Fallen (427 hits)
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Submitted by seduce.a.stranger (View user info) at 2005-06-22 14:52:57 EDT
The first time had happened so quickly. They met at a party, hit it off, spent the whole time there flirting. Afterwards, she brought him home. They laid close in bed afterwards, she ran her fingernails lightly down his back. He told her that that was his secret turn-on, it made him almost non-functioning. A little while later she fell asleep in his arms, secure and safe.
When she woke up the next morning he was gone. He left her a sweet little note, though, and she was almost caught up in the thought that he might just have liked her.
A few times later, he was in her room again. This time, they'd been at separate parties, but had agreed to meet up afterwards. This time, after they'd finished, she looked up at him. He always stared at her like that, like he could see right past her careful make-up and put-together persona. He would tell her how she wore her emotions right on her face, and ask her what she was thinking. She never really told him, though. She knew he wouldn't really care in the morning, and those deep pretty eyes were little more than fences, something designed to make you feel safe, but when it comes down to it, anyone can hop right over.
The next morning he was gone again. He left her promises that he'd visit later. She caught herself falling for him again, but stopped. She wouldn't let herself fall for another drunken lover.
The last time, everything stayed so clearly in her memory. This time he took her back to his place. He held her hand as they walked through the parking lot, up his steps, through his door. They walked back to his room, dark, his soft brown comforter inviting on his bed. He walked out for a minute, had to answer the phone. When he returned, he took off her jacket slowly, kissing her deeply, the kind of kiss that only two people in only one moment can share. No one else would ever have that kiss with him. He pulled her back to the bed with him, sitting on the edge and pulling her on top. Afterwards, they talked. They'd never really had much conversation before, and it was beautiful, the way their words flowed together. Musical, the way everything fell into place. He looked down at her, worried. She was shaking a bit, maybe just from all the emotion rushing her body. He told her how protective he felt of her, how he just wanted to take care of her. She fell asleep that night knowing that what she'd felt all along couldn't be stopped. She loved him, and couldn't prevent her foolishness.
But it was the last time. She'd see him once more, having finally fallen for him. He turned her away, told her he couldn't commit. Her heart shattered like a vase competing with a hammer. And she knew that was the way it would be, always. She wasn't meant for happiness and love. She would always be alone.
But she would always love him.
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Submitted by seduce.a.stranger (user info) at 2005-06-22 20:28:16 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
While I'm not a pussy, I do have one, thanks.
Not "queer" either.
I know this story wasn't as good as some of my others. It's just something that's been on my mind for a while, so it came out, not as well as I'd hoped.
Sorry for the failure.
Submitted by c1ndy (user info) at 2005-06-22 17:04:13 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
not bad
Submitted by ProgramGeek (user info) at 2005-06-22 16:56:34 EDT (#)
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You queer or something? Whatever have a 0 for being a pussy.
Submitted by Xcuses (user info) at 2005-06-22 16:35:18 EDT (#)
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Submitted by Dead_0hi0_Sky (user info) at 2005-06-22 15:36:40 (#)
Ranking: -1
wtf? no cowbell? oh fuck this shit!
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more cowbell please
Submitted by Jeanneee (user info) at 2005-06-22 16:27:20 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
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Submitted by Dead_0hi0_Sky (user info) at 2005-06-22 15:36:40 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
wtf? no cowbell? oh fuck this shit!
Submitted by Xcuses (user info) at 2005-06-22 15:33:02 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Lov'em and leav'em I always say
Submitted by JonnyX (user info) at 2005-06-22 15:31:04 EDT (#)
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you forgot to include the part where she bent over and grabbed her ankles, so ManRoot could slam his beefstick into her bajiner from behind...
Submitted by Deidra (user info) at 2005-06-22 15:19:08 EDT (#)
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Submitted by swamp_donkey (user info) at 2005-06-22 14:54:49 EDT (#)
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GO COUNT YOUR DICK!