"Only The Good Die Young". (1513 hits)
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Submitted by Bigmike (View user info) at 2005-02-02 12:23:23 EST
He sat in his car, tires gently bumping against the curb, watching as she walked down the street. He took a sharp breath as he watched the wind pick up the hem of her plaid skirt and brushed it up against the smooth creamy skin of her thigh. He could feel the thumpimg in his chest as he watched her reach around and pat the skirt down, the palm of her right hand softly caressing her buttocks. It's funny what some people do when they don't realize they are being observed.
He watched her walk the entire street, climb the concrete stairs, and enter the church, big wooden doors closing behind her.
"Come out Virginia, don't let me wait
You Catholic girls start much too late
Oh But sooner or later it comes down to fate
I might as well will be the one"
He could only imagine what they were teaching her in there. Unlike his wife, he never trusted the catholic faith, or any faith for that matter. His trust resided in the leather holster secretly nuzzling his armpit. His faith attended the international church of gunpowder, his alter made of lead.
He could see her in his minds eye walking down the aisle towards the alter. Making her way past pew after pew towards the shrine. He could see her kneeling down once she got to the front, paying reverence to a Christ nailed to the cross. He could see her looking up at the idol hanging there, large as life. He imagined Jesus hanging there above her, looking down on her as she stared up. Peering down her nice, white, catholic girls blouse.
"They showed you a statue, told you to pray
They built you a temple and locked you away
But they never told you the price that you pay
For things that you might have done.....
Only the good die young
that's what I said
Only the good die young"
Virginia was feeling a bit bouncy today. As she walked to the church from her catholic school, she was looking forward to the rest of the evening. There was a dance at the church tonight and her parents were going to let her go all by herself. At fifteen, and just budding into the body of a woman, her parents had been careful to impose strict rules upon their daughter. The only reason they were letting her go to the dance at all was that it was at the church, and the church was a perfectly safe place to be. She told them that she would walk to the church after school and help set up for the dance.
She also told Bobby to do the same.
"You might have heard I run with a dangerous crowd
We ain't too pretty we ain't too proud
We might be laughing a bit too loud
Oh But that never hurt no one"
As she was sitting at the front pew, a soft silent prayer running through her mind, she heard the doors at the front of the church open and close. She turned slightly to see who was walking down the aisle behind her and wasn't surprised to see Bobby walking briskly towards her. He had a big smile on his face and he walked quickly. Virginia became instantly excited seeing him. She had a crush on him for the last three years and he had finally realized it a few weeks ago and casually started fliring with her. She had almost given up. She had become impatient with him and his lack of attention to her. She had tried everything to get his attention but all he thought about was sports and cars. She was beginning to wonder if thats all that boys ever thought about. Then, one day out of the blue he started talking to her. Showing an interest in her.
"So come on Virginia show me a sign
Send up a signal I'll throw you the line
The stained-glass curtain you're hiding behind
Never lets in the sun
Darlin' only the good die young
I tell ya
Only the good die young
Only the good die young"
He got to the front of the church, kneeled and crosseed himself. Virginia slid down the pew just a little and he stepped in and sat down. He turned to look at her and saw that she was staring right back at him. He loved the blue of her eyes. He loved the way her bright red hair framed her Irish features. He was intrigued at the way her blouse separated just enough from her neck to give his imagination a run at what was waiting for him at the end of that teasing line of cleavage. He bent forward to kiss her. Not a word had passed between them.
"You got a nice white dress and a party on your confirmation
You got a brand new soul
mmmm, And a cross of gold
But Virginia they didn't give you quite enough information
You didn't count on me
When you were counting on your rosary
(oh woah woah)"
"Not here!" she whispered to him, her hand raised gently between his lips and hers. She could see the disappointment on his face as she declined his kiss.
"Follow me," she giggled as she got up and ran down to the other end of the pew. He sat there for a few seconds watching her. Watching the way her womans body moved under that white blouse and that blue plaid catholic girl skirt. He always wondered why god made catholic girl school uniforms so sexy. It was the white knee socks that did it for him. He just loved those white knee socks.
When she got to the end of the pew she turned and looked at him. He hadn't moved yet and seemed to be concentrating on something else. "C'mon silly!" she said and turned to walk up the aisle. He got up quickly, adjusting the front of his pants as he went. He followed her up the aisle and watched as she turned towards the confessionals. She got to them, opened one of the doors and motioned for him to follow.
"They say there's a heaven for those who will wait
Some say it's better but I say it ain't
I'd rather laugh with the sinners than cry with the saints
the Sinners are much more fun...
You know that only the good die young
Oh woah baby
I tell ya
only the good die young
only the good die young"
He ran up to where she was, looked at her and then looked into the dark, enclosed space of the confessional. She smiled at him, a little nervously he thought, and then took his hand and led him into the darkness.
"You say your mother told you all that I could give you was a reputation
Aww She never cared for me
But did she ever say a prayer for me? oh woah woah"
Jack got out of his car and started walking towards the door of the church. The thought of Virginia smoothing the back of her plaid skirt caused him just a little discomfort, but the image of that punk Bobby walking in behind her, hard on raging through the front of his pants was too much for Jack. He was almost running by the time he got to the front door of the church. He opened it slowly so as no to disturb the two inside. He wanted to be sneaky because he wanted to catch them in the act, he wanted to catch that prick defiling his daughter.
He was inside just in time to hear the confessional door click closed.
"Come out come out come out virgina dont let me wait,
the catholic girls start much too late
sooner or later it comes down to fate
i might as well be the one,
u know that only the good die young"
As Jack walked towards the confessional, he could hear them laughing inside. He could also hear them breathing quite heavily. He walked quietly up to the door and listened even more intently. When he heard the sound of a zipper coming down it was all he could take. He grabbed the doorknob and ripped the door open. As he did, he shouted "WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO MY DAUGHTER?!?"
He was treated to a scene he had only imagined in his nightmares. There was his daughter, HIS DAUGHTER on her knees, shirt off, Bobby's hard cock in her mouth. The look on Bobby's face was pure ecstacy until he looked up and saw her father pointing the revolver at him. Then the looked turned to pure terror.
"I.......ERR.......UHH..........WAIT.......!" was all Bobby could say before Jack pulled the trigger and shot him in the face. Virginia could feel the blood and brain splatter all over her naked back. She almost bit Bobby's cock off as she heard the gun go off.
Virginia sat back against the wall of the confessional, shaking in fear and shock. She watched as her father Jack grabbed her arm and pulled her up.
"Put your shirt on slut," was what he said to her. She did as he said as he pulled the police radio from his pocket and started talking into it. She stared at him until he was done radioing in the fact that he had just shot a rapist in the process of perpetrating a crime. Then he turned to her and watched the tears fall down her blood streaked face.
"That'll teach you to cheat on me," was all he said.
"I'm telling u baby
only the good die young
only the good die young
only the gooooooooooooooood
only the good die young
only the gooooooooooooooood
only the good die young."
User Reviews
Submitted by Webered (user info) at 2006-06-19 14:35:37 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
That was a damn good story. Very real, although it shouldn't be. Buy hey, just another day in this world of ours.
Submitted by Bigmike (user info) at 2005-02-06 14:10:30 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by Circe (user info) at 2005-02-06 07:01:44 (#)
Ranking: 2
It's been three days. In those three days, I've downloaded damned near every Billy Joel song I could find.
I blame you for this.
Could have been worse Circe, I like the Sex Pistols also. :)
Submitted by Jay_Bassman (user info) at 2005-02-06 08:47:50 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Oh, and while this post did indeed fuck me up, it was still an awesome post. Another +2 for that.
You a big Billy Joel fan, mate? Me too.
Submitted by Jay_Bassman (user info) at 2005-02-06 08:46:10 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
That fucked me up. Catholic schoolgirl uniforms are nice though... still, this post fucked me up.
+2 for "The Entertainer" himself, Billy Joel.
Submitted by Tiltedhalo (user info) at 2005-02-06 08:11:32 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Hmmmmmm....... just wondering about your "delusions" of Catholic girls in general!!! : ) .... a little "confessional" envy going on there too I think! Actually... was great and I look forward to reading your other pieces.
Submitted by Circe (user info) at 2005-02-06 07:01:44 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
It's been three days. In those three days, I've downloaded damned near every Billy Joel song I could find.
I blame you for this.
Submitted by sparkle_pink (user info) at 2005-02-05 21:04:36 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Really excellent.
Submitted by Bigmike (user info) at 2005-02-03 09:51:29 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by Circe (user info) at 2005-02-03 09:48:09 (#)
Ranking: 2
Who are you gonna listen to, Mike? The entirety of human civilzation, or me?
Damned right it's me.
:) I adore you.
Thank you, baby.
Feelings mutual. :)
Submitted by Circe (user info) at 2005-02-03 09:48:09 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Who are you gonna listen to, Mike? The entirety of human civilzation, or me?
Damned right it's me.
:) I adore you.
Submitted by Bigmike (user info) at 2005-02-03 09:40:13 EST (#)
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Submitted by Circe (user info) at 2005-02-03 09:38:19 (#)
Ranking: 2
So because of you, I've downloaded the song and have been listening to it all evening.
And Mike? This is one of the best things you've ever written.
The masses don't seem to think so.
I enjoyed creating it though.
Submitted by Circe (user info) at 2005-02-03 09:38:19 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
So because of you, I've downloaded the song and have been listening to it all evening.
And Mike? This is one of the best things you've ever written.
Submitted by Awko (user info) at 2005-02-03 08:21:37 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
If only the good die young, what does that say about the pope?
Submitted by Pimpernell (user info) at 2005-02-03 04:57:34 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
vely goodly.
Submitted by Coyote (user info) at 2005-02-03 04:34:08 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Nicely put together, and the last line clinched it.
Submitted by Ed_0150 (user info) at 2005-02-03 03:41:07 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Excelent
Submitted by DanielH (user info) at 2005-02-02 20:43:59 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Sex would be so bland without the spice of religion.
Submitted by Circe (user info) at 2005-02-02 20:18:30 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
That was hot.
And now that song is stuck in my head - I LOVE that song.
"That'll teach you to cheat on me" - best parenting I ever saw. It's inspiring.
"Have I found subject matter too disturbing for Ubersite? Couldn't have ever imagined it."
Hehehe. Not yet...
Submitted by Bigmike (user info) at 2005-02-02 19:54:02 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by Freakmagnet (user info) at 2005-02-02 19:34:23 (#)
Ranking: 1
This was a little disturbing, do a sequel where the dad gets his. I'll +2 it.
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Submitted by TragicKingdom (user info) at 2005-02-02 17:02:19 (#)
Ranking: 1
wow, creepy, but that was really good!
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Submitted by CaptainThorns (user info) at 2005-02-02 15:38:56 (#)
Ranking: 2
oh my.
dark AND twisted.
are you smoking something today?
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Submitted by espo (user info) at 2005-02-02 13:50:13 (#)
Ranking: 2
disturbing...but I love when you write these posts, so +2
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Submitted by Lisa (user info) at 2005-02-02 13:37:42 (#)
Ranking: 1
I always imagined you as a fatherly figure, BigMike. "Fatherly figure" assumes new meaning as of now.
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Submitted by Yes (user info) at 2005-02-02 13:27:54 (#)
Ranking: 2
woah.
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Submitted by BLITZKREIG_BOB (user info) at 2005-02-02 13:02:25 (#)
Ranking: 2
I'm afraid of you.
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Submitted by SilvrWolf (user info) at 2005-02-02 12:56:42 (#)
Ranking: 2
What your mind is able to produce is kind of scary sometimes, Mike.
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Submitted by TheSpook (user info) at 2005-02-02 12:49:11 (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by MickGinny (user info) at 2005-02-02 12:44:48 (#)
Ranking: 0
this disturbed me.
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Submitted by MickGinny (user info) at 2005-02-02 12:44:48 (#)
Ranking: 0
this disturbed me.
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Have I found subject matter too disturbing for Ubersite? Couldn't have ever imagined it.
Submitted by Freakmagnet (user info) at 2005-02-02 19:34:23 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
This was a little disturbing, do a sequel where the dad gets his. I'll +2 it.
Submitted by Stin (user info) at 2005-02-02 19:27:14 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Bigmike (user info) at 2005-02-02 17:37:46 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by Bigmike (user info) at 2005-02-02 13:29:04 (#)
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More than a drunken Mini-Me rampaging nude around a house, pissing on the floor?
Pshaw.
This was for Mick in case anybody was wondering.
Submitted by TragicKingdom (user info) at 2005-02-02 17:02:19 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
wow, creepy, but that was really good!
Submitted by screamfeeder (user info) at 2005-02-02 15:40:15 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by CaptainThorns (user info) at 2005-02-02 15:38:56 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
oh my.
dark AND twisted.
are you smoking something today?
Submitted by JMG114 (user info) at 2005-02-02 14:26:04 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Excellent, and a terrific twist. I like posts based on Billy Joel songs.
Submitted by 1Point21Gigawatts (user info) at 2005-02-02 13:55:15 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
Not bad, but I like this one better:
http://www.ubersite.com/m/37742
Submitted by Bigmike (user info) at 2005-02-02 13:52:20 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Evidently this is more disturbing than I thought it would be.
Submitted by espo (user info) at 2005-02-02 13:50:13 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
disturbing...but I love when you write these posts, so +2
Submitted by Lisa (user info) at 2005-02-02 13:37:42 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
I always imagined you as a fatherly figure, BigMike. "Fatherly figure" assumes new meaning as of now.
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2005-02-02 13:31:39 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Auto -2 for Billy Joel.
Submitted by Bigmike (user info) at 2005-02-02 13:29:04 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
More than a drunken Mini-Me rampaging nude around a house, pissing on the floor?
Pshaw.
Submitted by Yes (user info) at 2005-02-02 13:27:54 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
woah.
Submitted by Bigmike (user info) at 2005-02-02 13:27:20 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
I read so many goddam carolrichards posts earlier that my altar turned into alter.
Bastards.
Submitted by BLITZKREIG_BOB (user info) at 2005-02-02 13:02:25 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
I'm afraid of you.
Submitted by AshK (user info) at 2005-02-02 12:58:08 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
No Comment
Submitted by SilvrWolf (user info) at 2005-02-02 12:56:42 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
What your mind is able to produce is kind of scary sometimes, Mike.
Submitted by darko (user info) at 2005-02-02 12:56:07 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
+2 for groundhog day!
Submitted by TheSpook (user info) at 2005-02-02 12:49:11 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by MickGinny (user info) at 2005-02-02 12:44:48 (#)
Ranking: 0
this disturbed me.
Submitted by xenon (user info) at 2005-02-02 12:46:27 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
No Comment
Submitted by MickGinny (user info) at 2005-02-02 12:44:48 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
this disturbed me.
Submitted by congo (user info) at 2005-02-02 12:44:22 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by nitty34 (user info) at 2005-02-02 12:29:21 (#)
Ranking: 2
Auto +2 for Billy Joel
Submitted by Soley_Trinity (user info) at 2005-02-02 12:35:28 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Excellent! For some reason Jack reminds me of my father...ahem.
Anyway, I thought that maybe you might enjoy reading this when you've got a few minutes spare. It's a lyric post. http://www.ubersite.com/m/54185
Submitted by nitty34 (user info) at 2005-02-02 12:29:21 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Auto +2 for Billy Joel
Submitted by TigerLilly (user info) at 2005-02-02 12:28:32 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Holy Mary Mother Of God......this was awesome Mike!!!!
+2 Billy Joel