Spoken. A true fucking artist. (616 hits)
Category: Quotes & Stories -> PoetryRating: 0.11 on 18 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by Timmah http://www.thesebloodyhands.co.uk (View user info) at 2005-02-15 22:28:46 EST
This is post is not my own material so feel free to -2 as a cut and paste. I just feel that it's criminal to let this go un noticed by the people of uber. This is the work of a girl I hold very dear to my heart, one of the most intelligent people I've ever met, and one of the most amazing personalities to become part of my life.
So yeah, read this. And pay no attention to an gramatical errors, this is the work of a true artist and should be appreciated for what it is. It's very dark and very visual. I hope you can love this like I do.
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I smudge your Avarice painted face like wet ink,
& Bloody finger prints on ceramic sinks...
The floor is coated with a chronic hate,
The air's polluted with your neurotic state,
Filled with screams like scraping forks on metal plates.
The carpet fibers are matted together thickly,
In the oily clumps of your sickness...
Residue of spite & jealousy drip down damp walls,
The crevices accumulate, Breeding quickly over days;
Bacterium & Micro organisms..
An auxiliary to your plagues.
Shared out & divided, The truth for all to see..
Infiltrates your breeding ground of acute atrocity,
Hear it being shouted out from the roof tops of the towns & cities...
It's leaking out like bodily fluids,
Plasma & Lymph from the swollen wounds..
..You can't hide it...
Like the jagged Hole I tore in your paper chest,
This Laceration of your vile flesh..
You can see right Inside..
Like autopsy's on cadavers we can certify the cause..
We have the solutions to uphold our laws.
We will sound our battle cries,
& Set off the sirens of war...
Nothing will Stop this process,
We will not Abdicate,
We'll make sure we seal your fate.
FEAR ME PARASITE!!!
fear the wrath that i incite...
Oh how I will outlast the weak & pathetic like you.
...For I am the free,
SALVATION!
An eulogy...
Are you scared?...
Because you should be...
When All your fundaments have miscarried
& Silence & Inertia greet your litany's..
Know your death is near...
so stay down on your knees.
I spot the Body tremors of the afraid
& I smell their perfume of fear...
I taste their nervous sweat on my lips...
I'll rip them apart with my bear hands & skilled finger tips...
Like the artful Feline that stalks it's prey,
You'll not see the danger until it's much too late.
As we creep on soft, Delicate, velvet paws..
But non dare forget...That they hide our claws.
Killing is fun..
We'll play with you,
Let you get uphill before we dismantle...
As the higher we allow you to climb..
The far more gory the fall will be.
& the greater satisfaction we'll receive in bearing witness to this Macabre Affinity...
We will watch you fall in myrth...
& Watch your blood drain into the parched earth..
You're the queen of Hypocrisy,
A Pharisee...
we'll end your reign soon,
& end your Belligerence that we've grown averse to.
You're dissipating...
& We, We are Desecrating,
You will pay in Annihilation.
A power to harness..
Specifically to create this carnage.
Oh look how you're rapidly sinking..
Disappearing into the slurry,
..All you're years of Bullshit..
Your minds rotting fast & i know you can taste the first morsels of defeat..
SWALLOW IT!!!!
The stench around you of social & moral decay is overpowering,
The people all around are leaving..
To elude the contorted world you made,
Where you had them kept like pets in a cage..
They're escaping for easy breathing,
& fleeing your infection...
Refusing to expire with you in your self dug grave...
Instead they'll burry you..
YOU'LL NOT BE SAVED!
People have a natural detest of the unclean..
People don't like dirt...
You're a mixture of Mud & spit(E),
The effervescent broth in the cauldron of dilapidated freedom....
Burning & Blistering,
Skinned of fur..
But hold no doubt, We'll make this pain go further.
There will be a release of this life's Bane,
Once we've wiped away the stain..
The vast black mark we call 'you'..
We prefer to be unsullied..
...We prefer whut's true...
((C)Dominick Destruction aug 2004)
You can find her artwork and writings here http://vampirefreaks.com/profile.php?user=Dominick-Destruction.
User Reviews
Submitted by Ivy (user info) at 2005-02-26 08:17:43 EST (#)
Ranking: -1
How fucking hypocritical of you, look familiar?:
Submitted by Timmah (user info) at 2004-12-15 09:18:00 (#)
Ranking: -1
No Comment
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All right, I'll give give you my two cents: I thought it was dark and bitter, and it just went on and on. I got the point, enough all fucking ready.
Submitted by Wazza (user info) at 2005-02-18 23:53:07 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
I liked this,! but most people dont have an appreciation for poetry.
Submitted by Ivy (user info) at 2005-02-16 02:54:09 EST (#)
Ranking: -1
No Comment
Submitted by Timmah (user info) at 2005-02-16 01:48:45 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
*bump*
Submitted by Dead_0hi0_Sky (user info) at 2005-02-15 23:42:13 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
No Comment
Submitted by Timmah (user info) at 2005-02-15 23:28:02 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
no you gave me one of my lowest ratings and said the poem sucked. simple as that. Either you forgot to add anything sarcastic. Or your sarcasm sucks. sorry buddy.
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2005-02-15 23:06:29 EST (#)
Ranking: -1
I gave you one of your higher ratings here, you fucking idiot.
Learn to detect sarcasm, fuckhead. Or I'll kill you.
Submitted by Degreeless_Capibara (user info) at 2005-02-15 22:55:47 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Submitted by polyamorousaj (user info) at 2005-02-15 22:32:15 (#)
Ranking: -2
Submitted by youarsoghey (user info) at 2005-02-15 22:31:08 (#)
Ranking: -2
You asked for it.
hahahahahaha
Submitted by Timmah (user info) at 2005-02-15 22:55:26 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2005-02-15 22:54:13 (#)
Ranking: -1
It sucked but I'm not gonna be told what to do.
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It sucked because you're a moron :)
Submitted by CookieLass (user info) at 2005-02-15 22:54:54 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
YAY FOR DOM!! hahahaha... I knew it before I even saw the link. Does she know you're putting her work on here, Timmy?
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2005-02-15 22:54:13 EST (#)
Ranking: -1
It sucked but I'm not gonna be told what to do.
Submitted by JohosaPhaTZ (user info) at 2005-02-15 22:51:30 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
A true fucking artist, indeed.
+2.
"I don't care about the reviews as long as people can appreciate the content."
I wouldn't care either.
Submitted by Timmah (user info) at 2005-02-15 22:51:24 EST (#)
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Awww your first review.
What a fucking waste
Submitted by Timmah (user info) at 2005-02-15 22:50:13 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Fuck. I've just realised if you -2 this people are going to ignore it. Damnit. I really want people to see her work.
Submitted by BigCore (user info) at 2005-02-15 22:50:00 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Apparently no one appreciates the content. As for me, I hate poetry so I'll not make unjustified comments about it.
Submitted by Timmah (user info) at 2005-02-15 22:36:56 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
I don't care about the reviews as long as people can appreciate the content.
Submitted by polyamorousaj (user info) at 2005-02-15 22:32:15 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Submitted by youarsoghey (user info) at 2005-02-15 22:31:08 (#)
Ranking: -2
You asked for it.
hahahahahaha
Submitted by youarsoghey (user info) at 2005-02-15 22:31:08 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
You asked for it.