After the Pandemic: Unnatural Born Killers 2 (948 hits)
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Submitted by Snark << snarkk.at.gmail.com (View user info) at 2005-03-09 01:16:08 EST
After the Pandemic: Unnatural Born Killers 2
Desert sand and the taste of him and if she listened hard enough she could hear the echoes of their shotgun-fucking return in waves from the reddening dunes.
She laid on top of him, intertwined and panting, leaking moisture and lust and still hungry for him, still not quite done.
Somewhere behind her, the Mexican sun began to crest the horizon, casting them in blood red glow, baking the lust softened sand on her back, caressing her as if washing a Goddess.
One look from him and she knew she was a Goddess and he a God and the world and the animals on it were placed for their pleasure, for their carnal indiscretion...
...for them to use or gift or turn to blood.
Treasures piled high in the wide corridors of their whim.
She leaned her head back and made to join him in howling chorus into the fading night but a sound, not quite right, stole to them over the carcass strewn sand, and they were up and naked and armed and ready.
The sound drifted to them again and she looked to him, looked to the steady ear, the cat like sense that she'd never had to learn to trust.
After a moment he brushed hardening sand from his bare chest, narrowed his eyes with the same predator's glare that had drawn her to him to begin with and then pointed through the dawn towards their car, barely visible in the distance, and the horde of shadows swarming over it.
"Please"
She didn't have to say it. She simply wanted to.
They broke into a steady trot - side by side and grinning bloody appetite, and when the distance was right she let his lean legs carry him into the lead and fired around his unflinching body, each shot a surgical dream, as he slashed his way into the heart of them.
Out front and slightly to his left a dead man stumbled on a rotting leg and went down and the rim of his filthy Sombrero brushed against her lover's leg, against the skin that must never be touched, the sheath he'd promised to her and her alone.
Rage took her beyond her bloodlust and she emptied the remainder of her weapon into its rotting skull, before pulling the machete from the sheath at its hip and ripping into it. Finally, when she'd had her justice, she joined her lover in the frenzied, wonderful, carnage ride to their car and, the Mexican whore in the trunk that had drawn the horde to begin with.
Their plaything.
Another lamb they'd cut from the herd.
They howled and fought and stood bloody back to bloody back until the carnage was done and he was on her again and ready to be in her again, while the Peyote began to kick in where the Tequila had begun to fail.
They fucked against the trunk of the car as if it were their first time, oblivious to the muffled sobs coming from within, oblivious to the fluids of the dead, running in thick rivulets, down the valleys of their unbroken skin.
Lost and in love with the kill and each other, and completely unaware of the wall of dead approaching from the far end of town.
User Reviews
Submitted by rad1101 (user info) at 2005-07-07 18:57:24 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
you know there are 95 of these.
I suggest somone steal them and make a novel.
Submitted by notyou (user info) at 2005-07-07 18:43:23 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
No Comment
Submitted by Snark (user info) at 2005-06-23 12:21:40 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Damage Control
Submitted by ProgramGeek (user info) at 2005-06-22 17:37:31 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
No Comment
Submitted by nrduncan (user info) at 2005-05-12 17:44:04 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I have just got done reading these all and I have enjoyed them all. Great work everyone, +2's for all!
Submitted by Professional_Peon (user info) at 2005-03-12 11:57:25 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Here is my contribution - http://www.ubersite.com/m/61730
Submitted by Dannie (user info) at 2005-03-11 12:29:23 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Spam (user info) at 2005-03-10 03:44:07 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
"There's a whore in your boot"
Submitted by BLITZKREIG_BOB (user info) at 2005-03-09 16:18:46 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Ten minutes?!?
It took me like eight hours to write mine.
I guess that (my) perserverance is an ample substitute for (your) talent.
Submitted by engine13 (user info) at 2005-03-09 13:01:38 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
I like the way the first sentence echoes Circe's. Nice. You guys are a good team.
Submitted by Xena (user info) at 2005-03-09 11:59:15 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
you know how much I like your twisted little imagination...keep em comin
Submitted by Jack_McCallum (user info) at 2005-03-09 11:37:35 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
I find all these little offshoots really cool. Keep 'em coming, C & S!
Submitted by TigerLilly (user info) at 2005-03-09 11:36:47 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Fantastic.
Submitted by munkeypants (user info) at 2005-03-09 11:24:07 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
This is the best uber project ever.
Blood and lust. Blood lust.
Awesome.
Submitted by LadyPlural (user info) at 2005-03-09 10:53:41 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Oooooooh.
Submitted by spedmonkey (user info) at 2005-03-09 09:16:44 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
They are so fucked.
Get it? Get it?
Submitted by MyNameIsTim (user info) at 2005-03-09 07:10:44 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
this series rocks
Submitted by Coyote (user info) at 2005-03-09 04:34:08 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Excellent stuff!
All is not sweetness and light, though...
the touch of the zombie female on the nameless
hero... the fluids on unbroken skin...
Do some escape transformation into zombies...
or swine for that matter?
Submitted by Rawrg (user info) at 2005-03-09 02:27:08 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Ace.
Submitted by Ainkara (user info) at 2005-03-09 02:23:26 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Bigmike (user info) at 2005-03-09 01:43:11 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Just because.
Submitted by Snark (user info) at 2005-03-09 01:35:33 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
If we were British it would be called a boot.
Then I could say "There's a whore in your boot"
Which wouldn't be funny at all.
Submitted by Circe (user info) at 2005-03-09 01:29:18 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Dude.. I drive a station wagon... that's just nasty.
Submitted by Snark (user info) at 2005-03-09 01:28:27 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
I NEVER kid about whore's in trunks. (Look in yours)
Submitted by Circe (user info) at 2005-03-09 01:26:45 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
HA! Awesome... I thought you were kidding about the whore in the trunk.
Submitted by Snark (user info) at 2005-03-09 01:22:24 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Hehehe I wrote this in about 10 minutes flat. I wanted to see if I could match the tone more than anything and I kinda like that it comes full circle in a way.
Submitted by thecaes (user info) at 2005-03-09 01:21:17 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
I liked it...BUT...I would have liked to see something added to the original part. This was pretty much like the first one: they kill some zombies and then go at it. Nice imagery though, especially at the beginning.