A Rainbow at Sunset (705 hits)
Category: Quotes & Stories -> PoetryRating: -0.33 on 12 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by Hood (View user info) at 2005-01-16 00:08:30 EST
A Rainbow At Sunset
What is Love? I believe that love is beautiful,
Like a Rainbow at Sunset.
Have you ever seen a Rainbow at Sunset?
I have.
A Rainbow at Sunset is the most beautiful thing I have ever seen.
It is the best right after a nice light spring rain,
The Rainbow around the Sun just like the Halo of an Angel.
The way the Sun shines as the clouds part,
The way it makes the Rainbow have that amazing glow to its edges,
This reminds me of how beautiful Love is.
Without Love we can't hope to ever find true Happiness.
Some say Happiness is through God and your beliefs.
If that is so,
Then I believe I Love you.
You are more beautiful than a Rainbow at Sunset,
No matter how amazing it is.
I Love you more than I ever could that Rainbow,
Because I know that you are forever,
The Rainbows at Sunset come few and far between,
But I hope that you will always be there,
No matter what happens to me,
If I were to die of some unnatural thing,
That takes me away from my only Love.
Then I hope you can see that Rainbow at Sunset,
Because from there I will be watching,
Through one great beauty,
To the greatest that lies Beyond It.
User Reviews
Submitted by Socialist_Joe (user info) at 2005-01-16 21:15:13 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Leaner legs
in 12 minutes
(no squates)
Submitted by munkeypants (user info) at 2005-01-16 21:07:02 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
Not bad
Submitted by Bickerstaff (user info) at 2005-01-16 16:40:38 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Prose, not poetry.
Doggerel, not prose.
Submitted by wardy (user info) at 2005-01-16 03:07:20 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Submitted by bart (user info) at 2005-01-16 02:22:29 (#)
Ranking: 0
What is love? Baby don't hurt me. Don't hurt me no more.
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pwned.
Submitted by Jo_of_the_golden_P (user info) at 2005-01-16 02:32:44 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by bart (user info) at 2005-01-16 02:22:29 (#)
Ranking: 0
What is love? Baby don't hurt me. Don't hurt me no more.
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That's exactly what I thought.
Submitted by bart (user info) at 2005-01-16 02:22:29 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
What is love? Baby don't hurt me. Don't hurt me no more.
Submitted by Sassmasterr (user info) at 2005-01-16 01:45:37 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
why isn't there Ghey@Work site that we could submit this to...
Submitted by polyamorousaj (user info) at 2005-01-16 00:45:14 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
What is Love? I believe that love is beautiful,
Like a Rainbow at Sunset.
Have you ever seen a Rainbow at Sunset?
I have.
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Oh, Jesus.
hahahahahahahaha
I can't stop laughing at this.
Post more of this... whatever you call it.
Submitted by BikerRob (user info) at 2005-01-16 00:36:59 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Looks like an adverisement for sanitary napkins.
Submitted by Tigre (user info) at 2005-01-16 00:34:31 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
poetry is not for ubersite.
Submitted by metroidkillah (user info) at 2005-01-16 00:22:43 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
That's beautiful. Unfortunately, I hate poetry. However, I'm gonna grade you fairly, unlike some people, jackass.
Submitted by tinactin (user info) at 2005-01-16 00:19:09 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
B@W