Secret Society - Part 2 (902 hits)
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Submitted by Rad's suspicious mind being slowly led to illumination (View user info) at 2005-04-13 06:04:38 EDT
Part 1 http://www.ubersite.com/m/63289
Jacob's heart was racing as he approached the large stone building. Ivy hung out over the eaves in front of the faded green door. Old green paint peeled away as he reached up and grasped the knocker. This green door stood between being part of the clueless masses and joining one of the oldest and most secretive orders in the world. The very existence of this group is doubted by most, and the lay believers are disregarded as conspiracy nuts.
Jacob raised and lowered the thin iron knocker five times.
The door slowly swung open, and Jacob entered the front chamber of this ancient structure. An old man sat at a large oak desk in the middle of the room. The old man looked withered and broken, like a sack of flour with a hole punched in the side. "What do you need young man," the old man cackled, "I am very busy, and I haven't all day, you know. Furthermore, I don't think an uneducated stumblebum such as you is at the correct office. Welfare and unemployment is down the Straße. Please make your apologies and leave."
Jacob didn't hesitate. "Your honor," he began, "I have traveled here on my merits and on the word of he who speaks for me. I now give that word to you."
"Pont-de-aft"
The old man straightened bolt upright from his chair, and approached Jacob in a strong and confident manner, apparently free from any pains and aches the elderly commonly suffer. In a deep resonating voice, the not old man said, "Welcome Jacob. I am the Keygiver. I shall give you the key you require for entrance to the inner chamber. Take heed, failure to pass may have negative consequences."
The Keygiver took Jacob's left hand in his own, and with his right he unfastened the top five buttons on Jacob's light blue chambray shirt. Slipping his hand over the right side of Jacob's bare chest, he leaned in close enough for their lips to almost touch. "This is how you address the Lockmaster," the not old man whispered, "Exactly like I have shown you. The Lockmaster will prepare you for admittance."
The Keygiver then escorted Jacob by the arm to a door at the back of the room. Opening it, a narrow descending staircase seemed to stretch forever; gas lamps illuminated the corridor every ten feet or so, but Jacob could not make out the ending from where he was standing.
"The Lockmaster awaits you Jacob. Do not fail." The not old man glared at him, almost accusing him of some crime that he has yet to commit.
Descending the stairs, Jacob entered a small anteroom to what must be the inner chamber of the Illuminati. Scores of candles lit the area, reflecting on mirrors that covered every wall. Given the limitless perspective on the small room in which he stood, he should have been able to see the other, the heat of a presence behind him, an unseen spectre now breathing a sweet perfume upon his ear, hypnotizing him into a state of vulnerability. Soft, delicious smells, female pheromones filling his senses; reminding him of the first time he tasted the honey and nectar of young flesh, as a boy the nostalgia of youth passed, young nubile bodies writhing in ecstasy.
Cold hard steel pressed into the impressible skin under Jacob's jaw, sending him reeling back into the forward part of his consciousness. Jacob could barely stifle his gag reflex, and attempted to turn and face his assailant, but the bare bodkin dimpled his skin further, a well of bright crimson forming on the point. He froze in fear, unable to speak, unable to gather his thoughts.
The succubus had him under her spell.
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Submitted by Chicane (user info) at 2005-10-19 09:06:22 EDT (#)
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Submitted by Travisty (user info) at 2005-08-23 13:10:14 EDT (#)
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Submitted by Spam (user info) at 2005-04-16 18:14:43 EDT (#)
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'...he reached up and grasped the knocker'
This line made me chuckle. For some reason I had this image of him grabbing hold of a giant disembodied tit.
Hopefully I'm sober enough to remember writing this.
Submitted by NoahsArk (user info) at 2005-04-13 22:02:08 EDT (#)
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So he got axed cuz he fucked up the password?
Submitted by JonnyX (user info) at 2005-04-13 18:50:58 EDT (#)
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Submitted by rad1101 (user info) at 2005-04-13 15:39:38 EDT (#)
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This is moving along quite slowly today, no?
Submitted by darko (user info) at 2005-04-13 10:06:29 EDT (#)
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succubi are teh r0x0rz
Submitted by knucklesnelson (user info) at 2005-04-13 08:44:42 EDT (#)
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Submitted by williamson (user info) at 2005-04-13 08:35:21 EDT (#)
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I like where this is going.
Furthermore I have no idea where this is going.
Yet, I can tell I already like it.
Submitted by Jungle_Jimanee (user info) at 2005-04-13 07:56:45 EDT (#)
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Submitted by Ducky (user info) at 2005-04-13 06:29:08 (#)
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More please!
Submitted by pen_name (user info) at 2005-04-13 07:22:47 EDT (#)
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Submitted by Zoidberg (user info) at 2005-04-13 06:49:34 EDT (#)
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stone buildings make my heart race too
Submitted by Ducky (user info) at 2005-04-13 06:29:08 EDT (#)
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More please!
Submitted by rad1101 (user info) at 2005-04-13 06:07:24 EDT (#)
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Pressed into the impressible skin?
Holy fuck I am retarded.