EPISODE 97: "Becoming the Overman" (983 hits)
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Submitted by The Chronicles of College-Guy (View user info) at 2005-03-12 21:13:12 EST
*THE CHRONICLES OF COLLEGE-GUY*
EPISODE 97: "Becoming the Overman"
March 12, 2005
Purple droplets slide cautiously down my arm, terrified of their final leap to the floor. I swallow hard as I twist the blade, tearing the metal into my flesh. In the depths of undeniable pain comes a wave of peace. I sigh in relief. The bleeding is working.
I used to be a fuckoff. I used to be a worthless child with insufficient enough understanding to be able to really use my gift. I never really comprehended who I am, what I am. Throughout my life, I had delusions of grandeur--every sociopath does. Yet I never realized the will-changing life force inside of me.
I have been cutting for a few days. Already, my arm is permanently scarred. It has to be that way. {Emily had a scarred arm from an accident on the swings when we were children. I pushed her too hard, she flew through the air, and she cut herself landing on a see-saw. I never hurt her again until she died.} I have to inflict more pain on myself. I have to Overcome.
I open my sock drawer and take out my drug kit. There is pot, pills, and coke, but none of this is important now. Only the acid gives true insight.
A lot of LSD has been passing through my system lately. At first, it was all part of a joke. "In honor of Hunter Thompson," I'd think to myself. Then I began ingesting more and the Will of God was given to me. It wasn't until this week that it all became quite clear.
As I let a tab desolve on my tongue, I remove the towel from my waist. From under my bed, I pull out a family portrait of my sister, my mother, and me.
I want to fuck them, I think to myself.
Fucking them is Salvation. Disobeying His will, declaring His death. The Almighty is a galaxy, not the universe. Can't you see that I'm not mad? It all makes sense, and I will prove it to the world soon.
As my dick plumps, extends, reaches towards the ceiling, the acid begins oozing its way into my mind. I slightly hullicinate as I begin to pound my cock--partly because of the drugs and partly because there is still blood drooling down my arm from the open wound.
"Eat my cum," I laugh to myself, imagining my sister and mother making out. They then turn to my mighty dick and suck it, suck my balls, suck my power, have cum exploding over them. They are covered in it.
{Emily was the only girl that I ever loved, the only thing that I ever loved. There was no reason for her to die}.
Sitting naked in the candlelight of my room, I cannot move as monsters and goblins hop to and fro from off the walls. Tripping, bleeding, cum shot across my stomach, I feel the true glory of Self.
He calls me the Antichrist, but I am the Overman.
User Reviews
Submitted by Lisa (user info) at 2005-04-11 22:45:22 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
I haven't read much of your other stuff. This is pretty uninspired. Looks like you're going for shock value but don't have the creativity to deliver it in a way that's not cheap and cliche.
Submitted by mybrainisawaffle (user info) at 2005-04-11 22:29:34 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Here's +2, buy yourself something nice.
Submitted by MrRottenTreats (user info) at 2005-03-13 13:38:11 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Sherman (user info) at 2005-03-13 12:57:02 EST (#)
Ranking: -1
Trite.
Submitted by rad1101 (user info) at 2005-03-13 06:03:09 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
imagining my sister and mother making out.
bad sentence. ruins the flow somewhat.
Otherwise, a decent submission.
Submitted by c1ndy (user info) at 2005-03-13 03:16:25 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
good, good
Submitted by Thirty_Four_Eggs (user info) at 2005-03-13 02:35:56 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
durel = auto +2
still awesome, ive been reading since the first one, but really cbf going back and +2ing every single post. (except the teen porn directories which i just find sick)
take this as a +2 for everything
Submitted by Chinaski (user info) at 2005-03-13 00:31:48 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
It's starting to read like Steven Durell's inner-duress melodrama spectacular, cg...
Submitted by boneface (user info) at 2005-03-12 23:20:35 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
No Comment
Submitted by Degreeless_Capibara (user info) at 2005-03-12 22:37:36 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Submitted by Chronicles_of_College_Guy (user info) at 2005-03-12 22:04:48 (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by Johnathan_Brains (user info) at 2005-03-12 21:59:22 (#)
Ranking: 0
YOU'RE ALL GOD DAMN WORTHLESS SAVAGES!
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How's that for random?
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He's done that to every post so far.
Submitted by Divinity (user info) at 2005-03-12 22:27:37 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
I still say the doctors wanted it in the ass.
Submitted by tragiksaint (user info) at 2005-03-12 22:11:41 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
fucking twisted, but good.
Submitted by Chronicles_of_College_Guy (user info) at 2005-03-12 22:04:48 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by Johnathan_Brains (user info) at 2005-03-12 21:59:22 (#)
Ranking: 0
YOU'RE ALL GOD DAMN WORTHLESS SAVAGES!
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How's that for random?
Submitted by Johnathan_Brains (user info) at 2005-03-12 21:59:22 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
YOU'RE ALL GOD DAMN WORTHLESS SAVAGES!
Submitted by darko (user info) at 2005-03-12 21:56:26 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
good stuff.
Submitted by Chronicles_of_College_Guy (user info) at 2005-03-12 21:41:11 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Why do you get the feeling that I'm trying to make MVA. I never said that (except for once, but I dare you to find it). As far as you know, I never said that...
Anyway, thanks for the -2/+1 or whatever.
Submitted by Degreeless_Capibara (user info) at 2005-03-12 21:38:12 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Just so another shitfuck doesn't get pulled on me, my ratings don't count. I give everyone -2s now, regardless if I think the post deserves it or not. This post was more of a +1 for me. But alas.
Submitted by Degreeless_Capibara (user info) at 2005-03-12 21:36:49 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
I don't know how you got over 10,000 hits. One second you're an annoying prick with a horrible post/hit ratio trying to make 10k, now you're an annoying prick trying to make MVA.