The Man who was not there Anymore (339 hits)
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Submitted by Chronic Masturbator (View user info) at 2005-05-14 00:30:49 EDT
There would always be that man, who would be sitting and waiting for me on top of those flight of stairs.
Graying hair at the temples, age seemed to have taken a better part of him. He was much wiser in my complexion.
Everytime I walked up those stairs, he would turn around, and run to the end of the hallway. He would not be there anymore.
How beautiful is the human soul that does not stand to the challeneges of reality but rather crumbles at the face of an imaginary world.
He had succeeded in life and a reminder he served for me. I looked past his message but I could not grasp it. Maybe time would allow me to be him.
Today I found him. He was again at the top of the flight of the stairs. He smiled. He crouched and pulled out a quarter from his pocket. He rolled it down the stairs.
It came to a stop in front of me. Choice.
I looked up and he was gone.
I came back tomorrow, and there was no man to be found.
I went up the stairs and looked down.
I just rolled the coin down.
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Submitted by joedaddy (user info) at 2005-05-17 03:12:50 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
I'm going up 1 notch on this
Submitted by hairjr (user info) at 2005-05-14 09:58:25 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
-2 die?
Submitted by hairjr (user info) at 2005-05-14 09:57:32 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
+2 pie?
Submitted by ICO (user info) at 2005-05-14 08:32:13 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
I'd really like to have a cd-key from Unreal Tournament.
Submitted by forensicgirl3 (user info) at 2005-05-14 01:13:44 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Why does this remind me of David Bowie's The Man Who Sold The World?
Trippy!
Submitted by joedaddy (user info) at 2005-05-14 01:10:17 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
No Comment
Submitted by Socialist_Joe (user info) at 2005-05-14 00:47:49 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
you need a drink more than i
Submitted by BillsSBChamps (user info) at 2005-05-14 00:33:13 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
First one was better.