Alter revealed..............wtf is all this alter crap (365 hits)
Category: Quotes & Stories -> PoetryRating: -0.75 on 6 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by Twiddle is raping your friendly neighborhood spiderman! (View user info) at 2005-06-02 03:58:01 EDT
I am not an alter and this proves it.
The days pass incredibly slow
I mope around and go with the flow
My former years passed with a glance
My childhood, was it? happenstance
All my life I wanted to be grown
Here I am at last, My works shown
Why am I left wanting in life
Bumbling around like a two-bit Barney Fife
The path lay before me clear as a bell
I wavered once, took a chance, fell
Time is a bandit robbing my years
Love is my vice, bringing me tears
You can't force a tree to grow
Expecting love is a folly, I know
The heart leads through the troubled way
The mind revolts, it makes you sway
A perfect balance of lies and deceit
told to you by a daring feat
Live to a hundred years old
Never to learn, have to be told
Of the secrets of life, things of storied tales
Failing to see the truth never fails
Hide your deeds and hide them well
Eventually someone will uncover your veil
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Submitted by Twiddle (user info) at 2005-06-02 06:14:37 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
and superman's dead or at least not a parpalegic anymore
Submitted by pen_name (user info) at 2005-06-02 04:09:03 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
bizarro prophet?
in his world, the sky is down and the earth is up...he breathes water and swims in air...his head is his ass and his ass is his head.
his dog's name is pongo. eh...
the end
Submitted by joedaddy (user info) at 2005-06-02 04:04:49 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
I always thought an alter was a nonspeific shit, independent of geography.
But I could be wrong.
Submitted by tinactin (user info) at 2005-06-02 03:59:48 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Good enough for me, Ace.
Submitted by Twiddle (user info) at 2005-06-02 03:59:28 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
this is my pic see im not an alter
Submitted by thorpe (user info) at 2005-06-02 03:59:03 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
Poor friendly neighbourhood spiderman.