tearless filled with contempt clinic mask experiment with
life and death smell lingering noxious mixed scent anxiety omnipotent doctor
grinds the cage door revealing loves primal instinct taken away the tiny
face terrified rant and rave smash your head against the cage vacuum
clicks on high conscious of the pain pass off as humane white coat seems
so clean most dirt bleached out of greed force"
As per test subject 07795 same results. No response from subject after second application of electric stimulus.
"Trip mucous inflection, more die. Pills each day... what goes around, comes back stronger"
User Reviews
Submitted by Fish3000 (user info) at 2004-12-27 18:19:35 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Changed my mind. I'm just glad there's another industrial person out there.
P.S. their live show is muy bueno.
Submitted by Fish3000 (user info) at 2004-12-27 18:16:03 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
I hate it when people take a song and just list the lyrics. You just gayed up a song with one of the best synthlines i've ever heard; way to go.
Moral: make your own political statements, don't take someone else's.
I'm high.
Submitted by Beer_bong (user info) at 2004-12-24 15:28:13 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
Um, ok.
Totally random rating is...
+1.
Submitted by LadyPlural (user info) at 2004-12-24 14:39:56 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Fair enough, but if that is the case, why not use the username that is most readily associated with you? if you've just been trolling, then it doesn't really count. Ahhh, whatever. Have a semi-happy holiday.
Submitted by CJRipley (user info) at 2004-12-24 09:49:06 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
just because
Submitted by ellieo (user info) at 2004-12-24 09:14:04 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
I've been on uber a lot longer than this user name.
Submitted by LadyPlural (user info) at 2004-12-24 01:05:27 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
And ellio, by "used to be about" do you mean "back in the good old days of November the 29th of this year"? Wow, almost a whole month. You really are an old hand at this Ubersite thing, aren't you. Next time I want to post, I'm asking you what you think about it first, and making sure that everything is ok with you before I actually post what I wrote.
Oh, here's a +1 for Skinny Puppy that I forgot to give out the first time.
Submitted by LadyPlural (user info) at 2004-12-24 01:00:36 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Proofread, be more coherent, and give me more of an idea what's going on.
Fuck the season. If (s)he wants to post something (no matter how much it may or may not suck), what the shit do you care? Was the title of the post not enough of an indication of what it was about?
Idiot.
Submitted by Remission (user info) at 2004-12-24 00:41:56 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
No... you are right... I should keep in mind the season before I post something that is on my mind... No wait... Fuck off
Submitted by ellieo (user info) at 2004-12-23 23:53:18 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
I think you're missing my point. Everything you do during the Holiday season doesn't have to be Santa-related, but posting something like this in between a bunch of Christmas related posts just seemed kind of weird. This applies to outside of uber: it's usually a good idea to keep your audience in mind, and the subject of vivisection isn't something people want on their minds right now. It's generally a good idea to try to keep it clean and lighthearted around the holidays. Horror movies that premier around Christmas, for example, are usually frowned upon.
Doesn't make a difference to me, just thought I'd offer up the suggestion from one writer to another. If I recall, that's sort of what this site used to be about.
Submitted by downerSTAIN (user info) at 2004-12-23 23:17:00 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
hah Yeah I was kind of being facetious. Skinny Puppy's pretty good, I saw them live a few months ago in Philly. Great live show. The music gets kind of boring though.
Submitted by Remission (user info) at 2004-12-23 23:14:42 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Yes I am... ala "remission" and this work VIVIsecion inspired by the song testure.
Submitted by downerSTAIN (user info) at 2004-12-23 23:12:32 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
You're not a Skinny Puppy fan, by any chance, are you?
Submitted by Remission (user info) at 2004-12-23 23:11:00 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
If you are going to rate a work based the season then maybe you shouldnt rate at all.
Submitted by ellieo (user info) at 2004-12-23 23:03:16 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Christmas Eve doesn't seem like an appropriate time to bust out the dark stuff, that's all.
Submitted by Remission (user info) at 2004-12-23 22:50:10 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Oh.. and disgusting? Very true... VIVIsection is very very wrong.
Submitted by Remission (user info) at 2004-12-23 22:45:55 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Thanks for the input... ill-timed eh? please elaborate
Submitted by ellieo (user info) at 2004-12-23 22:32:28 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Disgusting and ill-timed. First of all, I think you meant to use "convulsions". Proof reading is a must. Profanity, when used outside of character dialogue, will do nothing but cheapen your writing. You also run the risk of alienating an easily offended reader.
Oh yeah, and your story made no sense.
Submitted by mazman23 (user info) at 2004-12-23 22:29:12 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
+2 Because the title of your post is also the name of a Skinny Puppy record that I highly doubt more then 2 people on this site have actually herd of.